Eh Khuda Teri Shaan Mein Koi Gustaaki Kare Aur "Khwaish" Chup Rahe

by khwaish on August 27, 2010, 08:18:30 AM
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Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon Padhne Wale Isse Zaroor Samjhe..!!!!

Eh Khuda kahi Mujhse Tu Yuh Juda Na Ho Jaaye
Apne Sanam  Ko Tujhse Jodoon,Mujhse aisi Koi Khata Naa Ho jaaye

Mehboob Ke jalwe Chalti Saanson tak Hi Simit hai,
Eh Khuda Tere Shaan mein Main Kya Kahoon!!!!
Teri jageh par sirf tu hai,
bakhs De Uss bande Ko Jo Sanam Ke jalwo se tujhe Jode,
Bando Ka Baaki Yuh Koi Naam-0-Nishaan Ne ho jaaye

Uss mohabbat ka Kya Wajood
Jo Khuda Aur sanam Mein Koi fark naa Kar sake
"Khwaish" kehta Hai mohabbat karo Par Inn Jazbo ko Khuda Se naa Jodo,
"Khuda Bhi kisi ke jalwo se Jo naa so paaye",
Aisi Kuch Betuuki Baaton se Inteha Na Ho jaaye

"Khwaish" Keh deta Hai woh Jo uska Dil Kehta Hai
Teri Shaan mein Koi Gustaaki kare Aur "Khwaish" Chup rahe
Khwaish Kabhi Itna Bhi
Kisi Insaan Par Meharbaan Naa Ho Jaaye..

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2010, 10:56:30 AM »
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WAH KHWAISH JI WAH ,EKDUM SATEEK AUR BADHIYA BAAT KAHI HAI
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MEHBOOB KISI KA KHUDA HOGA,TO SHAYAD USS EK KE LIYE .
KHUDA HUMDARD HAI,MEHBOOB HAI DOONIA MEIN SABHI KE LIYE.

JO KHUDA NE BAKSHA HAI WO KAHAN KISI KI AUKAT KI DE DE.
WO REHNUMA HAI,HUM SAB HAIN SAMANDER KI KUCH HI BOONDE.

TERA MEHBOOB MERA MEHBOOB HAI KHUDA SAB BACHHO KI SI BAATEIN HAIN.
USKI ZAMEEN ,USKA AAFTAAB,USKE FALAK TALE KAATATE SAB RAATEIN HAIN.


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Quote from: khwaish on August 27, 2010, 08:18:30 AM
Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon Padhne Wale Isse Zaroor Samjhe..!!!!

Eh Khuda kahi Mujhse Tu Yuh Juda Na Ho Jaaye
Apne Sanam  Ko Tujhse Jodoon,Mujhse aisi Koi Khata Naa Ho jaaye

Mehboob Ke jalwe Chalti Saanson tak Hi Simit hai,
Eh Khuda Tere Shaan mein Main Kya Kahoon!!!!
Teri jageh par sirf tu hai,
bakhse De Uss bande Ko Jo Sanam Ke jalwo se tujhe Jode,
Bando Ka Baaki Yuh Koi Naam-0-Nishaan Ne ho jaaye

Uss mohabbat ka Kya Wajood
Jo Khuda Aur sanam Mein Koi fark naa Kar sake
"Khwaish" kehta Hai mohabbat karo Par Inn Jazbo ko Khuda Se naa Jodo,
"Khuda Bhi kisi ke jalwo see Jo naa so paaye",
Aisi Kuch Betuuki Baaton se Inteha Na Ho jaaye

"Khwaish" Keh deta Hai woh Jo uska Dil Kehta Hai
Teri Shaan mein Koi Gustaaki kare Aur "Khwaish" Chup rahe
Khwaish Kabhi Itna Bhi
Kisi Insaan Par Meharbaan Naa Ho Jaaye..

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2010, 11:02:04 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 27, 2010, 10:56:30 AM
WAH KHWAISH JI WAH ,EKDUM SATEEK AUR BADHIYA BAAT KAHI HAI
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MEHBOOB KISI KA KHUDA HOGA,TO SHAYAD USS EK KE LIYE .
KHUDA HUMDARD HAI,MEHBOOB HAI DOONIA MEIN SABHI KE LIYE.

JO KHUDA NE BAKSHA HAI WO KAHAN KISI KI AUKAT KI DE DE.
WO REHNUMA HAI,HUM SAB HAIN SAMANDER KI KUCH HI BOONDE.

TERA MEHBOOB MERA MEHBOOB HAI KHUDA SAB BACHHO KI SI BAATEIN HAIN.
USKI ZAMEEN ,USKA AAFTAAB,USKE FALAK TALE KAATATE SAB RAATEIN HAIN.


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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Shukriya Sureshji..jo aapne apna waqt diya, Shayad Sach bahut Kadwa Tha isliye sirf aapka hi ek reply aaya hai..

Aur Kya Kahoon..Aapne Lajawaab Likha Hai..
Har Sher Seekh deta Hua..Bahut bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 03:23:45 PM »
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Khwaish Dost,

Shayar toh woh hai jo sab cheezon par likhe aur sabse sacha shayar woh hai jo sach par likhe..Apne har baat bilkul sach kahi..Mohobat insaan se hoti hai jabke Allah se toh ishq hota hai..Ager insaan ko Allah ka darja diya jaye toh waqei galat lagta tha..! Bahaut bahaut khoob.!

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Kabhi Do lines likhi thi maine..Apki yeh nazm parr, yaad agayi..

Najane kyun log mehboob ko Khuda ka darja de deta hai Rahim,
Humne aj tak nahin suna kay Khuda ne bewaffai ki ho..!
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2010, 03:25:09 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Suresh jee..Bahaut achi lines... Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2010, 07:03:00 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 27, 2010, 03:23:45 PM
Khwaish Dost,

Shayar toh woh hai jo sab cheezon par likhe aur sabse sacha shayar woh hai jo sach par likhe..Apne har baat bilkul sach kahi..Mohobat insaan se hoti hai jabke Allah se toh ishq hota hai..Ager insaan ko Allah ka darja diya jaye toh waqei galat lagta tha..! Bahaut bahaut khoob.!

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Kabhi Do lines likhi thi maine..Apki yeh nazm parr, yaad agayi..

Najane kyun log mehboob ko Khuda ka darja de deta hai Rahim,
Humne aj tak nahin suna kay Khuda ne bewaffai ki ho..!

Sabse Pehle,teh Dil Se Shukriya bhai rahim Jo Aapne Apna waqt Diya..Aur bhai, Dil waha Bhaut Dukhta Hai Jab Main Aisa Koi Kalaam Padhta Hoon Jahan Khuda Ko Inn Duniyawi Baaton Mein Shaamil kar Lete hai,Kya yeh Kehna Sahi hai Ke Khuda Bhi So Nahi pata Kyonki Kisi Ke Jalwe sone Nahi Dete??

main Hairaan Hoon,Yeh sab padhkar...

chaliye,chodiye inn baaton ko jo mujhe kehna tha,main keh gaya..Baaki Har ek ki apni-apni soch,apne-apne karam hai, aapne saraha..Aapka Teh dil se Shukriya.. icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2010, 07:25:11 PM »
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Kabhi kabhi insaan jazbaat main aake kuch zada likh jata hai..mohobat karna jayaz hai, izhaar karna acha hai mager kis tarha izhar karna chahiye, yeh ek sawal hai..Allah sab ki gustakiyan maaf kare, yehi dua hai..!
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2010, 07:42:24 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 27, 2010, 08:18:30 AM
Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon Padhne Wale Isse Zaroor Samjhe..!!!!

Eh Khuda kahi Mujhse Tu Yuh Juda Na Ho Jaaye
Apne Sanam  Ko Tujhse Jodoon,Mujhse aisi Koi Khata Naa Ho jaaye

Mehboob Ke jalwe Chalti Saanson tak Hi Simit hai,
Eh Khuda Tere Shaan mein Main Kya Kahoon!!!!
Teri jageh par sirf tu hai,
bakhs De Uss bande Ko Jo Sanam Ke jalwo se tujhe Jode,
Bando Ka Baaki Yuh Koi Naam-0-Nishaan Ne ho jaaye

Uss mohabbat ka Kya Wajood
Jo Khuda Aur sanam Mein Koi fark naa Kar sake
"Khwaish" kehta Hai mohabbat karo Par Inn Jazbo ko Khuda Se naa Jodo,
"Khuda Bhi kisi ke jalwo se Jo naa so paaye",
Aisi Kuch Betuuki Baaton se Inteha Na Ho jaaye

"Khwaish" Keh deta Hai woh Jo uska Dil Kehta Hai
Teri Shaan mein Koi Gustaaki kare Aur "Khwaish" Chup rahe
Khwaish Kabhi Itna Bhi
Kisi Insaan Par Meharbaan Naa Ho Jaaye..

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Aapka massage bahut achcha laga hume.... behad sahiN aur achche se farmaya aapne... Log is shayari meiN kahiN bhi kuch bhi likh dete yeh tak khayaal nahi rahta hai unhe ke Khuda ko Khuda hi rahne deN to behtar hai...

Wel aapke ahsaas e jazbe ko salaam...
Likhate rahiye Khush rahiye...

Haan humne jo red highlighted kiya hai... woh aapke massage se puri tarha ulta laga hume aisa hota hai kahna kuch hota hai per shabd kuch aur kah jate hai agar aap thik samjhe to edit kar dijiye...           
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2010, 06:26:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya rahim ji,
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 27, 2010, 03:25:09 PM
Bahaut bahaut khoob Suresh jee..Bahaut achi lines... Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2010, 06:54:40 PM »
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Khawahish Jee aadaab .....
Jee kal hum aapki baat nahi samjhe the .... Aapke PM karne ke bawjood per hum aaj samjh chuke hai ke aapki yeh post kis liye hai..... humne woh post dekhi hai jiske against aapki yeh post hai...... Aapne behad sahiN farmaya hai... Per sab ki apni apni asti hai apni apni ibadat hai.... Hum kisi ko khususan rok nahi sakte..... Gar woh khud samjh jaye to achcah hai....

Khair likhate rahiye....
Aise likhana bahut kargar sabit hota hai....

Likhate rhaiye...
Khush rahiye....
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2010, 02:10:04 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 27, 2010, 08:18:30 AM
Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon Padhne Wale Isse Zaroor Samjhe..!!!!

Eh Khuda kahi Mujhse Tu Yuh Juda Na Ho Jaaye
Apne Sanam  Ko Tujhse Jodoon,Mujhse aisi Koi Khata Naa Ho jaaye

Mehboob Ke jalwe Chalti Saanson tak Hi Simit hai,
Eh Khuda Tere Shaan mein Main Kya Kahoon!!!!
Teri jageh par sirf tu hai,
bakhs De Uss bande Ko Jo Sanam Ke jalwo se tujhe Jode,
Bando Ka Baaki Yuh Koi Naam-0-Nishaan Ne ho jaaye

Uss mohabbat ka Kya Wajood
Jo Khuda Aur sanam Mein Koi fark naa Kar sake
"Khwaish" kehta Hai mohabbat karo Par Inn Jazbo ko Khuda Se naa Jodo,
"Khuda Bhi kisi ke jalwo se Jo naa so paaye",
Aisi Kuch Betuuki Baaton se Inteha Na Ho jaaye

"Khwaish" Keh deta Hai woh Jo uska Dil Kehta Hai
Teri Shaan mein Koi Gustaaki kare Aur "Khwaish" Chup rahe
Khwaish Kabhi Itna Bhi
Kisi Insaan Par Meharbaan Naa Ho Jaaye..

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut khoob

Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 19, 2011, 05:50:31 PM »
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ye poetry to bht acha msg hai…
khuaish ji…
apk jaisi soch mai bhi rakhta hun magar…
maine kuch aise insaan dekhe hain jinhe log khuda to nahi par khuda ka roop jarur kahte hain…
jab koi insaan kisi ke khusi ke lie khud ko kurban kar de, kisi ke ansuo ko ponche, kisi k gamo ko apnaye, kisi ka har kadam sath nibhaye…
aise hi logo ko kuch log khuda ka darja de dete hain…
jabki ye galat hi hai
shayd…

aapke kalaam ko aur soch ko mera salaam
khus rahiye
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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2011, 08:21:55 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 27, 2010, 08:18:30 AM
Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon Padhne Wale Isse Zaroor Samjhe..!!!!

Eh Khuda kahi Mujhse Tu Yuh Juda Na Ho Jaaye
Apne Sanam  Ko Tujhse Jodoon,Mujhse aisi Koi Khata Naa Ho jaaye

Mehboob Ke jalwe Chalti Saanson tak Hi Simit hai,
Eh Khuda Tere Shaan mein Main Kya Kahoon!!!!
Teri jageh par sirf tu hai,
bakhs De Uss bande Ko Jo Sanam Ke jalwo se tujhe Jode,
Bando Ka Baaki Yuh Koi Naam-0-Nishaan Ne ho jaaye

Uss mohabbat ka Kya Wajood
Jo Khuda Aur sanam Mein Koi fark naa Kar sake
"Khwaish" kehta Hai mohabbat karo Par Inn Jazbo ko Khuda Se naa Jodo,
"Khuda Bhi kisi ke jalwo se Jo naa so paaye",
Aisi Kuch Betuuki Baaton se Inteha Na Ho jaaye

"Khwaish" Keh deta Hai woh Jo uska Dil Kehta Hai
Teri Shaan mein Koi Gustaaki kare Aur "Khwaish" Chup rahe
Khwaish Kabhi Itna Bhi
Kisi Insaan Par Meharbaan Naa Ho Jaaye..

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

JANAAB AAPKE MATLE KA KHYAAL BAHUT ACHA HAI

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Quote from: khwaish on August 27, 2010, 08:18:30 AM
Kuch Kehna Chaahta Hoon,Umeed Karta Hoon Padhne Wale Isse Zaroor Samjhe..!!!!

Eh Khuda kahi Mujhse Tu Yuh Juda Na Ho Jaaye
Apne Sanam  Ko Tujhse Jodoon,Mujhse aisi Koi Khata Naa Ho jaaye

Mehboob Ke jalwe Chalti Saanson tak Hi Simit hai,
Eh Khuda Tere Shaan mein Main Kya Kahoon!!!!
Teri jageh par sirf tu hai,
bakhs De Uss bande Ko Jo Sanam Ke jalwo se tujhe Jode,
Bando Ka Baaki Yuh Koi Naam-0-Nishaan Ne ho jaaye

Uss mohabbat ka Kya Wajood
Jo Khuda Aur sanam Mein Koi fark naa Kar sake
"Khwaish" kehta Hai mohabbat karo Par Inn Jazbo ko Khuda Se naa Jodo,
"Khuda Bhi kisi ke jalwo se Jo naa so paaye",
Aisi Kuch Betuuki Baaton se Inteha Na Ho jaaye

"Khwaish" Keh deta Hai woh Jo uska Dil Kehta Hai
Teri Shaan mein Koi Gustaaki kare Aur "Khwaish" Chup rahe
Khwaish Kabhi Itna Bhi
Kisi Insaan Par Meharbaan Naa Ho Jaaye..

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Waah bahut badiya  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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