ek baar to................mamta bajpai

by mamta bajpai on July 25, 2010, 05:17:09 PM
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SHIKASTA  QADAMO SE BHI CHAL KAR AAYA HOTA
USNE IK BAAR TO KHATIR SE BULAYA HOTA

YUN NA KAT-TA SAFAR BEDARI ME TANHA APNA
MUJHKO IK BAAR TO THAPKI SE SULAYA HOTA

BENATEEJA HI RAHE TAWAAF TERE KOOCHE KE
DEEDAR IK BAAR TO APNA KARAYA HOTA

MUNASIB-O-MOUJOON ME MUMKIN NAHI USKA BAYAAN
TAARUF IK BAAR TO USKA KARAYA HOTA

KYA BADI BAAT JO MAIKHANE SE TOUBA KARTE
HI!IK BAAR TO NIGAHON SE PILAYA HOTA
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2010, 05:34:02 PM »
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Nice poem Mamta-di...as usual.....
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 25, 2010, 05:17:09 PM
SHIKASTA  QADAMO SE BHI CHAL KAR AAYA HOTA
USNE IK BAAR TO KHATIR SE BULAYA HOTA

YUN NA KAT-TA SAFAR BEDARI ME TANHA APNA
MUJHKO IK BAAR TO THAPKI SE SULAYA HOTA

BENATEEJA HI RAHE TAWAAF TERE KOOCHE KE
DEEDAR IK BAAR TO APNA KARAYA HOTA

MUNASIB-O-MOUJOON ME MUMKIN NAHI USKA BAYAAN
TAARUF IK BAAR TO USKA KARAYA HOTA

KYA BADI BAAT JO MAIKHANE SE TOUBA KARTE
HI!IK BAAR TO NIGAHON SE PILAYA HOTA
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2010, 05:22:14 AM »
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THANKS KOYAL!
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2010, 06:06:12 AM »
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aap bahut achcha likhti hai mamta ji aapka likhne ka andaz dil ko choo jata hai bahut badiya
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2010, 08:15:08 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SAYAD JI!AAP NE WAQT DIYA OR KALAAM KO SARAHA BEHAD SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2010, 11:38:03 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI
BAHUT KHOOB MAMTA JI

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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2010, 12:04:46 PM »
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wah wah wah mamta ji... bahut hi sunder likhtey hai aap... wah

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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2010, 12:45:13 PM »
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shukriya Mohsinji !
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2010, 12:46:20 PM »
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thanks  Jasbirsinghji!
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«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2010, 04:08:03 AM »
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bht hi khubsurat gazal mamta ji...bas gungunate rahe hum to kaafi der tak..

gar ek bar jo aankho sepilaya hota
nasha umar bhar na fir utar paya hota

dedeke sula dete jo thapki tumko
tumne aaj ye mukaam zindagi me na paaya hota

shikast zindagi ki humne apne naam na ki hoti
aaj zamane ne tumhe na palkon pe apni bithaya hota

haan bewafa kehde tu aaj mujhko koi gum nahin
na karte bewafai to ye dard tere lafzon me na aaya hota...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2010, 05:09:37 AM »
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WAAAAAH KYA BAAT KAH DI HAI KASAK JI AAP NE.MA'QOOL JAWAB DENE ME AAP SIDH-HAST HAIN.AISA LAGA JAISE KISI NE UDHRHE ZAKHM KO APNI PALKON SE HAWA DI HO.BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA KASAK JI!
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«Reply #11 on: July 27, 2010, 05:10:42 AM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 27, 2010, 06:31:26 AM »
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shukriya Rajeshji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 30, 2010, 12:57:20 PM »
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Wah wah Mamta ji bahot behtreen takhleeq hai ye aapki. Padhkar achha laga. Ye lines sabse khoobsurat lagi:

BENATEEJA HI RAHE TAWAAF TERE KOOCHE KE
DEEDAR IK BAAR TO APNA KARAYA HOTA
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«Reply #14 on: July 30, 2010, 01:28:40 PM »
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SHUKRIYA RIYAAZ JI AGAR ISLAAH KARTE TO OR BHI BEHATAR HOTA.
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