**Dilon ki ehmiat** By Rahim

by dead heart on March 31, 2010, 07:38:42 PM
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Dilon ki ehmiat ager log samajne lag jate log..
Toh shayad aj Rahim tanha nahin hota!

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 08:43:39 PM »
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Sach kaha Rahim bhai... bahut badi sachchai hai... !!!

log samajh k bhi samajhna nahi chahte hain... aur jaane anjaane me dil tod jaate hain... main likhta hoon ... bahut logo k posts pe replies likhta hoon.. par jaane kya ho jaata hai jab aapke posts pe reply likhta hoon .. bas keyboard pe ungliyaan chalna shuru hoti hai to band hone ka naam hi nahi leti.. bas likhta jaata hoon...kya likhta hoon mujhe khud bhi nahi pata ... main chahunga ki aap meri ek kavita "Aaj ka din " jaroor padhe. Usme aapko merti kahani ka pata chal jaayega kuch hadd tak...dil hi hai hamara jo humse saare gunaah karwaata hai aur fir hum khud hi apne dil k tootne ka kaaran ban jaate hain... bas aaj aur nahi...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 08:52:22 PM »
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Bahut sach kaha aapne Rahim bhai.great lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2010, 09:23:59 AM »
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Main shukar guzar hoon Kapil dost apka ke ap itni izzat dete hai meri kavitaon ko...InshAllah zaroor parrunga...hmm hum toh bas likte hai dard ko halka karne ke liye...Do lines zehen main hai mere;

Aj likta hoon apne udaas dil ka ghum kam karne ke liye Rahim,
Woh jo yeh ghum kam karta tha khud ghum degaya...
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2010, 09:24:51 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhu di..
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2010, 10:47:57 AM »
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bilkul theek farmaya .par Rahim ka dil bhi to unhen na milne par wo bhi tanha honge zaroor.
Quote from: -Rahim- on March 31, 2010, 07:38:42 PM
Dilon ki ehmiat ager log samajne lag jate log..
Toh shayad aj Rahim tanha nahin hota!

~Rahim~
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2010, 04:24:23 PM »
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Bahut khoob kaha aapne Rahim bhai. Sahi baat hai hum bhi isiliye likhte hain ki apna gham kam kar saken warna likhna hamare bas ki baat kahaan. Aajkal to lagta hai bas likhte rahen...

kal tak mere aansu pochke muskaan jagate the tum,
kal tak meri zindagi ko zindagi banate the tum,
aur aaj jab meri zindagi hi maut ban gayi,
kya batayen jaanam bahut yaad aate ho tum...

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 02, 2010, 09:23:59 AM
Main shukar guzar hoon Kapil dost apka ke ap itni izzat dete hai meri kavitaon ko...InshAllah zaroor parrunga...hmm hum toh bas likte hai dard ko halka karne ke liye...Do lines zehen main hai mere;

Aj likta hoon apne udaas dil ka ghum kam karne ke liye Rahim,
Woh jo yeh ghum kam karta tha khud ghum degaya...
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2010, 10:31:00 AM »
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Shukriya Suresh jee...Shayad woh itni tanha nahin mere bina..mohobat usne nahin maine ki thi..
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2010, 10:31:47 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Kapil dost!! Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2010, 08:40:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 03, 2010, 10:31:47 AM
Bahaut khoob Kapil dost!! Applause
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