***durr kahin khwaabon ki nagri***

by kaushikbhawna008 on October 22, 2008, 05:21:31 AM
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Durr kahin khwaabon ki nagri
Aur paas dard ka dariya hai

Bhujte armaano ki hai kashti
Aur tanhai ka safar ye lamba hai

Kabhi girti kabhi sambhalti
Ansuon se bhara raah mei jharna hai

Geeton mei bhi chubhte hain kaante
Sang lavfzo ka mere kaafila  hai

Kabhi sochu ruk jaaon mein
Par us khwaab ko bhi paana hai

Rukhti thamti chalti hai zindgi
Ek ghaav thoda purana hai

Aaj dur manzil hai lekin
Ek roj use hi paana hai

Chaahe tufaano se ham uljhe
Par har kadam manzil ki taraf badhana hai



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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2008, 09:07:04 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Bhawna Ji

Shote hue sab ko dikhate hain achche sapne
Khul jaye jab aankh to kuch nahi rahte apne
Bilkul ussi tarah hai woh khwaabo ki nagri teri
Duur se suhana lage jab pahuncho to kuch nahi teri
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2008, 01:01:47 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Bhawna, a beautiful creation Applause Applause

Very Nice reply Rajesh Applause
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2008, 06:58:30 AM »
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shukriya celmira ji notworthy
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2008, 07:03:00 AM »
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bohut bohut shukriya rajesh ji  notworthy

khwaabon ki nagri mohobbat ka hi mukaam nahi
har roj to dhalti hai wo aakhiri shaam nahi
mana sab rishte dhaago se bhi kache hote hain
par paa na sake apne mukaam ko aisi bhi koi deewar nahi
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2008, 08:17:00 AM »
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bohut bohut shukriya rajesh ji  notworthy

khwaabon ki nagri mohobbat ka hi mukaam nahi
har roj to dhalti hai wo aakhiri shaam nahi
mana sab rishte dhaago se bhi kache hote hain
par paa na sake apne mukaam ko aisi bhi koi deewar nahi

Yeh bhi khoob rahi Bhawna Ji
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2008, 08:53:14 AM »
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thnk u rajesh ji notworthy notworthy:
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2008, 04:39:19 AM »
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nice work bhawna
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2008, 06:18:07 AM »
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nice work bhawna

thnk u pooja ji
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