duniyadaari....A.B

by adil bechain on January 18, 2012, 02:01:53 PM
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                       pee kar bhulaa dein khud ko, aisi sharaab de..,
                       baad   chaahey  takleef hamein be-hisaab  de..,

                       hai   manzoor  hamein tarikiyo.n mein rahna,
                       per apne  fazal  se  hamein  ek  aaftaab  de..,

                       ley   sakein  badlaa  guzri  mehboobao.n  se,
                       ya    khuda    unko    shauhar    kharaab  de,

                       tang-dasti   ki   haalat mein kab tak rahe ham.,
                       iss   kamzor   nigaah   ko   haseen khawaab de.,

                       aaj ki jawaani ko libaas  pahnaa nahin sakte.,
                       apni  nazar  ko  hi khuda  zaahidi- hijaab de.,

                    
                      

                      
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2012, 02:28:39 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai Adil ji.. Bahoot Umda Peshkash

Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2012, 02:42:11 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Adil Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2012, 03:41:06 PM »
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Bahut khoob Adil saheb . Eik bad'dua mein kitni
mahboobaaon  ko  nipta  diya .
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2012, 07:12:52 PM »
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waah ustaad waah
kamaal ki post--
last ke 3 sher to wakai lajawaab hain
umda soch or khoob bayani

daad kubul ho janaab--
kuch hume bhi tips dijie likhne ki Usual Smile

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2012, 07:27:31 PM »
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bahut khoob adil bhai jaanlevaa peshkash Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2012, 05:00:24 AM »
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ya khuda unko shohar kharaab de  waah waah adil bhai ye andaaz mujhe bahut pyaaraa lagaa.dheron daad qobool karen khuda haafiz
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2012, 09:51:53 AM »
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Quote from: Nysha on January 18, 2012, 02:28:39 PM
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai Adil ji.. Bahoot Umda Peshkash

Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

thank you
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2012, 09:52:17 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Adil Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2012, 10:53:51 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 18, 2012, 03:41:06 PM
Bahut khoob Adil saheb . Eik bad'dua mein kitni
mahboobaaon  ko  nipta  diya .


shukriya hasan sahab
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2012, 11:17:39 AM »
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Kya Kehna.. wah Usual Smile

Dushmani Zamane se karli,
Jo mehboob mera bewafa nikla !!
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2012, 11:31:25 AM »
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Quote from: Sahiba Zehra on January 19, 2012, 11:17:39 AM
Kya Kehna.. wah Usual Smile

Dushmani Zamane se karli,
Jo mehboob mera bewafa nikla !!


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah zehra ji kya khoob kaha Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2012, 08:37:05 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 18, 2012, 07:12:52 PM
waah ustaad waah
kamaal ki post--
last ke 3 sher to wakai lajawaab hain
umda soch or khoob bayani

daad kubul ho janaab--
kuch hume bhi tips dijie likhne ki Usual Smile

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2012, 07:00:26 AM »
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Aadi ljee kyaa hee khoob likhaa hai aap ne....
aaj kee jawaanee ko libaas..........bhai waaaah kyaaa kahne!
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2012, 07:55:11 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on January 18, 2012, 07:27:31 PM
bahut khoob adil bhai jaanlevaa peshkash Applause

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