-----/// Ek haseenaa /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on October 11, 2012, 03:23:20 PM
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shaam     us   hasi   ko  maine  sajte   sanwarte  dekhaa
fir   aake   khidki    pe    use    maine  theherte  dekhaa

berang  thaa   chaand   bhi   jab  niklaa  wo  shaam  ko
chaand  ko  uski  chamak  se   maine   nikharte  dekhaa

yun    to   koi   dikhtaa   nahi   uski   gali  me  din  bhar
shaam  bheed  ko   uski   gali  se  hoke guzarte dekhaa

gulaabi    honth  , nashili   aankhen , khule   zulf   uske
haaye, aashiqon ko maine rozaanaa uspe marte dekhaa

machaltaa   thaa    dil  meraa   bhi   usse  milne  ke  liye
dekh  ke  mujhe  use   kal  maine  aahen bharte dekhaa

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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2012, 03:26:19 PM »
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waaaaaah sir ji........ bahut hi khoob.......
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2012, 03:35:08 PM »
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Waah bahut-bahut khubsurat....
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2012, 04:04:59 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2012, 04:19:07 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 11, 2012, 03:23:20 PM
shaam     us   hasi   ko  maine  sajte   sanwarte  dekhaa
fir   aake   khidki    pe    use    maine  theherte  dekhaa

berang  thaa   chaand   bhi   jab  niklaa  wo  shaam  ko
chaand  ko  uski  chamak  se   maine   nikharte  dekhaa

yun    to   koi   dikhtaa   nahi   uski   gali  me  din  bhar
shaam  bheed  ko   uski   gali  se  hoke guzarte dekhaa

gulaabi    honth  , nashili   aankhen , khule   zulf   uske
haaye, aashiqon ko maine rozaanaa uspe marte dekhaa

machaltaa   thaa    dil  meraa   bhi   usse  milne  ke  liye
dekh  ke  mujhe  use   kal  maine  aahen bharte dekhaa

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bhai sach batap last line jhooth hai na ---hehehe tongue3

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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2012, 05:09:26 PM »
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wah wah wah bahut hi umda creation kapil bhai...



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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2012, 05:38:54 PM »
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Ek Haseena Aur Ek Uska Deewana!!!! Very Sweet!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2012, 08:00:29 PM »
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Kapil jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH Kapil Jee kia kahne Bhai waaH bahut hi
khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab..
Kia kaheN behad pyaare ahsaas O khayaal aur umdaa adaygi
gazab kar diyaa janab gazab.... Usual Smile

Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...                   
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2012, 04:09:06 AM »
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very nice kapil ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2012, 09:18:47 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2012, 10:44:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Vimmi ji....!!!

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waaaaaah sir ji........ bahut hi khoob.......
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«Reply #11 on: October 14, 2012, 05:11:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Gaytri ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: October 15, 2012, 11:26:53 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 11, 2012, 03:23:20 PM
shaam     us   hasi   ko  maine  sajte   sanwarte  dekhaa
fir   aake   khidki    pe    use    maine  theherte  dekhaa

berang  thaa   chaand   bhi   jab  niklaa  wo  shaam  ko
chaand  ko  uski  chamak  se   maine   nikharte  dekhaa

yun    to   koi   dikhtaa   nahi   uski   gali  me  din  bhar
shaam  bheed  ko   uski   gali  se  hoke guzarte dekhaa

gulaabi    honth  , nashili   aankhen , khule   zulf   uske
haaye, aashiqon ko maine rozaanaa uspe marte dekhaa

machaltaa   thaa    dil  meraa   bhi   usse  milne  ke  liye
dekh  ke  mujhe  use   kal  maine  aahen bharte dekhaa

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Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Hriday Ji,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahein,.
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«Reply #14 on: October 15, 2012, 03:29:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa bhai.. waise last line nahi... poori ki poori rachna hi jhoot hai.. just imagination... tongue3

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