~*~ Dilbaar sabke paas hota hai ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on April 22, 2011, 05:57:15 AM
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Dusron ko kuchal kar banaya ho jisne jahan apna,
Dil ki nazar mein woh insaan bhi chota zaroor hai..

Lakh koshishein karle mager yeh niyam hai qainat ka,
Jo paya ya kamaya; woh sab insaan khota zaroor hai..

Jo daulat kamane kay liye jeeta hai yahan ‘Khamosh’,
Woh jism se nahin mager mann se hojata mota zaroor hai..

Jo shaks sabab bane logon kay honthon par muskurahat ka,
Woh shaks bhi raaton ko tanhai main chupkar rota zaroor hai..

Khuda ki jitni tareef kare bas kam hi lagti hai 'Khamosh',
Neend bhi kitni ajeeb cheez banayi hai usne kay chahe insaan,
Dinn main toot jaye mager raaton ko sab bhool kar sota zaroor hai..

Lakh mushkilein sahi mager ek jo tu hai saath toh sab kuch hai,
‘Khamosh’ kay paas toh nahin aisa koi khaas shaks zindagi main,
Mager yahan sabhi kay paas aisa koi dilbaar hota zaroor hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2011, 06:12:00 AM »
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very very very good Rahimji
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2011, 06:48:09 AM »
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ek khamosh dil hi itni feelings ke sath likh sakta he ........

bahot hi khoobsurat likha he apne rahim ji..........behtareen peshkash he...........congrats.....
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2011, 06:52:33 AM »
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Dusron ko kuchal kar banaya ho jisne jahan apna,
Dil ki nazar mein woh insaan bhi chota zaroor hai..

Lakh koshishein karle mager yeh niyam hai qainat ka,
Jo paya ya kamaya; woh sab insaan khota zaroor hai..

Jo daulat kamane kay liye jeeta hai yahan ‘Khamosh’,
Woh jism se nahin mager mann se hojata mota zaroor hai..

Jo shaks sabab bane logon kay honthon par muskurahat ka,
Woh shaks bhi raaton ko tanhai main chupkar rota zaroor hai..

Khuda ki jitni tareef kare bas kam hi lagti hai 'Khamosh',
Neend bhi kitni ajeeb cheez banayi hai usne kay chahe insaan,
Dinn main toot jaye mager raaton ko sab bhool kar sota zaroor hai..

Lakh mushkilein sahi mager ek jo tu hai saath toh sab kuch hai,
‘Khamosh’ kay paas toh nahin aisa koi khaas shaks zindagi main,
Mager yahan sabhi kay paas aisa koi dilbaar hota zaroor hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2011, 07:14:24 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob Bhai Rahim!!!

Beautiful Emotions Put Into Words.....

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Mere Dost..

Saral Lafzon Mein Gehri Baatein Keh Gaye Aap

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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2011, 09:16:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob rahim dua hai rab se ki jald hi tumhe bhi ek khubsurat dilbar mile aur hamein tumhare mhbt mein doobe lafz jald hi padhne ko mile...ameen...khush raho take care.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2011, 09:48:59 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2011, 10:17:58 AM »
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bahut khub rahimji....  umda....

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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2011, 01:39:36 PM »
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wah dost……
dil ki likh daali aapne
dil se daad…

yun to poori kalaam jabrdast haqiqat hai magar……
hame to 4th para bht sateek lagi…

khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2011, 02:43:17 PM »
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very very very good Rahimji
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Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Tamnna jee..
Khush rahiye..!

bahut khub rahimji....  umda....

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Shukriya Manju jee..
Khush rahiye..!

Nice
Shukriya shukriya Hina jee..
Khush rahiye..!

GD ONE
Shukriya Manoj jee..
Khush rahiye..!

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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2011, 02:47:50 PM »
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wah dost……
dil ki likh daali aapne
dil se daad…

yun to poori kalaam jabrdast haqiqat hai magar……
hame to 4th para bht sateek lagi…

khus rahiye
sukriya
Teh teh dil se shukriya Killbill dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut khoob rahim dua hai rab se ki jald hi tumhe bhi ek khubsurat dilbar mile aur hamein tumhare mhbt mein doobe lafz jald hi padhne ko mile...ameen...khush raho take care.. Usual Smile
Di, apka teh dil se shukriya..
Main kahunga kay yeh hasrat hai kayi logon ki kay
Rahim ko mohobat par parre..Sach bolun toh uss taraf dil jata
hi nahin toh kalam kaise jayegi..haan ager insh'Allah zindagi ne
koi diya, toh zarur mohobat par likhunga..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2011, 02:51:58 PM »
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ek khamosh dil hi itni feelings ke sath likh sakta he ........

bahot hi khoobsurat likha he apne rahim ji..........behtareen peshkash he...........congrats.....
Utkarsh bhai,
apka teh teh dil se shukriya kay apne lavzon ko
nahin, ehsaason ko parra..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob Bhai Rahim!!!

Beautiful Emotions Put Into Words.....

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Mere Dost..

Saral Lafzon Mein Gehri Baatein Keh Gaye Aap

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Hamesha saath dene kay liye, apka
teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
My all time brother, friend and poet..
Shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2011, 04:51:05 PM »
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Aapney To Humara Naam Hi Badal Diya Embarrased


Shukriya shukriya Hina jee..
Khush rahiye..

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«Reply #13 on: April 22, 2011, 09:01:54 PM »
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Shukriya Rahim Bhai
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2011, 06:15:12 AM »
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bht bht khoob rahim....
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