Dont go !!!!!

by Talat on May 01, 2005, 02:55:22 PM
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #30 on: May 30, 2005, 12:18:23 PM »
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Whenever you feel, you need me,
Just close ur eyes,
And i will be with you.
And yes, i will close my eyes too,
For i want you to be here
Whenever you are near,
I feel comforted and relieved.
But when you leave me,
I feel alone
I wish you wouldn't leave me,
But in this world,
There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!!
:-(

(NM)


nice Talat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


can u tell me the reason?
for the following lines

But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!!
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Talat
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«Reply #31 on: May 30, 2005, 12:50:21 PM »
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You have left me..i have this fear
i am alone here with my tears...
I wish i could have never told you
my feelings that i had for you....
Now even though i smile with teary eyes
by loosing you i have paid its price !!!!!!!


beautiful Talat:)

never do i want to loose you
with all mu heart i've loved you
please dont go away...stay
its heard to live without you
i cant breath without you
i want to die in you arms
i need you till end of times


Thanks Tosha........ n its very nice !!!
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«Reply #32 on: May 30, 2005, 12:53:00 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Whenever you feel, you need me,
Just close ur eyes,
And i will be with you.
And yes, i will close my eyes too,
For i want you to be here
Whenever you are near,
I feel comforted and relieved.
But when you leave me,
I feel alone
I wish you wouldn't leave me,
But in this world,
There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!!
:-(

(NM)


nice Talat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


can you tell me the reason?
for the following lines

But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!!


Thanks Tanha !!!

Its love ...
which waits forever..
even when it knows...
that someone wont come !!!!!
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #33 on: May 30, 2005, 12:54:33 PM »
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aisa pyar mein kyun hota hai?Huh?Huh?Huh?
kyun kisi ko khushi ke badle khushi nahi militi?
kyun kisi ko wafa ke badle wafa nahi milti?Huh??
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Talat
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«Reply #34 on: May 30, 2005, 01:05:13 PM »
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Aisa pyaar me hi hota hai
Jab uski khushi ke liye..
Har ghum bhi qubool hai..
Un aankhon kw motiyon ke liye
Apne aansu bhi manzoor hain !!!
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«Reply #35 on: May 31, 2005, 12:04:31 AM »
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un ko bhi khushain hi mehboob ki aziz hoti hain
pyar mein haar mein bhi jeet hoti hai............!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #36 on: May 31, 2005, 06:25:22 AM »
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Nice Fakhar................................ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #37 on: May 31, 2005, 06:26:29 AM »
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Oh !! you are always there in my mind
Where else such a lovely friend i could find
Dont ever you leave me or let me go
In my sky you are like a beautiful rainbow
Whatever happened lets forget all that
Our bond is so strong no one can break!!!!
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«Reply #38 on: June 01, 2005, 04:23:43 PM »
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You have left me..i have this fear
i am alone here with my tears...
I wish i could have never told you
my feelings that i had for you....
Now even though i smile with teary eyes
by loosing you i have paid its price !!!!!!!


beautiful Talat:)

never do i want to loose you
with all mu heart i've loved you
please dont go away...stay
its heard to live without you
i cant breath without you
i want to die in you arms
i need you till end of times


Thanks Tosha........ n its very nice !!!


hmmmmmmmm  very    nice  talat........tosha...........nice  works  all  friends.............
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«Reply #39 on: June 01, 2005, 06:08:25 PM »
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Thanks a lot Waheed.................................... !!!!!!
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«Reply #40 on: June 02, 2005, 09:23:39 PM »
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Dosti ki nahi jaati....dil lubhaane ke liye..
dosti ho jaati hai...hansi aur gham baantne ke liye..
dost roz nahi mile to kyaa gham hai...
pyaara sa ek dost kyaa koi farishte se kam hai..

dost ka to baseraa hota hai.. dil ke sabse unche muqaam pe..
doston ka dil kyaa kisi aaine se kam hai..

For all my beloved friends..........!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: June 03, 2005, 06:37:29 AM »
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Quote from: "tanha dil tanha safar"
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Whenever you feel, you need me,
Just close ur eyes,
And i will be with you.
And yes, i will close my eyes too,
For i want you to be here
Whenever you are near,
I feel comforted and relieved.
But when you leave me,
I feel alone
I wish you wouldn't leave me,
But in this world,
There are partings,
There are partings of pain,
Where you and i have to separate.
But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!!
:-(

(NM)


nice Talat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


can you tell me the reason?
for the following lines

But i will waiting for you,
Even when you leave me!!


Thanks Tanha !!!

Its love ...
which waits forever..
even when it knows...
that someone wont come !!!!!


Talat...!!!

it's love which waits forever
it's love that dies never
no matter near or far
love live till eternity
world may change
sun dont shine
love will forever remain
...

tanha...!!!

jise kabhi hum chahte hai
dil se aapna maante hai
mohabbat bepanha karte hai
usse kabhi hum umeed laga lete hai
lakin yah jaroori nahi
wo saksh hamare liye jodidaar ho
lakin usse ek rishta dil ka hum jor hi lete hai
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«Reply #42 on: June 03, 2005, 07:40:21 AM »
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Dosti ki nahi jaati....dil lubhaane ke liye..
dosti ho jaati hai...hansi aur gham baantne ke liye..
dost roz nahi mile to kyaa gham hai...
pyaara sa ek dost kyaa koi farishte se kam hai..

dost ka to baseraa hota hai.. dil ke sabse unche muqaam pe..
doston ka dil kyaa kisi aaine se kam hai..

For all my beloved friends..........!!!! Usual Smile


Thanks !! Friend for your post ..which is really a rare thing !!! and well said...that's true !!!
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«Reply #43 on: June 03, 2005, 07:45:01 AM »
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Talat...!!!

it's love which waits forever
it's love that dies never
no matter near or far
love live till eternity
world may change
sun dont shine
love will forever remain
...


Very True Tosha !!!

Love is for eternity...
Love does nt die...
Love does nt fade...
Love always remains...
Love does nt expect..
Love does nt call...
Love waits forever..
Life goes on ..but Love remains forever...
Love happens only once...
Love happens only once....
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«Reply #44 on: June 03, 2005, 09:56:03 AM »
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Love happens only once...
Love happens only once....[/b]


hmmm....Thanx Talat...and beautifully expressed
...
but Puzzled !
...
love is eternal
love is whole
love cannote be devided
love can never grow cold

love happenes only once
is ruthless to say
love happenes once or a million times
love can never be chained :cry:

falling in love if a blessing
falling in love with love
falling out of expectations
falling out if all boundages

love happenes only once
is conditioning your love
let love be and be forever
love each monent each day

love thy lover him deep
love him forever by each moment
love his smile that look in his eyes
love each touch feel bleased
...
naha...just a thought struck...dt y ppl say love can happen only once..Huh?
its not real
its not happening:)
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