**Ek haseen sa ajnabi** by Rahim

by dead heart on February 19, 2010, 02:58:44 PM
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Yeh kalam ek ajnabi ke naam hai...Bada haseen ajnabi tha...Pata nahin kaun thi mager dil choo gayi..Yeh uss ajnabi ko dedicated hai...

Masoomiyat unke chehre se beh rahi thi shabnam ki tarha,
Anjan hum unse aur who humse thi bilkul na-mile logon ki tarha…

Masroof the who apne kam main itna ke bhool baithe hum samne hai,
Hum bhi unpar like rahe the unhe dekh kar bilkul choron ki tarha…

Unki nigahon main dikh raha tha kuch chup mager sailabi sapno ka manzar,
Shayad unki khwahishat bhi adhuri rehgayi; humare sapnon ki tarha…

Woh mere saath hokar bhi saath na thi ‘Rahim’,
Par unka ehsaas dil main lag raha tha behti fiza ki tarha…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2010, 03:05:05 PM »
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behtareen rahim bhai...masha allah.. Usual Smile
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2010, 03:07:52 PM »
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Shukriya Bhai...
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2010, 03:38:25 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   RAHIM JI.....


"EK HASEEN SA AJNABI" MERE SAAMNE THA KABHI
DEKH KAR HI JISE MERE DIL MEIN AAG THI LAGI
HIMAAT NAHI THEE USEY KUCH KAHE PAANE KI
AAJ TAK USKE YAADON KI AAG NAHIN HAI BUJI...
           "EK HASEEN SA AJNABI"
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2010, 08:22:29 PM »
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Shukriya aur Nice lines Cara jee..
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2010, 04:41:22 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Rahim bhai aur Cara ji,kamaal ke likha aap dono ne.great work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2010, 12:48:41 PM »
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Shukriya Madhu di aur Kaash bhaijan...
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2010, 08:28:45 PM »
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waah rahim ji kaafi dino baad apka likha hua kuch padhne ko mila bahut hi khoob likha hai..aaj kal merre khayalo mein bhi koi ajnabi hi basa hai aur apke ye lafz MERRE AJNABI ko bhi bakhubi darshate hai...thnx ji n really nice...ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2010, 01:25:28 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee...Haan ek arsa hogaya likhe hue..Bas yeh ajnabi samne thi toh kalam bolne lag gayi...
Ohoo toh koi khayalon main hai...Hmm ek shaer dimak main agaya yeh baat sunkar ke koi khayalon main hai..Pata nahin ke apke situation ko match karta hai ya nahin...Ager galat kehdia kuch toh maaf karna...


Kisi ke khayalon main gum rehte ho aaj kal,
Shayad Rahim tujhe mohobat hogayi hai...
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2010, 01:28:03 PM »
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Waise toh original shaer hai:

Raaton ko karwatein le rahe ho neend nahin ati hai,
Shayad Rahim tujhe mohobat hogayi hai...

Apne khayalon ka zikr kia isiliye pehli line badal di thi...
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2010, 03:13:23 PM »
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ji bahut khoob..dono hi merre khayalo ko match karte hai..main iska jawab likhne ki koshish karti hu...

Akhir jaan hi liya tune merre chehre ki haseen se,
jane kab se iss ehsas ko sine mein basa rakha tha,
haan ho gyi hai mujhe unse mhbt ae dost..
jis ajnabi ko maine apne lafzo mein chhupa rakha tha......
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2010, 03:35:09 PM »
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Hae Hae wah wah...Dua karunga apki mohobat kamyab rahe...Unka dil khud ke liye nahin balke tumhare liye dhadke...Dua hai Rahim ki...Dil se!!! Ameen!! Waise ek sawal, hope its nt too personal...Uss ajnabi ko bataya ke hogayi hai apko unse mohobat?


Mohobat ke ehsaason ko zada der khud main basa ke rakhna ae dost,
Kehta hai Rahim ek darr ke saath; kahin der na hojae...
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«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2010, 09:05:07 PM »
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ji nhi abhi tak kuch kaha nhi aur shayad keh bhi na pau...khuda chahega tou humn ek ho hi jayenga...

Mhbt ka ikrar karne mein abhi der hai,
uske bus ek ishare ka intezaar hai,
vo dikha de koi raasta use paane ka..
phir keh dungi use ki mujhe tujhse sirrf tujhise pyar hai......
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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2010, 09:14:59 PM »
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wow lovely lines Geet ji and Rahim bhai.likhte rahiyega.aur Geet mujhse mat chupana ok.kaun hai woh. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Winking
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2010, 09:34:06 PM »
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he he he madhu ji apko bataya tou tha... nywayz thnx ji...
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