-Dulhan Bana Do-

by Meena on May 29, 2005, 04:01:01 PM
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«Reply #60 on: June 23, 2005, 01:33:23 PM »
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Dosto, bayan karongi phir se ek ehesaas ko kuch lafzo ke roop me. batana mat bhulnaa ke kaisa laga!  


Tamana hai meri, mere haaton me bhi mehendi laga do,
Sajan ke pyar ka rang meri zindagi me rajha do,

Odh ke lal chunariya, kar liya hai shingar maine,
Oh babul mere, hogayi tayar, mujhe piya ki dulhan bana do,

Vishwas ka bandan me band jayenge dono,
Unse kaho, apne nam ka sindoor meri mang me saja do,

Bahaye hai kitne askh, oh sanam teri judai me maine,
Aaj saath janmo ka wada karke, kushi se hume rula do,

Umar bar gum ki khamoshi mujshe baate karti thi,
Aye Khuda, kushiyon ki shehenayi aab to mujhe suna do!!!


very nice poem , real emotions are truly expressed tongue3
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Meena
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«Reply #61 on: June 23, 2005, 01:41:57 PM »
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thanx a lot....girl!!! bas ek koshish ki thi aap sab ko pasand aya, mujhe bhi acha laga!!

 :D
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«Reply #62 on: June 23, 2005, 02:08:39 PM »
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bas isi tarah koshish karte rehna aur aap hume aapke poetry forum  ke darwaje mein hamesha paayenge..........kyunki yeh dil maange more
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«Reply #63 on: June 23, 2005, 02:11:18 PM »
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thank u girl..... :D  ... aap jaise chahane walo ka saath ho to kaun nahin likhna chahega!!!  :D
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«Reply #64 on: June 23, 2005, 02:20:14 PM »
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well waiting for more of you such works ...........i m from mumbai and u ?
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«Reply #65 on: June 23, 2005, 02:22:38 PM »
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i m from pune................
  bahut hi acchi hai aapki shayariya.....................
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«Reply #66 on: June 23, 2005, 06:14:48 PM »
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Dosto, bayan karongi phir se ek ehesaas ko kuch lafzo ke roop me. batana mat bhulnaa ke kaisa laga!  


Tamana hai meri, mere haaton me bhi mehendi laga do,
Sajan ke pyar ka rang meri zindagi me rajha do,

Odh ke lal chunariya, kar liya hai shingar maine,
Oh babul mere, hogayi tayar, mujhe piya ki dulhan bana do,

Vishwas ka bandan me band jayenge dono,
Unse kaho, apne nam ka sindoor meri mang me saja do,

Bahaye hai kitne askh, oh sanam teri judai me maine,
Aaj saath janmo ka wada karke, kushi se hume rula do,

Umar bar gum ki khamoshi mujshe baate karti thi,
Aye Khuda, kushiyon ki shehenayi aab to mujhe suna do!!!


very nice poem , real emotions are truly expressed tongue3



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Tosha
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«Reply #67 on: June 25, 2005, 08:02:13 PM »
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hey palz...!!! chit chat section is there...do make use of it..!!! Good luck!!!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #68 on: June 27, 2005, 08:04:28 AM »
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bahoot khoob meena ji...ki bayaan kerna mushkil hai..woh lafz kahaan se laanye ki aapki gazal ko chaar chaand lag jaayein..

always harash
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Meena
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«Reply #69 on: June 27, 2005, 03:08:51 PM »
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bohot bohot shukriya harash ji apko meri poem pasand ayi!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #70 on: July 28, 2005, 10:59:33 AM »
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Dosto, bayan karongi phir se ek ehesaas ko kuch lafzo ke roop me. batana mat bhulnaa ke kaisa laga!  


Tamana hai meri, mere haaton me bhi mehendi laga do,
Sajan ke pyar ka rang meri zindagi me rajha do,

Odh ke lal chunariya, kar liya hai shingar maine,
Oh babul mere, hogayi tayar, mujhe piya ki dulhan bana do,

Vishwas ka bandan me band jayenge dono,
Unse kaho, apne nam ka sindoor meri mang me saja do,

Bahaye hai kitne askh, oh sanam teri judai me maine,
Aaj saath janmo ka wada karke, kushi se hume rula do,

Umar bar gum ki khamoshi mujshe baate karti thi,
Aye Khuda, kushiyon ki shehenayi aab to mujhe suna do!!!

Wow Great..............Kya Baat Hai MeenaG...........................
.......why did you stopped writing in this forum............Huh?Huh??? sad5
Please come back....................
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Meena
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«Reply #71 on: July 28, 2005, 04:35:39 PM »
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shukriya natural ji....arre i didnt stop coming here...its just i didnt get enough time to write another poem  sad5  par whenever i get the time i will def post it here  :D

thanx a lot for liking my poems!!

 :D
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«Reply #72 on: September 02, 2005, 07:02:55 AM »
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Dosto, bayan karongi phir se ek ehesaas ko kuch lafzo ke roop me. batana mat bhulnaa ke kaisa laga!  :D


Tamana hai meri, mere haaton me bhi mehendi laga do,
Sajan ke pyar ka rang meri zindagi me rajha do,

Odh ke lal chunariya, kar liya hai shingar maine,
Oh babul mere, hogayi tayar, mujhe piya ki dulhan bana do,

Vishwas ka bandan me band jayenge dono,
Unse kaho, apne nam ka sindoor meri mang me saja do,

Bahaye hai kitne askh, oh sanam teri judai me maine,
Aaj saath janmo ka wada karke, kushi se hume rula do,

Umar bar gum ki khamoshi mujshe baate karti thi,
Aye Khuda, kushiyon ki shehenayi aab to mujhe suna do!!!


wah wah kya baat hai Meena ji........very nice as usual.....kya jazbaat hai
Auro na bhi kamaal kar diya......good job u all!!!!!!1
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Meena
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«Reply #73 on: September 02, 2005, 04:53:44 PM »
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thanx ishu for liking my poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #74 on: September 28, 2012, 09:25:08 AM »
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waaaah meena ji waaaaaaah....... bahut hi sundar rachna hai aapki.....
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