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                              apni  her  ebaadat , aadat  ban jaaye!
                              her jadd-o-jehad shahaadat ban jaaye!!


                             jawaani  kuch  iss tarah se  khile apni.
                              ghazal  ek-ek   sharaafat   ban   jaaye!


                             hai gar  pyaar  ek  nemat to yaa khudaa.
                              meri mohabbat kisi ki amaanat ban jaaye!

                              huaa  rishta insaaniyat kaa jaanwar aaj.
                              dar hai kahin naa ye qayaamat ban jaaye!

                              jalanaa toofaa.n mein shamaa ko hamesha.
                              andhere  ki ye  naa  hemaaqat ban jaaye!

                              mehfil-e-rind  mein  janaa sheba   kaa!
                              saaghar-o-jaam se naa rafaaqat ban jaaye!!
                              
                              
                            

                              

                              

                              
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2015, 01:39:15 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2015, 06:06:23 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2015, 09:03:35 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2015, 04:01:33 PM »
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                              apni  her  ebaadat , aadat  ban jaaye!
                              her jadd-o-jehad shahaadat ban jaaye!!


                              jawaani  kuch  iss tarah se  khile apni.
                              ghazal  ek-ek   sharaafat   ban   jaaye!


                              hai gar  pyaar  ek  nemat to yaa khudaa.
                              meri mohabbat kisi ki amaanat ban jaaye!

                              huaa  rishta insaaniyat kaa jaanwar aaj.
                              dar hai kahin naa ye qayaamat ban jaaye!

                              jalanaa toofaa.n mein shamaa ko hamesha.
                              andhere  ki ye  naa  hemaaqat ban jaaye!

                              mehfil-e-rind  mein  janaa sheba   kaa!
                              saaghar-o-jaam se naa rafaaqat ban jaaye!!
                             
                             
                             

                             

                             

                             



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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2015, 04:58:21 PM »
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behad umda peshkash waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2015, 02:23:27 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2015, 05:07:06 PM »
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                              apni  her  ebaadat , aadat  ban jaaye!
                              her jadd-o-jehad shahaadat ban jaaye!!

***********************waaaaaaaaah dil ki gahraiyo'n se ki gayi ibadat zaroor aadat banti hai
                             jawaani  kuch  iss tarah se  khile apni.
                              ghazal  ek-ek   sharaafat   ban   jaaye!

************jawani hoti hi hai khilne ke liye , bahut umda sher kaha hai

                             hai gar  pyaar  ek  nemat to yaa khudaa.
                              meri mohabbat kisi ki amaanat ban jaaye!
************** mohabbat ko bataur amanat mahfooz kiya hai, kiya baat hai, bahut umdaaaa

                              huaa  rishta insaaniyat kaa jaanwar aaj.
                              dar hai kahin naa ye qayaamat ban jaaye!
************* jo halaat chalrahe hain unke pesh e nazar qayamat banna laazmi hai, lekin aapkaa tasawwur qabil e tareef hai
                              jalanaa toofaa.n mein shamaa ko hamesha.
                              andhere  ki ye  naa  hemaaqat ban jaaye!
***********Toofan me shama jalane ke liye hausla chahiye jo mashaallah aap me maujood hai
                              mehfil-e-rind  mein  janaa sheba   kaa!
                              saaghar-o-jaam se naa rafaaqat ban jaaye!!
*********aysi mehfil me aapki shirkat jaam o saaghar se rafaqat ka sabab zaroor hogi

         Over all it is a very nice ghazal by you                              
                              
                            

                              

                              

                              

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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2015, 06:22:09 PM »
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khubsurat ghazal , bahut khooooooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 19, 2015, 09:07:30 PM »
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                              apni  her  ebaadat , aadat  ban jaaye!
                              her jadd-o-jehad shahaadat ban jaaye!!


                             jawaani  kuch  iss tarah se  khile apni.
                              ghazal  ek-ek   sharaafat   ban   jaaye!


                             hai gar  pyaar  ek  nemat to yaa khudaa.
                              meri mohabbat kisi ki amaanat ban jaaye!

                              huaa  rishta insaaniyat kaa jaanwar aaj.
                              dar hai kahin naa ye qayaamat ban jaaye!

                              jalanaa toofaa.n mein shamaa ko hamesha.
                              andhere  ki ye  naa  hemaaqat ban jaaye!

                              mehfil-e-rind  mein  janaa sheba   kaa!
                              saaghar-o-jaam se naa rafaaqat ban jaaye!!


waah waah waah kyaa baat hai.
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Itnee achhee ghazal likhne par bhi doa hai, Sheba Sahiba yeh baat kuchh samajh nahin aaee, Dohaaee kee kyaa zarurat thee hum waise bhi inrezaar mein rehte hain aap kee Ghazal ke liye. Chalo theek hai bahut umdah ashyaar likhe hain aapne, Rau bantaa hai aaj shaam tak pochaa den gey aapko aane kee zemat nahin den gey. Jee Rau deliver kar diyaa hai.
                              
                              
                            

                              

                              

                              

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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2015, 07:08:55 PM »
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waaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah kya baaat hai bahut khooooooooob sheba ji.. Usual Smile
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