doob gaya to doob gaya......................saru..............

by SURESH SANGWAN on March 04, 2014, 04:41:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 05, 2014, 12:10:26 AM »
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Ye dil hai sarfira gar kabhi  ghoom gaya to ghoom  gaya
Yaad rakh mein bhi teri soorat bhool gaya to bhool gaya
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Roz  manaane ka  kaam chhoota ulfat kaa bharam toota
Achhaa hi  hua  vo  sitamgar  rooth  gaya  to  rooth gaya
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Fir footengi  shaakheN  fir   aayenge  patte  aur  phool
Aandhiyo ye na samajhna  shazar toot gaya to toot gaya
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Achhe   kaamoN  ko   baqayadaa   banaaye  rakhna  dost
Hota  hai  aisa bhi aksar  chhoot  gaya  to  chhoot gaya
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Khadi  hain  kataar  mein  bahaareiN   naye  gul khilaao
kitaaboN  meiN  rakha  gulaab  sookh gaya to sookh gaya
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Bahut  shiddat   se  chhaahi   thi  nazdikiyaaN  uski lekin
Tamaam  koshishoN  ke bavajood door gaya to door gaya
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kashtiyaaN  le hi jaati  haiN har musafir  ko  saahil par
Kya   hua ‘saru’ jaisaa  koi   doob  gaya  to  doob  gaya
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wah wah wah wah bohut hi umda sir ji kiya kahu alfaaz nahi mare kol,,,
or or apne naneh jeetu ki taraf se ek chota sa gift[rau] lelo na pls
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«Reply #16 on: March 05, 2014, 12:11:50 AM »
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ये दिल है सरफ़िरा गर कभी घूम गया तो घूम गया
याद रख  में भी तेरी सूरत भूल गया तो भूल गया

रोज़  मनाने का काम छूटा उल्फ़त का  भरम टूटा
अच्छा ही हुआ वो सितमगर रूठ गया तो रूठ गया

फिर  फूटेंगी  शाखें  फिर  आएँगे  पत्ते  और फूल
आँधियों ये न समझना शज़र टूट गया तो टूट गया

अच्छे  कामों  को  बा-क़ायदा बनाए रखना दोस्त
होता  है  ऐसा भी अक्सर  छूट गया तो छूट गया
 
खड़ी  हैं  क़तार  में  बहारें   गुल   नये  खिलाओ
क़िताबों  में रखा  गुलाब सूख गया तो सूख गया

बहुत शिद्दत से चाही थी नज़दीकियाँ उसकी लेकिन
तमाम  कोशिशों के  बावज़ूद  दूर गया तो दूर गया

कश्तियां ले ही जाती हैं हर मुसाफ़िर को साहिल पर
क्या  हुआ 'सरु' जैसा  कोई  डूब गया तो डूब गया



Ye dil hai sarfira gar kabhi  ghoom gaya to ghoom  gaya
Yaad rakh mein bhi teri soorat bhool gaya to bhool gaya
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Roz  manaane ka  kaam chhoota ulfat kaa bharam toota
Achhaa hi  hua  vo  sitamgar  rooth  gaya  to  rooth gaya
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Fir footengi  shaakheN  fir   aayenge  patte  aur  phool
Aandhiyo ye na samajhna  shazar toot gaya to toot gaya
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Achhe   kaamoN  ko   baqayadaa   banaaye  rakhna  dost
Hota  hai  aisa bhi aksar  chhoot  gaya  to  chhoot gaya
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khadi  hain  kataar  mein  bahaareiN   naye  gul khilaao
kitaaboN  meiN  rakha  gulaab  sookh gaya to sookh gaya
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut  shiddat   se  chhaahi   thi  nazdikiyaaN  uski lekin
Tamaam  koshishoN  ke bavajood door gaya to door gaya
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kashtiyaaN  le hi jaati  haiN har musafir  ko  saahil par
Kya   hua ‘saru’ jaisaa  koi   doob  gaya  to  doob  gaya

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2014, 12:21:23 AM »
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क्या बात है,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
बहुत उम्दा,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,सुरेशजी.
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«Reply #18 on: March 05, 2014, 02:11:55 AM »
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वाह...वाह...और वाह....ढेरों ढेरों दाद औत तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद.....

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«Reply #19 on: March 05, 2014, 01:02:00 PM »
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wav
thanks amit ji
वाह...वाह...और वाह....ढेरों ढेरों दाद औत तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद.....

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«Reply #20 on: March 05, 2014, 01:03:25 PM »
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thanks Ravi ji'
क्या बात है,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
बहुत उम्दा,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,सुरेशजी.
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«Reply #21 on: March 05, 2014, 01:04:01 PM »
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thanks a lot sheba ji.


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