dil ki der o diwaar

by jeet jainam on March 25, 2014, 09:37:57 AM
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dil ki der o diwaar par naam tha jiska,
koi puche na uske baare har nishaa,n mitta chale,

usne hamaari khwaahisheN pairoN tal'e rauNd di
har ik razaa pe jiski hum gardan jhukaa chale,

haathoN ki lakeeroN ki wbajaa jaan kar chup huN
kismat meiN hai liKhaa jo uspe zor kiya chale ,

nakaam hasratoN ko bhulaane kahaaN jaate
nikle teri galii se jaam-e-maikadaa chale,

"jeet" yuN Gham-e-yaar tu seene meiN cHupa le
chehra bhi gar koi paDhe , kuch na pataa chale,


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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2014, 10:58:02 AM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause
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nakaam hasratoN ko bhulaane kahaaN jaate
nikle teri galii se jaam-e-maikadaa chale,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2014, 01:17:22 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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usne hamaari khwaahisheN pairoN tal'e
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har ik razaa pe jiski hum gardan jhukaa
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Kya baat kya kehne!
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"jeet" yuN Gham-e-yaar tu seene meiN cHupa le
chehra bhi gar koi paDhe , kuch na pataa chale,

Waaaaaaaaaaaah kya kehne jeet ji... yeh sher bahut pasand aaya... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad qubool kare...
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shukriya aqsh ji,ap sab ki dua sath hai main ek din apne mukaam par pahuch hi jaunga
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