Dil ki khoobsurti

by tamanna.pt on July 10, 2010, 06:17:18 AM
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  Hello doston ,bahut dino baad kuch koshish kar rahi hoon umeed hai pasand aayegi. Jaisa ki subject se samajh hi gay honge, isme inner beauty k baare me likha gaya hai baaki to meri baat kitni aapke dilon tak pahuchi pata lag hi jayega.  Usual Smile


                   Khoobi dil ki aankhon me utar aati hai,
                   Padhe nigaah jo usko hi nazar aati hai.
 
                   Chehre me jo dekhoge to kaise bhala paoge,
                   Kab baat koi khat ki lifaafe pe nazar aati hai.

                   Hunar kisi ka bhi bahar se kahan dikhta hai,
                   Dava kadvi bhi ho khane se asar laati hai.

                   Wahi dikhta hai jo dekhna tum chahoge,
                   Bhukhe bachhe ko chaand bhi roti si nazar aati hai.

                   Ek saath zameen ka hai jo hardam hi rahega,
                   Har imaarat haseen ek din to bikhar jaati hai.


                       ----Tamanna----
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2010, 06:30:23 AM »
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sahi kaha hai ji

aapne aapke ye shabd kahin se bhi galat nahi hai

but ek baat bolen


lifafa dekh kar khat ka majmun bhanp lete hai
ham to wo shikari hai jo udty panchi ka par naaap lete hai

nm. for any one who make dis
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2010, 07:24:17 AM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on July 10, 2010, 06:17:18 AM
  Hello doston ,bahut dino baad kuch koshish kar rahi hoon umeed hai pasand aayegi. Jaisa ki subject se samajh hi gay honge, isme inner beauty k baare me likha gaya hai baaki to meri baat kitni aapke dilon tak pahuchi pata lag hi jayega.  Usual Smile


                   Khoobi dil ki aankhon me utar aati hai,
                   Padhe nigaah jo usko hi nazar aati hai.
 
                   Chehre me jo dekhoge to kaise bhala paoge,
                   Kab baat koi khat ki lifaafe pe nazar aati hai.

                   Hunar kisi ka bhi bahar se kahan dikhta hai,
                   Dava kadvi bhi ho khane se asar laati hai.

                   Wahi dikhta hai jo dekhna tum chahoge,
                   Bhukhe bachhe ko chaand bhi roti si nazar aati hai.

                   Ek saath zameen ka hai jo hardam hi rahega,
                   Har imaarat haseen ek din to bikhar jaati hai.


                       ----Tamanna----

kya khoob likha hai tamanna jee dil se daad kubul karen
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2010, 07:43:03 AM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on July 10, 2010, 06:17:18 AM
  Hello doston ,bahut dino baad kuch koshish kar rahi hoon umeed hai pasand aayegi. Jaisa ki subject se samajh hi gay honge, isme inner beauty k baare me likha gaya hai baaki to meri baat kitni aapke dilon tak pahuchi pata lag hi jayega.  Usual Smile


                   Khoobi dil ki aankhon me utar aati hai,
                   Padhe nigaah jo usko hi nazar aati hai.
 
                   Chehre me jo dekhoge to kaise bhala paoge,
                   Kab baat koi khat ki lifaafe pe nazar aati hai.

                   Hunar kisi ka bhi bahar se kahan dikhta hai,
                   Dava kadvi bhi ho khane se asar laati hai.

                   Wahi dikhta hai jo dekhna tum chahoge,
                   Bhukhe bachhe ko chaand bhi roti si nazar aati hai.

                   Ek saath zameen ka hai jo hardam hi rahega,
                   Har imaarat haseen ek din to bikhar jaati hai.


                       ----Tamanna----

Its Too Good......Tamanna Ji ! very nice creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi behtar koshish ke saath aate rahen...khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2010, 10:52:38 AM »
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pata nahi kya likha hai aapne kuch samajh nahi aaya... ek shabd samajh nahi aaya humein... sach hi kaha aapne ki aapka likha kitna samajh aaya ye to aapko pata chal hi jaayega .. chaliye humne hi bata diya ki kuch samajh nahi aaya... Usual Smile

bura mat maniye main to mazaak kar raha tha. Kahen to main is kavita ki saprasangh vyakhya kar du jo school time me kiya karte the. Bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne. Bahut hi khoob. bahut lambe waqt ke bad aapka likha huwa padhne ka mauka mila. bahut achcha likhte hain aap. yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!

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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2010, 09:57:11 PM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki Tamanna Ji
Kyon na ho, kitna samay lekar likha hai aap ne
Bahut dino baad aap ka kuch padhne ko mila
Bus yun likhte rahiye gayab na hoiye
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2010, 11:38:06 PM »
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Bahut Hi Achchi Koshish Ki Hai Aapne Mamta Ji
Baaki Sab To Thik Hai Bas Yeh Line Kuch Jami Nahi
Khair Mera Maksad Aapka Dil Dukhana Nahi Hai
Bas Jaisa Ki Aapne Uper Likha Hai So Bas Mujhey
Parhke Jo Mehsoos Hua Woh Likh Diya
Gar Meri Baat Buri Lagi Ho Ro Maafi Chaunga.

    Wah Dikhta Hai Jo Dekhna Tum Chahoge
Bhukhe Bachhe Ko Chaand Bhi Roti si Nazar Aati Hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2010, 04:20:48 AM »
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   Kya aap log bhi na, bura na mano laga rakha hai,Holi ka season lagne laga mujhe to k bura na maano holi hai. Are bura maane humare dushman,jo ab tak to koi bana nahi hai.Hum nahi mante bura-wura. Aur meri mamuli si koshish ko pasand karne ka bahut-bahut shukriya humdum ji, waise mera naam tamanna hai, Mamta ji nahi ,par koi gal nai ji aapne kalaam ko pasand farmaaya itna hi kaafi hai or shayad Ghalib uncle ne hi kaha hai k naam me kya rakha hai.Aur jin lines k liy aapne kaha hai usme maine ye kehne ki koshish ki hai k agar humara maqsad kisi me burai nikalna hota hai to hum nikal hi lete hai or isi tarah agar humaara maqsad kisi k dil me achhai dhundhna hota hai to hum kisi na kisi tarah dhoond hi lete hai. Jaise bhukhe bachhe ka maqsad us waqt bhukh mitaana hai jo roti se mitegi isliy wo chaand me bhi roti ko dhoond leta hai.Par lagta hai k main apne khayal ko thik tareeqe se likhne me kaamyaab nahi hui hoon,uske liy maafi chahti hoon,aage se or bhi achhe se koshish karungi.Par plz is galti k liy mujhe bandar,bhaalu mat banayega shraap dekar. Giggle . Humesha khush rahein or yu hi meri koshish me apna saath banay rakhein.   
Quote from: HUM_DUM on July 10, 2010, 11:38:06 PM
Bahut Hi Achchi Koshish Ki Hai Aapne Mamta Ji
Baaki Sab To Thik Hai Bas Yeh Line Kuch Jami Nahi
Khair Mera Maksad Aapka Dil Dukhana Nahi Hai
Bas Jaisa Ki Aapne Uper Likha Hai So Bas Mujhey
Parhke Jo Mehsoos Hua Woh Likh Diya
Gar Meri Baat Buri Lagi Ho Ro Maafi Chaunga.

    Wah Dikhta Hai Jo Dekhna Tum Chahoge
Bhukhe Bachhe Ko Chaand Bhi Roti si Nazar Aati Hai
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2010, 04:40:32 AM »
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 Meri koshish ko pasand karne ka shukriya Raahi ji, Or ye to bahut achhi baat hai k aapme ye hunar hai. Rab ji mujhko, aapko, hum sabko ye hunar or nazar bakshein yahi dua hai. Usual Smile
Quote from: Rahi2001 on July 10, 2010, 06:30:23 AM
sahi kaha hai ji

aapne aapke ye shabd kahin se bhi galat nahi hai

but ek baat bolen


lifafa dekh kar khat ka majmun bhanp lete hai
ham to wo shikari hai jo udty panchi ka par naaap lete hai

nm. for any one who make dis
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2010, 04:45:10 AM »
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 Thank u so much Ishq ji. Aapne kalaam ko pasand farmaaya bahut khushi hui.
Quote from: ishk ek ibadat on July 10, 2010, 07:24:17 AM
kya khoob likha hai tamanna jee dil se daad kubul karen
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2010, 04:47:49 AM »
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 Bahut bahut shukriya Naresh ji, apna saath yu hi banay rakhein.
Quote from: Anshumali on July 10, 2010, 07:43:03 AM
Its Too Good......Tamanna Ji ! very nice creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi behtar koshish ke saath aate rahen...khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2010, 04:52:41 AM »
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 Matlab humari lambai badhne waali hai,aapne humari khichai karna jo shuru kar di hai par maza aaya hume.Aur humesha saath dene k liy bahut-bahut shukriya Kapil ji.
Quote from: klaskar on July 10, 2010, 10:52:38 AM
pata nahi kya likha hai aapne kuch samajh nahi aaya... ek shabd samajh nahi aaya humein... sach hi kaha aapne ki aapka likha kitna samajh aaya ye to aapko pata chal hi jaayega .. chaliye humne hi bata diya ki kuch samajh nahi aaya... Usual Smile

bura mat maniye main to mazaak kar raha tha. Kahen to main is kavita ki saprasangh vyakhya kar du jo school time me kiya karte the. Bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne. Bahut hi khoob. bahut lambe waqt ke bad aapka likha huwa padhne ka mauka mila. bahut achcha likhte hain aap. yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2010, 05:23:45 AM »
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 Thank you so much Rajesh ji, Khushi hui aapko pasand aaya.
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 10, 2010, 09:57:11 PM
Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki Tamanna Ji
Kyon na ho, kitna samay lekar likha hai aap ne
Bahut dino baad aap ka kuch padhne ko mila
Bus yun likhte rahiye gayab na hoiye
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2010, 11:10:30 AM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on July 10, 2010, 06:17:18 AM
  Hello doston ,bahut dino baad kuch koshish kar rahi hoon umeed hai pasand aayegi. Jaisa ki subject se samajh hi gay honge, isme inner beauty k baare me likha gaya hai baaki to meri baat kitni aapke dilon tak pahuchi pata lag hi jayega.  Usual Smile


                   Khoobi dil ki aankhon me utar aati hai,
                   Padhe nigaah jo usko hi nazar aati hai.
 
                   Chehre me jo dekhoge to kaise bhala paoge,
                   Kab baat koi khat ki lifaafe pe nazar aati hai.

                   Hunar kisi ka bhi bahar se kahan dikhta hai,
                   Dava kadvi bhi ho khane se asar laati hai.

                   Wahi dikhta hai jo dekhna tum chahoge,
                   Bhukhe bachhe ko chaand bhi roti si nazar aati hai.

                   Ek saath zameen ka hai jo hardam hi rahega,
                   Har imaarat haseen ek din to bikhar jaati hai.


                       ----Tamanna----

Bahut bahut Khoob Tamannaji..

bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Ek baat!!!! Tamannaji,Mujhe Aapke Yeh Khush-Mizaazi ka Andaaz Bahut Acha Lagta hai..Khuda Kare Aap Humesha Yuhi Khush Rahe icon_flower..
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2010, 11:16:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob tamanna ji.
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