Dulhan

by Meena on November 14, 2004, 03:34:51 PM
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Hello Guys,

maine is forum me bohot bohot ache shayar dekhe hai. ek se bad kar ek aur phir bhi kuch apna khud ka likha hua yaha pesh karne ki gustaki kar rahi hoon. dont know kaisa hai...

Dulhan

anjan tha woh shaks jo kada tha parde ke piche,
phir bhi ek apnapan tha parde ke piche,
kyu keenche ja rahe te rukh hawaon ke mujhe,
us gumnami ke pas jo thi parde ke piche.

door kada raha mai aur sochta raha,
ke kya milega mujhe parde ke piche.

ek darr tha magar yakeen bhi tha,
ke manzil meri wohi ho hai parde ke piche.

khwab tha jo aab haqiqat ban gaya,
kuch palon me kho jaonga issi khwabon ki duniya me,
woh duniya jo hai parde ke piche.
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2004, 04:43:16 PM »
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wahhhhhhhh out standing
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99% §hå®èèf_Mµñda
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2004, 05:45:55 PM »
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meeeeeena  ji

ur very good at parde ke piche
lagta hai muje bhi ana parega ab parde ke piche :wink:


kamal kar ditta tussi te
lagda hai sangat meri da
asar ho gaya twadde utte :lol:


really nice yaar tongue3
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2004, 06:58:31 PM »
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wahhhhhhhh out standing


thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2004, 07:00:28 PM »
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meeeeeena  ji

ur very good at parde ke piche
lagta hai muje bhi ana parega ab parde ke piche :wink:


kamal kar ditta tussi te
lagda hai sangat meri da
asar ho gaya twadde utte :lol:


really nice yaar tongue3


shukriya ji

kyu ana hai tumne parde ke piche,
kya milega tume parde ke piche,
warn karti hoon tume mai shareef munda,
jo aye to mar khaoge parde ke piche!

 :lol:
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2004, 08:29:15 PM »
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meeeeeena  ji

ur very good at parde ke piche
lagta hai muje bhi ana parega ab parde ke piche :wink:


kamal kar ditta tussi te
lagda hai sangat meri da
asar ho gaya twadde utte :lol:


really nice yaar tongue3


shukriya ji

kyu ana hai tumne parde ke piche,
kya milega tume parde ke piche,
warn karti hoon tume mai shareef munda,
jo aye to mar khaoge parde ke piche!

 :lol:


ek meethi si chummi tayyar rakho
aa raha hoon lene parde ke piche
aaj to leke rahoonga, chahein aa jayein
tumhare daddy bhi aaj parde ke piche... :lol:
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2004, 08:42:27 PM »
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:lol:

jo mere mummy daddy aye parde ke piche,
to woh marenge bohot sare kan ke neeche,
taliyan baja kar sab ko bula longi mundeya,
ke sab dekehnge tamasha parde ke piche!
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2004, 08:52:41 PM »
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aaj to jisko bulana hai bula lo parde ke piche
daddy aa jayein ya mummy apki, nahi daroonga parde ke piche
taaliyaan baja ke bula lo parosiyon ko parde ke piche
lete huye chummi dekh lene do aaj sabko parde ke piche :wink:  :lol:
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«Reply #8 on: November 28, 2004, 11:49:23 AM »
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:lol:  :lol: parde ke piche aur parde ke samne tume mar hi pardegi!

 :lol:
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2004, 01:22:33 PM »
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very nice meena............
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2004, 01:40:35 PM »
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wowowowow meena tths really gud
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2004, 04:06:23 PM »
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thank u dosto!

actually meri first lambi poem thi, try kiya tha bas ban gayi. apko pasand ayi acha laga.

 Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2004, 07:14:13 AM »
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bohat achhi try thi Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2004, 04:04:06 PM »
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shukriya sis

 :D
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