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Husn hai rang hai shokhiyan hai ada hai usme
ek hi jaam hai magar kitni sharabon wala
gazal hai nazm hai shayri ka rutba hai usme
lagta hai khandan hai nawabon wala
komal hai mehak hai phulo si khubsurti hai usme
lagta hai uska roop hai baharon wala
madhosh naina khilkhilata chehra beshumar pyar hai usme
lagta hai wo sanam hai mera khawabon wala
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2012, 02:36:49 PM » |
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Husn hai rang hai shokhiyan hai ada hai usme
ek hi jaam hai magar kitni sharabo wala
gazal hai nazm hai shayri ka rutba hai usme
lagta hai khandan hai nawabo wala
komal hai mehak hai phulo si najukta hai usme
lagta hai uska roop hai baharo wala
madhosh naina khilkhilata chehra beshumar pyar hai usme
lagta hai wo sanam hai mera khawabo wala
Bahut bhaut mast qalaam Soudagar ji bahut behtrien peskash aur khwaais ke liye ek Rau bhi.... |
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sksaini4
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2012, 02:55:55 PM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2012, 03:19:15 PM » |
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boht khub pankaj ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2012, 04:07:25 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
2nd and 4th are the best..
vaise poori kalaam hi badi sundarta se likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2012, 04:52:19 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya pankaj ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2012, 04:55:17 PM » |
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shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2012, 04:56:15 PM » |
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shukriya sahil ji.....
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2012, 04:57:13 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2012, 04:58:48 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji.
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2012, 05:57:22 PM » |
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nice apni shayeri se auro ke muh pe lagaa deta hai wo taala ha shayed wo wahi hai jhoot ko bhi sach mei badalne wala Husn hai rang hai shokhiyan hai ada hai usme
ek hi jaam hai magar kitni sharabon wala
gazal hai nazm hai shayri ka rutba hai usme
lagta hai khandan hai nawabon wala
komal hai mehak hai phulo si khubsurti hai usme
lagta hai uska roop hai baharon wala
madhosh naina khilkhilata chehra beshumar pyar hai usme
lagta hai wo sanam hai mera khawabon wala
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2012, 06:33:38 PM » |
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aaj pehli baar aap ki shayari padh raha hoon. kafi alag taste hai aap ki shayari me. Padh ke achha laga
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2012, 06:38:49 PM » |
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Husn hai rang hai shokhiyan hai ada hai usme
ek hi jaam hai magar kitni sharabon wala
gazal hai nazm hai shayri ka rutba hai usme
lagta hai khandan hai nawabon wala
komal hai mehak hai phulo si khubsurti hai usme
lagta hai uska roop hai baharon wala
madhosh naina khilkhilata chehra beshumar pyar hai usme
lagta hai wo sanam hai mera khawabon wala
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2012, 06:49:47 PM » |
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bohot khooooobsurat ... bhooot badia
dheroon daad
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