---dil ko ek baar aur dhadkaana hoga--- ..KB..

by killbill on January 03, 2011, 09:07:04 AM
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is dil ko ek bar or dhdkana hoga
khaali paimane ko b ab chlkana hoga

dhoke kha chuke bhot mgr aivar dbara krna hoga
jame hue pani me b dhar utha,ab lahron sa lachkana hoga

afsos e zindgi tdpan e dil halat e mnzr ho jesa b
umid ki ek akhri kiran dil me fir se jalana hoga

bite jo pl the suhane,kdwa ek sach tha
tod kr shishe purane darpan naya sajana hoga

pane ki chaht me ji lie bhot,ro lie ji bhar
gairon ke ansuo me ab apna gam bhulana hoga

dekh to zra dikh rha koi spna suhana aye dil-cont
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2011, 09:11:32 AM »
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dekh to zara dikh raha koi sapna suhana, aye dil
kuch aise hi haseen khab inn ankhon ko fir se ab dikhana hoga

ab na koi khwahish na gila na sikwa koi
hothon par muskaan , dil me khuda aur haathon me duawon ko ab basana hoga
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--ye itna baaki rah gaya tha
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2011, 09:30:21 AM »
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superbbbbbb 1 KB........bht achhci lagi aapki ye peshkash mujhe..yunhi likhte rahiye ji......
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2011, 09:33:01 AM »
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wah.. bahut badiya kbji..

bahut khoob

bahut bahut daad kubool karen
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2011, 09:35:19 AM »
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sukriya Kasak --
sukriya Manjum ji--$apna waqt dene ke liye.
hausala afzai ka behad sukriya
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2011, 11:33:37 AM »
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well done kb ji.....
bht bht khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2011, 11:50:51 AM »
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Tumhaare kalaam ko phir se ek baar padhna hoga
Kitni gehri keh di hai baat tumne samajhna hoga
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2011, 12:51:27 PM »
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bahut achhe kilbilji...
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2011, 01:26:30 PM »
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samajh lo Kukku ji samajh lo..
jab samajh jao to defination idhar bhi chispa dena:)Usual Smile
wese sukriya ji padhne ke liye.
dhanyabaad Priya ji.
sukriya Theyash ji--
hausala badhate rahiye.
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2011, 04:07:52 PM »
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Bahut khoob kill bill ji per mujhe laga ki abhi bhi apki kavita adhuri hai shayad,agar main galat hu tou maafi chahungi...
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«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2011, 04:23:20 PM »
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hmm Geeta ji---
kya khoob andaaza hai apka.
bilkul sahi.
haan kuch lines aur bhi hain iske jo main laga nahi paya.
sukriya aapka Geeta ji.
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2011, 03:47:17 AM »
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jhakashhhhhhhh
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2011, 08:28:25 AM »
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Bahut Khub Killbill JI
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