Doobti naiyya..

by nashwani on June 15, 2013, 05:01:05 PM
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Durghatna  ghati ,  dil  toota,  dard  paaya,,
Beema  karwaya ,  par  harzana  na  paaya..

Ankho.N  me  ansu  bhi  tab  ja  kar  aaya,,
Jab   iss   tote    ne    das    mirchi    khaaya..

Jheel  si  ankho.N  me  main  doob  ke  aaya,,
Gotakhoro.N  ne  bhi  na  mujhko  bachaya..

Ishwar   ne   sapne   me   yeh   ehsas   dilaya,,
Ishq na hoga pura, tujhpe mangal ka saaya..

Dagabaazo.N   se   kaun   hai   bach   paaya,,
Ghar    ka    bhedi    hi    to    lanka    dhaaya..

Doobti  naiyya  ko  jab  majdhar  me  paaya,,
Laut    ke    buddhu    tab    ghar    ko    aaya..!!! Ñ

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2013, 05:19:00 PM »
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WaaH WaaH maza aa gaye...................
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2013, 05:32:38 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne.
Nice Feelings.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2013, 05:48:20 PM »
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bahut khoob.. bahut khoob.. taali bajaya.. Applause Applause
padh ke ye post hume bahut maja aaya.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2013, 05:55:35 PM »
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A bit confusing..
but first two stazas are better.. and saying something new..
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2013, 06:36:34 PM »
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Waah waah .... Aur .... Ha ha Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2013, 07:13:44 PM »
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Nashwani Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH janab kia kahne bahut khoob aur behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Aikdum badhiyaa mazahiyaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile


Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.... likhate rahiye... Mehfil sajate rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2013, 07:39:21 PM »
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hahahaha

yaar bahut khoobsurti sey aap ney bayaaan kiya hai
sach meh, yehi nazara hai, ishq wala koh kaha kinara hai

hehehe


tooo goood yaar, toooo goood

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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2013, 08:53:58 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
bahut khoob nashwani ji. maza aaya padhkar. hazaron daaad.
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2013, 10:57:42 PM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 15, 2013, 05:19:00 PM
WaaH WaaH maza aa gaye...................
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Khushi hui jaankar ki apko ye pasand aya..dhanyawaad..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2013, 10:59:01 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 15, 2013, 05:32:38 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne.
Nice Feelings.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hausla afzai ke liye shukriya ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2013, 11:00:14 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on June 15, 2013, 05:48:20 PM
bahut khoob.. bahut khoob.. taali bajaya.. Applause Applause
padh ke ye post hume bahut maja aaya.... Usual Smile

ha ha ha..hame bhi bada achha laga apka reply padhakar..bahut bahut dhanyawaad..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2013, 11:01:02 PM »
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Quote from: Saavan on June 15, 2013, 05:55:35 PM
A bit confusing..
but first two stazas are better.. and saying something new..

Thanks a lot saavan jee..happy9
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 15, 2013, 06:36:19 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hausla afzai ke liye Shukriya sudhir jee..happy9
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