Diyaa mere hee dar kaa bujhtaa hai...........Mamta Bajpai

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Khushq hothoN pe pyaas baaqee hai
bekhabar aaj kyuN tu saaqee hai

tere dar pe mai kyuN naa sazdaa karooN
kuchh meraa bhee hisaab baaqee hai

fitrat-e-aab hai meree hastee
sabkaa ho jaaye sabme raazee hai

diyaa mere hee dar kaa bujhtaa hai
ye hawaaoN kee jaalsaazee hai

aab-e-zamzam bhee pee liyaa ab to
tishnagee lab pe phir kyuN taaree hai

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2011, 09:47:51 AM »
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mamtaji,khubsurat ghazal.inn ashaar per dohri daad.Hasan

Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 20, 2011, 09:24:36 AM

fitrat-e-aab hai meree hastee
sabkaa ho jaaye sabme raazee hai

diyaa mere hee dar kaa bujhtaa hai
ye hawaaoN kee jaalsaazee hai
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2011, 09:53:31 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 20, 2011, 09:24:36 AM
Khushq hothoN pe pyaas baaqee hai
bekhabar aaj kyuN tu saaqee hai

tere dar pe mai kyuN naa sazdaa karooN
kuchh meraa bhee hisaab baaqee hai

fitrat-e-aab hai meree hastee
sabkaa ho jaaye sabme raazee hai

diyaa mere hee dar kaa bujhtaa hai
ye hawaaoN kee jaalsaazee hai

jaam-e-jamjam bhee pee liyaa ab to
tishnagee lab pe phir kyuN taaree hai

Mamta Bajpai

  mamta ji kalaam acha hai.per aakhri sher pe mujhe aitraaz hai. aap bura na maane..... meharbaani kar ke  aab-e-zamzam  likhein kyon ki zamzam ek pakiza paani hai jaam nahin hai.

shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2011, 11:32:14 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2011, 04:31:40 PM »
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meri ghalti kee or saaf saaf ishaaraa kar ke Shebaa jee aap ne mujh par ahsaan kiyaa ....ye bhool anjaane me hui maafee chaahatee hoon......
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2011, 04:57:42 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Mamta ji
Aap log urdu ke acche jaankaar hai.isse mera bhi improvement ho jata hai..
Ye kalaam pahle se behtar hai.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2011, 05:30:54 PM »
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"tere dar pe mai kyuN naa sazdaa karooN
 kuchh meraa bhee hisaab baaqee hai"
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"fitrat-e-aab hai meree hastee
 sabkaa ho jaaye sabme raazee hai
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अच्छे शे'र | बधाई | शुभकामनायें |
-अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2011, 08:01:23 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Behad khub aur umdaa gazal kahi hai aapne..
Sabhi sher khub rahe aur achchi rawaani meiN
rahe.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile     
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2011, 09:26:13 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2011, 10:28:58 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley har lafz asardaar hai ,,,mamta ji..bahut hi gahri samajh aur soch ka natiza hai ...har sher par daad ki haqdaar hain aap ..kabul famrmayein aur kalam se aise hi ,,,lafz ugalti rahien ...khuda hafiz
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2011, 10:46:53 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 20, 2011, 09:24:36 AM
Khushq hothoN pe pyaas baaqee hai
bekhabar aaj kyuN tu saaqee hai

tere dar pe mai kyuN naa sazdaa karooN
kuchh meraa bhee hisaab baaqee hai

fitrat-e-aab hai meree hastee
sabkaa ho jaaye sabme raazee hai

diyaa mere hee dar kaa bujhtaa hai
ye hawaaoN kee jaalsaazee hai

aab-e-zamzam bhee pee liyaa ab to
tishnagee lab pe phir kyuN taaree hai

Mamta Bajpai


bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2011, 12:49:03 PM »
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BAhut Khub Mamta Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2011, 02:14:39 PM »
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Shukriya Sanjeev jee!
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2011, 02:15:33 PM »
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Adil jee aap kee taaliyon aur housla afzai kaa behad shukriya.....
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2011, 02:17:22 PM »
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Siddiqui  jee gazal ko saraahane kaa behad shukriyaa....
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