Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....:Miscellaneous Shayri

Amarjeet Kaur

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kora kaagaj tha ye dil, jab us zalim ko dia ....
Us dil ke ANPAD ne na iska kuch karna tha, na kiya.

Pyaar ki bhaasha hi kahaan aati thi use, jo is per likhta...
Tod marod ke khela iske saath aur phir koodedaan ke hawaale kiya.

Per hum dheeth bhi kahaan maan ne wale the...
humne bhi is dil ke fate kaagaj ko 'recycling' ke lie dia...

thoda 'rough' hi sahi, per phir isko kuch likhe jaane laayak banaaya...
is tarah zindgi ko ek aur mauka dia..

Himmat nahi haari aakhir tak is dil-e-barbaad ne,'Amar'
aur us koodedaan ko hi apni taqdeer maan, zaher ka ghoont nahi pia...


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soudagar

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2012, 03:24:25 AM »

Bahut khub likha aapne amarjeet ji.......very nice.


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Amarjeet Kaur

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2012, 03:27:55 AM »

Thankyou...Saudagar ji


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Sanjeev kash

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2012, 03:29:43 AM »

Nice


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Amarjeet Kaur

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2012, 03:34:39 AM »

shukriya...kaash ji


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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2012, 03:52:49 AM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Amarjeet Kaur

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2012, 05:22:19 AM »

Shulriya....Dr. Saini


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mkv

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2012, 05:35:09 AM »

Bahut khoob amarjeet jee
Accha likha hai aapne
par mazahiya andaaj bhi bharpoor hai
likhte rahiye Applause


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pankajwfs

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2012, 06:22:08 AM »

Quote from: Amarjeet Kaur on July 19, 2012, 03:04:44 AM

bahut khoob amarjeet ji


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Amarjeet Kaur

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2012, 06:33:29 AM »

Quote from: mkv on July 19, 2012, 05:35:09 AM

Bahut khoob amarjeet jee
Accha likha hai aapne
par mazahiya andaaj bhi bharpoor hai
likhte rahiye Applause

Quote from: mkv on July 19, 2012, 05:35:09 AM

Bahut khoob amarjeet jee
Accha likha hai aapne
par mazahiya andaaj bhi bharpoor hai
likhte rahiye Applause

Shukriya mkv ji...
Main bhi pehle kash m kash main thi ke ise post karoon ya nahi....
mujhe ye kaafi bachkaana sa laga...
per dil ke safar main aur kaagaj ke safar main mujjhe kaafi resemblance lagi so likh dia...
ab likh dia tha to apne tak rakhna bhi acha nahi laga...
thanx fr understanding this strange....writing


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Amarjeet Kaur

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Re: Dil ke kaagaj ka safar....

«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2012, 06:37:58 AM »

Bahut shukriya...pankaj ji


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