~Dost badalne wale bahaut hai~ by Rahim

by dead heart on September 11, 2010, 09:25:06 PM
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Zameen se asmaan choone wale kam hai,
Falak se ghirte sitare bahaut hai..

Mere Rabb ki baat man’ne wale kam hai,
Mere Rabb ko chahne wale bahaut hai..

Lavzon main ehsaason ko samajne wale kam hai,
Jazbaaton ko likhne wale lekhak bahaut hai..

Musibaton main saath nibhane wale kam hai,
Khushialion main haath thamne wale bahaut hai..

‘Khamosh’ tu na rehna kisi kay bhi bharose par yahan,
Yahan paisa dekh dost badalne wale bahaut hai..

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2010, 07:18:21 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Shihab bhaijan..

Apne bahaut acha likha hai hamesha ki tarha..Dil khush hojata hai apko parr kar.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2010, 07:30:32 AM »
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wahhhh yahn do diggaj ek dusre ki tareef kar rahe hain...

Rahim bht hi saccha aur achcha likha hai tumne...ek kyal ko bht khubsurti se shabdon me piroke pesh kiya hai..bht hi khubbbb

aur shihab ji aap to hain hi best ji...aapki jitni tareef karen kum hai...kum lafzon me bht kuch keh dene ka hunar kum hi logon me hota hai...aur aap unme se ek hain...



dubte waqt hath badhaya tha maine jinki taraf

wahi the meri kashti me chhed karne wale

kya dete wo sahara jab main gir rahi thi

wahi to the mujhe girta dekh hasne wale.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2010, 07:40:54 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 12, 2010, 07:30:32 AM
wahhhh yahn do diggaj ek dusre ki tareef kar rahe hain...

Rahim bht hi saccha aur achcha likha hai tumne...ek kyal ko bht khubsurti se shabdon me piroke pesh kiya hai..bht hi khubbbb

aur shihab ji aap to hain hi best ji...aapki jitni tareef karen kum hai...kum lafzon me bht kuch keh dene ka hunar kum hi logon me hota hai...aur aap unme se ek hain...



dubte waqt hath badhaya tha maine jinki taraf

wahi the meri kashti me chhed karne wale

kya dete wo sahara jab main gir rahi thi

wahi to the mujhe girta dekh hasne wale.....

Anamika di, pehli baat toh main koi digaj nahin..Digaj toh Shihab bhaijan hai..Hume kahan ata hai likhna, bas koshish karte rehte hai!
Apka teh dil se shukriya ada karta hoon kay apne hamesha saath diya hai..

Apki chaar lines toh bahaut bahaut zada khubsoorat hai..Aur akhri line toh bas kamal hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2010, 07:45:35 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on September 11, 2010, 11:28:55 PM
Ek Chhoti Si Koshish Galti Maaf Ho.!

Sar -e- Mehfil  Yun Na Qissa  Tamaam Puchhiye
Mere Lafzon  Se Hi Meri Kahaani Ko, Jaan Lijiye.

Zakhm Khakar Bhi Abhi Dil Toota Nahi Hai Mera
Jaaiye Zara Jakar Phir Se Doston Ko, Bula Lijiye.


Aise doston ko na bulao ab meri zindagi main yaaron,
Ab khanjar chubone kay liye meri peet par jagah baki na rahi..!
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2010, 07:56:42 AM »
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Rahim Mere Bhai... Aapke Lafzon Me Humesha ek Nayapan Hota Hai.. Har Poem Me Kuch Na Kuch Sandesh Chupa Hota hai.. Zindgi ke Ek Such Ko Lafzon Me Behad hi Khubsoorati ke Sath Utaara Hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash hai.. Applause Applause


Daad Kuboool karen Dil se....   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2010, 07:57:52 AM »
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Vikas bhaijan, Apka reply dekh dil hamesha khush hota hai..Teh dil se shukriya dost..!
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2010, 09:57:59 AM »
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bahut hi accha aur saccha likha hai aapne Rahim.......bahut hi khoob
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2010, 10:12:48 AM »
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shukriya Nikhaar di
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2010, 10:19:17 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah kya baat hai Meri Bhai.. Kya khoob Likha hai,,, Bahoot Bahoot Gahre aur Sache alfaazo ko Sabdo mea Piroya hai.. Bahoot Umda !!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2010, 10:56:09 AM »
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Shukriya di..! teh dil se shukriya.!
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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2010, 04:12:03 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 11, 2010, 09:25:06 PM
Zameen se asmaan choone wale kam hai,
Falak se ghirte sitare bahaut hai..

Mere Rabb ki baat man’ne wale kam hai,
Mere Rabb ko chahne wale bahaut hai..

Lavzon main ehsaason ko samajne wale kam hai,
Jazbaaton ko likhne wale lekhak bahaut hai..

Musibaton main saath nibhane wale kam hai,
Khushialion main haath thamne wale bahaut hai..

‘Khamosh’ tu na rehna kisi kay bhi bharose par yahan,
Yahan paisa dekh dost badalne wale bahaut hai..

~Rahim~

Bahut achchhi peshkash hai aap ki Rahim Ji


Ghar mein lagi aag bujhaane wale kam hai
Aag ki garmi se laabh uthaane wale bahut hai

Zakham pe marham lagane wale kam hai
Use kuder kar namak chhirakne wale bahut hai
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2010, 06:50:31 PM »
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Shukriya Rajesh jee..

Bahaut khoob likha hai..! Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2010, 10:29:43 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Behad umdaa khayaal pesh kiye hai daad janab... thoda mashk kijiye aur lafzoN aur bhi khubsurti se piroiye aapki shayari behad umdaa ho jayeNgi..... Daad kabool kijiye..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye......

Aur Shihab Sahab aapne waqai achche ashaar kahe hai daad janab........ Usual Smile

Kasak Jee aapki yeH chaar line's behad outstanding hai... these are reay mindblowing .... Keep up... Usual Smile

Hum bhi kuch arz karte hai.... Rahim sahab aapki hi kaawish per arz kar raheN hai... Mulayza farmaiye... Usual Smile          


Dard meiN saath nibhane wale kam hai,
KhushiyoN meiN muskurane wale bahut haiN
JanaazoN ko kandha dene wale kam hai,
DaawaatoN meiN khaane wale bahut haiN



          
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2010, 05:24:14 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khoob Rahim bhai...!!!
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