~*~ Dil ki suna karo ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on December 30, 2011, 06:38:16 PM
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Kuch naseeb toh kuch hum chunn jate hai,
Dil se na ho toh rishte azab-e-zindagi ban jate hai..

Zindagi ka suraj roshan ho, toh sab puchte hai,
Ghurbat kay daur main, kayi rishte dhal jate hai..

‘aisa nahin karunga toh usse bura lag jaega’,
Najane aj bhi log aisi soch kaise rakh jate hai..

Acche bartav se banjaega mera woh apna,
Hai nadan insaan tu mere yaar,
Kuch log dhooriyon pe reh, sanson main bass jate hai..

Do pal ki zindagani hai, ek baar hi milni hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main, aksar hum yeh bhool jate hai..

‘Khamosh’ ki soch ko batamizi ka naam diya jata hai,
Hum toh bas dil ki raah par, dil ki kahi kar jate hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: December 30, 2011, 07:02:13 PM »
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Wow.. Kya baat hai rahim bro.. Bahoot hi lajwaab likha hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob . And a nice message.. but yea khambaqt dil itna reham dil kyun hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2011, 09:11:39 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley very good
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«Reply #3 on: December 31, 2011, 09:51:34 AM »
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good
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«Reply #4 on: December 31, 2011, 10:19:33 AM »
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bht bht khoob rahim....
sply 2nd last...
vry nice...
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«Reply #5 on: December 31, 2011, 10:40:27 AM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob Rahim ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2012, 10:17:13 AM »
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Quote from: Nysha on December 30, 2011, 07:02:13 PM
Wow.. Kya baat hai rahim bro.. Bahoot hi lajwaab likha hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob . And a nice message.. but yea khambaqt dil itna reham dil kyun hai Usual Smile
Teh teh dil se shukriya Nysha di..
Haan dil itna reham kyun hai..Kabhi iss par,
likhne ki koshish rahegi insh'Allah..
Naya saal mubarak ho..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: January 01, 2012, 10:17:54 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on December 30, 2011, 07:06:41 PM
bahut khub Rahim bhai...

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab
Teh teh dil se shukriya Bhai..
Naya saal mubarak ho..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: January 01, 2012, 10:21:22 AM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on December 31, 2011, 09:11:39 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley very good
Teh teh dil se shukriya Sunil jee..
Naya saal mubarak..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2012, 10:22:01 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 31, 2011, 09:51:34 AM
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Teh teh dil se shukriya SKSAINI jee..
Naya saal mubarak..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2012, 07:42:09 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on December 31, 2011, 10:19:33 AM
bht bht khoob rahim....
sply 2nd last...
vry nice...
Teh teh dil se shukriya Priya di..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Naya saal mubarak..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2012, 07:43:03 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 31, 2011, 10:40:27 AM
Bahut Bahut khoob Rahim ji

Teh teh dil se shukriya MKV jee..
Bas saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2012, 08:13:29 AM »
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wah dost wah--
ehsaason aur haqeeqat pe dil se likhne me aapki koi shaani nahi--
aap jo kah jaate hain saadgi se bas khud me wo sama jata hai--
itna sacha kaise likh lete ho yar!
itne common words me itni gehri baate bas lajawaab hai--

wese sorry for late reply dear--
naye saal ki bht bht mubarakbad aapko--
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
god bless u
Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2012, 09:22:52 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 04, 2012, 08:13:29 AM
wah dost wah--
ehsaason aur haqeeqat pe dil se likhne me aapki koi shaani nahi--
aap jo kah jaate hain saadgi se bas khud me wo sama jata hai--
itna sacha kaise likh lete ho yar!
itne common words me itni gehri baate bas lajawaab hai--

wese sorry for late reply dear--
naye saal ki bht bht mubarakbad aapko--
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
god bless u
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Dost,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Bas dil se dil ki likhta hoon..
Mager yeh ap sabka pyaar hai jo mujhe parrte ho
aur tariff karte ho..Warna kahan itna acha likh pata hoon main..
Aur late reply ki toh baat hi nahin hai..apne saath diya,
yeh bahaut hai mere liye..
Naya saal apko bhi mubarak ho..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2012, 09:33:11 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooob Dost!!!!!

Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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