Diwali tere sang guzarti to achcha tha.!!

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on November 03, 2013, 08:09:13 PM
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Ye shaam  tere sang guzar  jaati achcha tha.!
Diwaali  tere  sang man sakti to achcha tha.!!

Main  chalta  Dipak ki thali le saath-saath.!
Tu sjati mere Ghar-Aangan ko to  achcha tha.!!

Har Patakha tere aane  ki khushi byan karta.!
Chahk kar sma khubsurat bnati to achcha tha.!!

Yun to mithaai  mithee bahut hoti hai sanam.!
Tere aane se chastni bad jati to achcha tha.!!
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2013, 08:12:21 PM »
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Loveelllyyy...
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2013, 08:20:39 PM »
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just beautiful
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2013, 08:50:21 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on November 03, 2013, 08:09:13 PM
Ye shaam  tere sang guzar  jaati achcha tha.!
Diwaali  tere  sang man sakti to achcha tha.!!

Main  chalta  Dipak ki thali le saath-saath.!
Tu sjati mere Ghar-Aangan ko to  achcha tha.!!

Har Patakha tere aane  ki khushi byan karta.!
Chahk kar sma khubsurat bnati to achcha tha.!!

Yun to mithaai  mithee bahut hoti hai sanam.!
Tere aane se chastni bad jati to achcha tha.!!



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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2013, 09:24:13 PM »
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Don't be sad..
Koi to apke intjar me hoga ji..
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2013, 10:08:38 PM »
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bahot khooob, dheron daaad...
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2013, 11:41:47 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Ravinder jee

Ye shaam  tere sang guzar  jaati achcha tha.!
Diwaali  tere  sang man sakti to achcha tha.!!
very touching lines.

Afsos.......but who cares..
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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2013, 12:03:02 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2013, 04:39:42 AM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 03, 2013, 08:12:21 PM
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«Reply #10 on: November 04, 2013, 04:43:52 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 03, 2013, 08:20:39 PM
just beautiful
Thanks,Sir.
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«Reply #12 on: November 04, 2013, 05:00:50 AM »
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Quote from: Saavan on November 03, 2013, 09:24:13 PM
Don't be sad..
Koi to apke intjar me hoga ji..
Ok.
But Thanks.
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