~*~ Dua kisi ne aisi ki hogi ~*~ by Rahim

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Woh barbaad mujhe kargaya toh usse dosh na dena Rahim,
Shayad Dua kisi ne mere haq main aisi hi ki hogi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2010, 09:49:09 AM »
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2 line jo har dard bayaan kar gai.....

rahim bht dil ko chhuti 2 lines...
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2010, 09:55:24 AM »
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wah mere Rahim dost kya baat kah di bhai.
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dik ki gahrai se daad
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2010, 10:27:46 AM »
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Nice Rahim Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2010, 10:49:40 AM »
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""rahnumai thi uski iss qadar
  jo duayen par duayen ki""
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2010, 11:05:43 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


Wo Maangti Rahi Duaa, Mere Zinda Rahane Ki,
Asar Yeh Hua Ki Main Mar Ke Saansen Leta Raha....!!!





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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2010, 02:53:07 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Anamika di, Rishi jee, KillBill jee aur Nirala jee..
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2010, 02:58:35 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


Wo Maangti Rahi Duaa, Mere Zinda Rahane Ki,
Asar Yeh Hua Ki Main Mar Ke Saansen Leta Raha....!!!


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Teh dil se shukriya Vikas bhaijan..
Hmm sach bolun apko toh jab yeh post kar raha tha toh dil ne yehi khwaish ki thi kay kash ap ispar comment dein, isse parrein..
Ek aur baat kehni thi..
main jab kabhi bhi do liners likhta hoon toh apka hausla dene wala woh ek sentence yaad ajata hai.."Do line main puri ghazal likh deta hai Rahim"..
Apka teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..

Bahaut khubsoorat lines likhi hai apne..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2010, 03:00:58 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim !!!

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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2010, 03:01:57 PM »
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Wo Maangti Rahi Duaa, Mere Zinda Rahane Ki,
Asar Yeh Hua Ki Main Mar Ke Saansen Leta Raha....!!!

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Applause Applause
Ek shaer yaad agaya Faraz Saheb..
Kuch aisay hadsay bhi hojate hai zindagi main Faraz,
Insaan bach toh jata hai mager zinda nahin rehta..
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2010, 03:03:13 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim !!!


Ohhh Divya di..
kayi dino baad dikhe..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2010, 03:17:55 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Vikas bhaijan..
Hmm sach bolun apko toh jab yeh post kar raha tha toh dil ne yehi khwaish ki thi kay kash ap ispar comment dein, isse parrein..
Ek aur baat kehni thi..
main jab kabhi bhi do liners likhta hoon toh apka hausla dene wala woh ek sentence yaad ajata hai.."Do line main puri ghazal likh deta hai Rahim"..
Apka teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..

Bahaut khubsoorat lines likhi hai apne..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley





Rahim Mere Bhai.. is Pyaar Ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. Aapne Itna Maan Diya.. !!! Aapka Likha har Sher Dil pe Asar chod Jata Hai... Aur Waqai is baar Bhi aapne "2 Line Me Poori gazal Likh di hai"..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2010, 03:23:05 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhai.. Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause



Wo Maangti Rahi Duaa, Mere Zinda Rahane Ki,
Asar Yeh Hua Ki Main Mar Ke Saansen Leta Raha....!!!





**~** Mann **~**






Bahoot Khoob Vicky... Kya baat hai !!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2010, 03:37:06 PM »
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Mast hai Rahim-bhai.....and good support by Vikky-bhai and Divya-di......... Applause Applause Applause


Yu tou bahut si duaayein thee mere haq me bhi
Par dil se ki kisi ne dua wo kabool ho gayee.....


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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2010, 03:43:47 PM »
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Dua Karo Yaar Meri Dua Kabool Ho Jaaye
KisMat mea jo nahi mere woh Mera ho jaaye !!!

Saath rango se saj jaaye Duniyaa meri
Aur sitare uski chahat ke Mujhe hasa jaaye !!!

Bajaye sitaar Upar Khuda ke Farishte bhi
Aur chup ke se dil ki muraad puri ho jaaye !!!

Divya !!!
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