Dua karo ..... (by vb)

by vb on June 05, 2012, 01:47:59 PM
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Bichhar k tujh say sochta hun ab kidher jaaun
Dua karo, k aye jaan-e-adaa main mar jaaun

Main sochta tha meray bin na jee sakay gi tu
Sabaq khud apni umangon say seekh lay gi tu
Tu mujh say kat k agar khush hay, khush rahay janaan
Ye ashk raigaan thay, raaigaan bahay jaanaan

Ye dil ab aur teray bin tu reh nahi sakta
Main kitnay karb men hoon, tujh say keh nahi sakta
Mujay hayaat k qafas say ab rehaa kar do
Hazoor-e-ghaib men nanhi si iltajjaa kar do
Khamosh neend ki aaghoshe men utar jaaun
Dua karo, k aye jaan-e-adaa ……..

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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2012, 01:52:02 PM »
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bahut din baad aapko padhne ka avsar milaa..,. aur aate hi kya khoob likha hai aapne... hum to shuru se hi aapki lekhni ke fan rahe hain... aur is peshkash ke to kya kehne.... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai Vb ji.... bahut din baad aaye aap is mehfil me...ummeed hai sab thik hoga... aate rahiye , likhte rahiye....!!!

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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2012, 02:23:35 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2012, 03:29:13 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Vb ji.. Bahoot Khoob !!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2012, 07:38:33 PM »
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vb sirji kahan the aap?
bht miss kia aapko aur apki poetry ko--
iss post ke kya kehne--
aapki nagmo ke ehsaas humare dil me ab tak base hue hain sirji

aate raha kijie
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2012, 11:13:46 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne VB ji..  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2012, 05:07:51 AM »
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dua hai ke aap bht khush rahen fule falen
zindagi ki raah me bas chalte rahe chalte rahe
na thokar lage kabhi na kabi bhi gum mile
khamoshiyon se na kabhi aapki mulakat ho
dard o gum ki siyaahi se jo likhe hain aapne nagme
chhukar sabke dilon ko jo hain aankhein numkarte
unki shohrat sari duniya me khub khub mehke
dua hai VB ji ye aapke liye hamare dil se
aapki zindagi me kabi bhi koi gum ka badal na barse..
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2012, 08:50:22 AM »
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buhat shukriya aap sub ka...

Yaad aaun ga jab talak tum ko
Main rulaaun ga tab talak tum ko

Is haseen pur-tapaak mehfil men
Ab na laao mujhay tu behtar hay
In duaaon aur in k haasil par
Mat rulaao mujhay tu behtar hay
Ab na andoh-naak naghmon men
Gungunaao mujhay tu behtar hay
Neend aanay si lagi hay kuchh kuchh
Mat jagaao mujhay tu behtar hay
Mat sataao mujhay tu behtar hay
Bhool jaao mujhay tu behtar hay

Yaad aaun ga jab talak tum ko
Main rulaaun ga tab talak tum ko
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2012, 11:40:29 AM »
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VB ji ufffffffff kya jawab diye ho mastam mastttttttttttt

sanson se jism ka nata hai jab tak
tum yaad aate rahoge mujhe tab tak

in sheron shayri ki mehfil me
yunhi  mahekte raho to behtar hai
in haseen shaam me dhalti subhon me
yunhi gungunao tum to behtar hai
aadhhi adhuri hai jo daastaan tumhari
use tum puuri sunao to behtar hai
zindagi ki iss bujhti shama ko
fir se jagmagao to behtar hai
bahot udaaas hai mere chehre ki hasi
ise tum fir se sanwaro to behtar hai
roz karte hain intezar aapke aane ka
roz kuch haale dil sunao to behtar hai

sanson se jism ka nata hai jab tak
tum yaad aate rahoge mujhe tab tak

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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2012, 06:49:12 AM »
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hamaraa jeevan ujar chuka hay, hum apni hasti mita chukay hen
ye geet ye haal-e-zindagaani, jo dil men tha sub suna chukay hen

kahaan say laain wo raag deepak? kahan say laain dehektay naghmay?
na jal sakaa tha,na jal sakay ga,chiraagh jo hum bhuja chukay hen

tumhaari baaton ka kya bharosa? tum aaj ho kal kahan milo gay
Wo jin say naata tha mudaton say,wo mujh ko dil say bhula chukay hen
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2012, 07:18:40 PM »
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Bichhar k tujh say sochta hun ab kidher jaaun
Dua karo, k aye jaan-e-adaa main mar jaaun

Main sochta tha meray bin na jee sakay gi tu
Sabaq khud apni umangon say seekh lay gi tu
Tu mujh say kat k agar khush hay, khush rahay janaan
Ye ashk raigaan thay, raaigaan bahay jaanaan

Ye dil ab aur teray bin tu reh nahi sakta
Main kitnay karb men hoon, tujh say keh nahi sakta
Mujay hayaat k qafas say ab rehaa kar do
Hazoor-e-ghaib men nanhi si iltajjaa kar do
Khamosh neend ki aaghoshe men utar jaaun
Dua karo, k aye jaan-e-adaa ……..

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aap ka andaaz-e-bayaan hamesha se zara mokhtalif raha hai aur vazandaar raha hai.veriiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaice VB
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«Reply #11 on: July 27, 2012, 05:37:58 AM »
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thanx.........
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«Reply #12 on: July 27, 2012, 05:54:19 AM »
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hamaraa jeevan ujar chuka hay, hum apni hasti mita chukay hen
ye geet ye haal-e-zindagaani, jo dil men tha sub suna chukay hen

kahaan say laain wo raag deepak? kahan say laain dehektay naghmay?
na jal sakaa tha,na jal sakay ga,chiraagh jo hum bhuja chukay hen

tumhaari baaton ka kya bharosa? tum aaj ho kal kahan milo gay
Wo jin say naata tha mudaton say,wo mujh ko dil say bhula chukay hen

bhttttt pyara jawab hai VB ji... lekin thodasa to bharosa rakhna padega na....
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«Reply #13 on: July 27, 2012, 05:57:09 AM »
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bharosay he tu dukh detay hen...
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«Reply #14 on: July 27, 2012, 06:46:26 AM »
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aur jeene ka aasraa bhi......
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