Dilon mein safai de...Premdeep

by premdeep on April 07, 2014, 07:07:13 PM
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Dilon mein safai de
khuda apni khudai de

Roshan ho sara jahan
Aisi ek diyasalai de

Wo kheton ki haryali
Gaon wali baraf malai de

Ladkiyon ko thodi azadi
Thodi si hayai de

Tham len har galat haanth
wo mazboot kalai de

Mazloomon ke zakhm par
Rehmat ki dawai de

Nigaah jati jahan tak
Bas tu hi tu dikhai de

Prem ka saagar chalka
Rishton ko gehrai de

Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2014, 07:28:33 PM »
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Bohat Khub!

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Dilon mein safai de
khuda apni khudai de

Mazloomon ke zakhm par
Rehamat ki dawai de

Nigaah jati jahan tak
Bas tu hi tu dikhai de

Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2014, 07:30:20 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on April 07, 2014, 07:07:13 PM
Dilon mein safai de
khuda apni khudai de

Roshan ho sara jahan
Aisi ek diyasalai de

Wo kheton ki haryali
Gaon wali baraf malai de

Ladkiyon ko thodi azadi
Thodi si hayai de

Tham len har galat haanth
wo mazboot kalai de

Mazloomon ke zakhm par
Rehamat ki dawai de

Nigaah jati jahan tak
Bas tu hi tu dikhai de

Prem ka saagar chalka
Rishton ko gehrai de

Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de
boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                arz hai


                             meethe ka shauq bahut hai.
                             sasoor  ek  halvaaee   de.

                             khilana hai tujhe mithaae.
                             toh  phir  ras-malaee  de.

                             padh sake mareez bhee use.
                             doctor ko aisee likhaaee de.

                             beemaar hue insaan ko buss.
                             daulat kee hee davaaee de.

                             husn   de  adaa de  per na.
                             jaan   levaa   angdaaee de.

                             ek adad iss kuvaare ko bhee.
                             padoosee  jaisee lugaaee de.


 Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2014, 07:34:08 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on April 07, 2014, 07:07:13 PM
Dilon mein safai de
khuda apni khudai de

Roshan ho sara jahan
Aisi ek diyasalai de

Wo kheton ki haryali
Gaon wali baraf malai de

Ladkiyon ko thodi azadi
Thodi si hayai de

Tham len har galat haanth
wo mazboot kalai de

Mazloomon ke zakhm par
Rehamat ki dawai de

Nigaah jati jahan tak
Bas tu hi tu dikhai de

Prem ka saagar chalka
Rishton ko gehrai de

Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de


Waah Waah Waah,.....

Kya Kehne..Bahut Bahut Khoooob Premdeep Ji..

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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2014, 08:07:02 PM »
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bahut khoooooooooob
dheron daaad
Ek rau ke saaath
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2014, 08:16:08 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaafi achche lage sabhi ashaar... bahut khooooooooob premdeepji... is khoobsurat peshkash par hazaron dili daad qubool kare...
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2014, 08:41:30 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on April 07, 2014, 07:07:13 PM
Dilon mein safai de
khuda apni khudai de

Roshan ho sara jahan
Aisi ek diyasalai de

Wo kheton ki haryali
Gaon wali baraf malai de

Ladkiyon ko thodi azadi
Thodi si hayai de

Tham len har galat haanth
wo mazboot kalai de

Mazloomon ke zakhm par
Rehmat ki dawai de

Nigaah jati jahan tak
Bas tu hi tu dikhai de

Prem ka saagar chalka
Rishton ko gehrai de

Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de

very good icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2014, 08:51:55 PM »
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BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2014, 09:34:08 PM »
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wah wah wah wah wah wah
behad khoobsurat...
aap ki last lines dil mein uttar gayi..
"Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de"
lajawab...
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2014, 11:25:54 PM »
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Dilon mein safai de
khuda apni khudai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Roshan ho sara jahan
Aisi ek diyasalai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wo kheton ki haryali
Gaon wali baraf malai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ladkiyon ko thodi azadi
Thodi si hayai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Tham len har galat haanth
wo mazboot kalai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Mazloomon ke zakhm par
Rehmat ki dawai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Nigaah jati jahan tak
Bas tu hi tu dikhai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Prem ka saagar chalka
Rishton ko gehrai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah wah bohut hi umda waaahhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2014, 09:05:10 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2014, 02:57:59 PM »
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बहुत खूब....

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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2014, 08:12:19 PM »
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Jo nikle masjid-mandir se
Ek hi awaaj  sunai de

Deep ji bahut bahut acchi creation aapki ..kaash aisa sambhav ho paaye Usual Smile
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