Ek hi tamanna,maut ho neend mein sote sote....cara

by cara on September 05, 2012, 06:38:49 AM
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Ek hi tamanna,maut ho neend mein sote-sote
jaye jab bhi jaghse,jaye neend mein sote-sote

Kya rakha hai dard ke siwa
har koi jee raha rote-rote

Nafrat hi nafrat pal rahi hai har jagha
jise dekho nazar aata dushmani ke bee bote-bote

Insano mein insaniyat bachi hai kahan
haiwan bankar aapas mein lardte-marte

Naam ke bade bade dhanwan hai yahan
par kaam karte sabhi chote-chote

Kaun karta bhi hai sacha pyar kisi se
mohabbat mein bhi milte hai dhokhe-dhokhe

Attankiyon ka bhi saya mandrata hai har jagah
dar lagta hai kahin jism ke tukde na ho jaye chalte-chalte

Kisi ka bura naho hamse kisi ki baddua na lage
kahin peeda mein na jeena pade marte-marte

Bahut hi katheen hai zindagi yaron
kam se kam maut ho saral ke aajaye neend mein sote-sote..
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2012, 06:43:25 AM »
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waah waah bahut sunder
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2012, 09:38:39 AM »
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bahut badhiya....
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2012, 10:23:12 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  khoobsurat ehsaas, khoobsurat bayaani.. bahut khoobsurat rachna Cara ji... !!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2012, 04:57:16 PM »
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Cara jee Aadaab
aapse ye pahli mulaakaat hai.
behad aalaa darje ka kalaam likha hai aapne.
MAI TO YE KAHUNGA..KI HAZAARO LAAKHON ME SE KISI EK KI YE KHWAHISH hoti hai..jo 1st sher me likha aapne.
It's reflects your nature..i can guess a lot now..
hab bas duaa hi kar sakte hai..But this is something which is very precious in this mortal world..How intelligent you are..i can easily understand.
God bless you.
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 05:00:58 PM »
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Ek hi tamanna,maut ho neend mein sote-sote
jaye jab bhi jaghse,jaye neend mein sote-sote

Kya rakha hai dard ke siwa
har koi jee raha rote-rote

Nafrat hi nafrat pal rahi hai har jagha
jise dekho nazar aata dushmani ke bee bote-bote

Insano mein insaniyat bachi hai kahan
haiwan bankar aapas mein lardte-marte

Naam ke bade bade dhanwan hai yahan
par kaam karte sabhi chote-chote

Kaun karta bhi hai sacha pyar kisi se
mohabbat mein bhi milte hai dhokhe-dhokhe

Attankiyon ka bhi saya mandrata hai har jagah
dar lagta hai kahin jism ke tukde na ho jaye chalte-chalte

Kisi ka bura naho hamse kisi ki baddua na lage
kahin peeda mein na jeena pade marte-marte

Bahut hi katheen hai zindagi yaron
kam se kam maut ho saral ke aajaye neend mein sote-sote..

bahut khoob likha hai aapne cara sb. Your creation touched my soul.
god bless
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2012, 05:40:56 PM »
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Cara ji bahut khoobi se aaj ke zamane ko bayaan kiya hai aapne. Applause Applause Applause
 bahut khoob
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