Eh Mere Janam-Daata Mujhe Humesha Saath Rakhna "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: October 05, 2010, 09:10:37 AM »
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bahut hi khoob rachna pesh ki hai khawaish ji...!! very true..

Kabhi-2 zindagi me har ladki ke dil me aise ehsas jaroor aate hai...par beti beti hi hoti hai sab kuch bhula ke wo hamesha sabse pyaar hi karti hai...

Salute to all girls..

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«Reply #16 on: October 06, 2010, 06:32:24 PM »
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Khwaish dost, aapki nazm dil ko choone waali hai... Kya kahun, shayad ye Hindustan ke ziyadatar girls ke dil ki awaaz hogi... Main apne phone se ye comment de rahi hoon, isiliye ziyada kuch likh nahi paa rahi...inshallah will write more when I get my laptop repaired... Bohot bohot khoob Dost!!!
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«Reply #17 on: October 06, 2010, 06:46:09 PM »
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Thanks a Million my dear fnd Talat, i m sooooooo happy to see u.thankyou sooooooooooooooooo much dear for Appreciatiing... kaash aisa ho ke aap yoindia mein humesha rahe..
Main bhi mobile se reply kar raha hoon,aapka comment dekhkar sach mein raha na gaya..thanks a lotttttttttt
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«Reply #18 on: October 07, 2010, 12:26:31 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on October 05, 2010, 08:44:24 AM
samajhne ko kuchh raha nhai khwaish bhaii..

ek maa ki pooja karo or dusri maa ko jawab do ...maa ko maa se alag samajhne kya matlab he...maa to maa he naaa fir chahe kisi ki bhi hoo..poore sansar ki ya apki apni~

Ji Aapki Baat Bhi sahi hai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #19 on: October 08, 2010, 12:46:24 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on October 05, 2010, 09:10:37 AM
bahut hi khoob rachna pesh ki hai khawaish ji...!! very true..

Kabhi-2 zindagi me har ladki ke dil me aise ehsas jaroor aate hai...par beti beti hi hoti hai sab kuch bhula ke wo hamesha sabse pyaar hi karti hai...

Salute to all girls..

K.Shael


Teh Dil Se Shukriya Shallyji..

Bilkul sacha akha apne..salute to all girls icon_salut
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«Reply #20 on: October 15, 2010, 09:37:24 PM »
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Dil ko hila diya. Rooh mein uttar diya. Bhaut khoob Shayari.
Yeh har larki ki shikayat hai. Aur hum mard log yeh jaantey huwe bhi yeh galti sadyoon se karte aa rehe hain. Kab badle ga ye jamana aur kab bale gain hum insaan.
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«Reply #21 on: May 03, 2011, 10:34:02 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on October 06, 2010, 06:32:24 PM
Khwaish dost, aapki nazm dil ko choone waali hai... Kya kahun, shayad ye Hindustan ke ziyadatar girls ke dil ki awaaz hogi... Main apne phone se ye comment de rahi hoon, isiliye ziyada kuch likh nahi paa rahi...inshallah will write more when I get my laptop repaired... Bohot bohot khoob Dost!!!

Thanks a Million My dear Friend... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: May 03, 2011, 11:00:31 AM »
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Quote from: Anwar Umer Bawany on October 15, 2010, 09:37:24 PM
Dil ko hila diya. Rooh mein uttar diya. Bhaut khoob Shayari.
Yeh har larki ki shikayat hai. Aur hum mard log yeh jaantey huwe bhi yeh galti sadyoon se karte aa rehe hain. Kab badle ga ye jamana aur kab bale gain hum insaan.


Anwar bhai Aapka tehhhh dilll Se Shukriya Jo Aapne In Ehsaaso Ko Itni gehrai se Samjha..

Aur Anwar Bhai, Yeh sab Apne Hi Haath mein, Jab Hum Apne Khayalaat badlenge, Aane Wali Pidhi Bhi zaroor Apni Soch Apne Khayalaton ko zaroor badlenge..

Shuruwat har Insaan Ko pehle Khud Se Hi karni hogi!!!!

Aapka Bhaut Bahut Shukriya!!
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«Reply #23 on: August 20, 2011, 09:35:14 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 04, 2010, 02:50:39 PM
Khawahish jee Aadaab!

Feelings and expression are realy mindblowing...
Hume padhte waqt aisa kahiN bhi nahi laga ke yeH feelings kisi male ki likhi hai.....

Aapne behad khoob likha hai daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         


Muaafi chaahta Hoon Parwaaz Ji, bahut der Baad iss Comment par meri nazar Gayi..

Aapne Apna waqt diya Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Bhai icon_flower
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«Reply #24 on: January 01, 2012, 08:32:23 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish ji
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«Reply #25 on: October 11, 2012, 05:38:48 AM »
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tere agan ko chode aaj chali main maa,
apna batchpan yahi chode chali main,
tere aanchal me sada mujshe pyar hi mila,
hoti kya hai gum ki chao yeh na jaan saki me,

badta yeh kadam yaad batchpan ki dilata hai,
her ek pal maa pyar ko tere dil mera tarshta hai,

jate jate maa bus ek baat kehti hu,
huyi jo musjhe koi khata to maaf kerna,
dasut jamane ka nibhati hu, beti hu paraya dhan hu aaj jati hu,
lakin maa ghar se jaa rhi hu tere dil se nahi,
jo kabhi dil tujhse ko pukare to sun lena,
ghar se bida kerna apne dil se kabhi na,

yeh bidai to main seh jaungi, tere dil ki bidai na seh sankugi mer jaungi,

ghar se jana hai musjeh lakin tere dil se na jaungi
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«Reply #26 on: October 12, 2012, 01:14:39 AM »
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very nice Khwaish ji,really you have put lot of efforts in this creations.God bless you.
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«Reply #27 on: September 16, 2016, 09:58:17 AM »
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very nice  love9
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