~*~ Ek hamsafar ki kwahish ~*~ by Rahim

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Tanhai ko chup chap peeta musafir,
Toot kar bhi muskura kay chalta musafir..

Geet kay shabd kay sabab, ashkon main doob jata,
Akhir udaas rehkar, tu kya pata musafir..

Istemal karke phenk dete hai hamsafar sab,
Jo mohobat deta, bas wohi nahin kisi ko pata musafir..

Din bhar duniya ko hasata phirta hai woh,
Raaton ko wohi takiya apna bheegata musafir..

Jab bhi kalam uthayi, ashkon ko lavzon main sajaya,
Kyun khumar nahin bikherta hai yeh musafir..

Hass kar salam karna, jeena bhi toh bilkul ‘Khamosh’,
Haan mager apni nazmon main kafi cheekta musafir..

Ae Khuda teri rahemat ki bahaut qadar karta hai yeh banda,
Tere darr pe apna sar jhuka kar shukar karta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Shikayat nahin mager bas ek humsafar ki khwaish rakhta hai musafir..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 03:18:57 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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waah bhai bahot khoob
kaafi dino baad aapka kalaam padha
dil khus ho gaya
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 03:30:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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Bahut Bahut umda Rahim jee
bade maasooom lafjo me bayaanee kee hai aapne
padh ke bahut accha laga..
ek kasak se uthti hai..
ashaay sa mahsoos karta hai dil.. na jaane kyoN
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bahut khub  bahut hi umda bahut hi lajawab qalaam rahim ji dhero daad aur mubrakbaad........

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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 06:18:22 PM »
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hats off to u Rahim sahab... Usual Smile

lajawaab hai ye kalaam.. laakho daad...
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2012, 09:30:13 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 06, 2012, 03:16:40 PM
Tanhai ko chup chap peeta musafir,
Toot kar bhi muskura kay chalta musafir..

Geet kay shabd kay sabab, ashkon main doob jata,
Akhir udaas rehkar, tu kya pata musafir..

Istemal karke phenk dete hai hamsafar sab,
Jo mohobat deta, bas wohi nahin kisi ko pata musafir..

Din bhar duniya ko hasata phirta hai woh,
Raaton ko wohi takiya apna bheegata musafir..

Jab bhi kalam uthayi, ashkon ko lavzon main sajaya,
Kyun khumar nahin bikherta hai yeh musafir..

Hass kar salam karna, jeena bhi toh bilkul ‘Khamosh’,
Haan mager apni nazmon main kafi cheekta musafir..

Ae Khuda teri rahemat ki bahaut qadar karta hai yeh banda,
Tere darr pe apna sar jhuka kar shukar karta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Shikayat nahin mager bas ek humsafar ki khwaish rakhta hai musafir..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2012, 11:28:47 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 06, 2012, 03:18:57 PM
waah waah bahut khoob
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Saini jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: nirala on August 06, 2012, 03:26:59 PM
waah bhai bahot khoob
kaafi dino baad aapka kalaam padha
dil khus ho gaya
Nirala mere dost,
haan kafi dino baad kuch likh paya hoon..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 06, 2012, 03:30:29 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Kapil dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2012, 06:42:55 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 06, 2012, 03:16:40 PM
Tanhai ko chup chap peeta musafir,
Toot kar bhi muskura kay chalta musafir..

Geet kay shabd kay sabab, ashkon main doob jata,
Akhir udaas rehkar, tu kya pata musafir..

Istemal karke phenk dete hai hamsafar sab,
Jo mohobat deta, bas wohi nahin kisi ko pata musafir..

Din bhar duniya ko hasata phirta hai woh,
Raaton ko wohi takiya apna bheegata musafir..

Jab bhi kalam uthayi, ashkon ko lavzon main sajaya,
Kyun khumar nahin bikherta hai yeh musafir..

Hass kar salam karna, jeena bhi toh bilkul ‘Khamosh’,
Haan mager apni nazmon main kafi cheekta musafir..

Ae Khuda teri rahemat ki bahaut qadar karta hai yeh banda,
Tere darr pe apna sar jhuka kar shukar karta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Shikayat nahin mager bas ek humsafar ki khwaish rakhta hai musafir..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


Bahut bahut Khooob Dost !!!

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Quote from: mkv on August 06, 2012, 03:54:51 PM
Bahut Bahut umda Rahim jee
bade maasooom lafjo me bayaanee kee hai aapne
padh ke bahut accha laga..
ek kasak se uthti hai..
ashaay sa mahsoos karta hai dil.. na jaane kyoN
MKV jee,
bas dil ki baat dil tak ponchi hai..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 07:00:42 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 06, 2012, 05:16:20 PM
bahut khub  bahut hi umda bahut hi lajawab qalaam rahim ji dhero daad aur mubrakbaad........

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Soudagar jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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