Dont go !!!!!

by Talat on May 01, 2005, 02:55:22 PM
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Whenever you feel, you need me,
Just close ur eyes,
And i will be with you.
And yes, i will close my eyes too,
For i want you to be here
Whenever you are near,
I feel comforted and relieved.
But when you leave me,
I feel alone
I wish u wouldn't leave me,
But in this world,
There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!! :-(

(NM)
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2005, 03:13:39 PM »
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What a beutiful poem Talat Ji... full of sorrow...

Apnaa_koi
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2005, 01:28:34 AM »
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Even when you leave me!!  

i feel in my heart

that


you



are












going to die







but
















that was me..................................who die
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2005, 10:15:47 AM »
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What a beutiful poem Talat Ji... full of sorrow...

Apnaa_koi


Thanks Anjali happy9
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2005, 10:21:11 AM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Whenever you feel, you need me,
Just close ur eyes,
And i will be with you.
And yes, i will close my eyes too,
For i want you to be here
Whenever you are near,
I feel comforted and relieved.
But when you leave me,
I feel alone
I wish you wouldn't leave me,
But in this world,
There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!! :-(

(NM)


wow.................  Amazing words...

I thought love was just a mirage of the mind,
it's an illusion, it's fake, impossible to find.
But the day I met you, I began to see,
that love is real, and exists in me.

HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2005, 02:19:58 PM »
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wow.................  Amazing words...

I thought love was just a mirage of the mind,
it's an illusion, it's fake, impossible to find.
But the day I met you, I began to see,
that love is real, and exists in me.

HumTum


Thanks happy9 .......... n really good !!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2005, 02:23:43 PM »
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There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!

Very meaningful Talat............................
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2005, 04:08:38 PM »
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Thanks Friend !!!!!!!!!!!!!   .............................  happy9
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2005, 05:10:57 PM »
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Whenever you feel, you need me,
Just close ur eyes,
And i will be with you.
And yes, i will close my eyes too,
For i want you to be here
Whenever you are near,
I feel comforted and relieved.
But when you leave me,
I feel alone
I wish you wouldn't leave me,
But in this world,
There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!! :-(

(NM)


beutiful talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2005, 09:51:21 AM »
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Thanks a lot !!! .............. Nidhi ....................
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2005, 12:17:29 AM »
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Whenever you feel, you need me,
Just close ur eyes,
And i will be with you.
And yes, i will close my eyes too,
For i want you to be here
Whenever you are near,
I feel comforted and relieved.
But when you leave me,
I feel alone
I wish you wouldn't leave me,
But in this world,
There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!! :-(

(NM)

It's Beautiful Talat......
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2005, 12:27:08 AM »
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Iss tarhan se guzari hai zindagi humney,
Ki dil ka aashiyana jala har bahaar mein.
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2005, 06:17:30 AM »
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Thanks a lot  Aryaaan....NIce Fakhar .........!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2005, 06:27:47 AM »
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You have left me..i have this fear
i am alone here with my tears...
I wish i could have never told you
my feelings that i had for you....
Now even though i smile with teary eyes
by loosing you i have paid its price !!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2005, 06:30:21 AM »
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Wow..........................Talat ji......tooo Good!!!!!!!!
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