Ek Hum Hi Hai Jo kuch Nahi Jaante "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 28, 2010, 10:55:29 AM
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Aaj Subeh Main Ek sarkaari Office mein Gaya Tha,Ek bahut Zaroori Kaam Se,Waha Par Logon Ke Kaam Karne Ke Tareeke Ko dekh Kar Main Hairaan Reh gaya..Sach Kahoon To Bahut Mehnat Aur Mushakat ke Baad, Main Apna Kaam Karwa Paaya..Jab main Woh Office Se Nikla,Yuh Mehsoos Hua Jaise Main Koi Jung Jeetkar Aaya Hoon..Jab ki Kaam Bahut Asaan Tha Par Kya Kahoon!!! Jab Bhi Main Kuch Sawaal Puchu,Mujhe Iss nazar Se Dekha Jaata Tha Ke Main Koi Bewakuffi Se Bhara Hua Sawaal Puch Raha Hoon..Bas issi Soch Ko Zehan Mein rakh kar Kuch Instant sa Likh Gaya..

"Black Humour" Se Bhari iss Kavita Ko padhiyega Zaroor


Chot Zindagi Ne di kuch iss Tarah Gehri Humko
Ab To Subeh Bhi Lagti hai Dhoopehri Humko..

har Jagah Bin rishwat Ke koi Kaam nahi!!!
Ab To Yeh Zindagi roz-aana Lagti Hai kacheri Humko

Sarkari naukri Ka Yehi Matlab Hai Ab!!!
Kaam Mile kam Aur Neend Chahiye Gehri Humko

Kuch sawaal Puchu To Jawaab Itna Atpatta Sa!!
Ek hum Hi hai Jo Kuch Nahi Jaante!!!
Baaki Yeh Afsar To lagte Hai Bade Shehari Humko

"Khwaish" Aaj Ghanto kataar mein
 Tehar Kar Kaam Apna Karwa Gaya!!!
Aaj Ki Shaam chahiye Badi Sunehri Humko..

            ~~~~~khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 11:06:01 AM »
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Aaj Subeh Main Ek sarkaari Office mein Gaya Tha,Ek bahut Zaroori Kaam Se,Waha Par Logon Ke Kaam Karne Ke Tareeke Ko dekh Kar Main Hairaan Reh gaya..Sach Kahoon To Bahut Mehnat Aur Mushakat ke Baad, Main Apna Kaam Karwa Paaya..Jab main Woh Office Se Nikla,Yuh Mehsoos Hua Jaise Main Koi Jung Jeetkar Aaya Hoon..Jab ki Kaam Bahut Asaan Tha Par Kya Kahoon!!! Jab Bhi Main Kuch Sawaal Puchu,Mujhe Iss nazar Se Dekha Jaata Tha Ke Main Koi Bewakuffi Se Bhara Hua Sawaal Puch Raha Hoon..Bas issi Soch Ko Zehan Mein rakh kar Kuch Instant sa Likh Gaya..

"Black Humour" Se Bhari iss Kavita Ko padhiyega Zaroor


Chot Zindagi Ne di kuch iss Tarah Gehri Humko
Ab To Subeh Bhi Lagti hai Dhoopehri Humko..

har Jagah Bin rishwat Ke koi Kaam nahi!!!
Ab To Yeh Zindagi roz-aana Lagti Hai kacheri Humko

Sarkari naukri Ka Yehi Matlab Hai Ab!!!
Kaam Mile kam Aur Neend Chahiye Gehri Humko

Kuch sawaal Puchu To Jawaab Itna Atpatta Sa!!
Ek hum Hi hai Jo Kuch Nahi Jaante!!!
Baaki Yeh Afsar To lagte Hai Bade Shehari Humko

"Khwaish" Aaj Ghanto kataar mein
 Tehar Kar Kaam Apna Karwa Gaya!!!
Aaj Ki Shaam chahiye Badi Sunehri Humko..

            ~~~~~khwaish~~~~~


Sachi gal kitti hai khwaish ji jado vi mainu koi govt office wich kam hunda hai taa pehla sochna penda hai ki kaam tou pare kinne paise alag tou lenjane penge kam karaan layi..hor chhote jaye kam nu dina ch karwana painda hai kade kuch kade kuch lagya hi rehnda hai..bahut wadiya tusi sarkari kam nu leke apni kavita likhi hai...jane kad ae sarkar hor sarkari karamchari sudharange..bahut wadiya ji..take care...
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 12:29:10 PM »
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khwaish ji........

bht practicle baal kahi he apne.....haqiqat me is se bhi jayda bura haal he ....ye to bht kam he......sahi he rula dete he ye log agar apka kaam pad jaye to......aur sabse badi baat itna karte he wo to galat he hi usper is tarah se react karte he jese hume oblize kiya he .ehasaan kiya ho hum pe.........bht bth aacha sach lkiha he apne...
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2010, 12:38:04 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 28, 2010, 11:06:01 AM
Sachi gal kitti hai khwaish ji jado vi mainu koi govt office wich kam hunda hai taa pehla sochna penda hai ki kaam tou pare kinne paise alag tou lenjane penge kam karaan layi..hor chhote jaye kam nu dina ch karwana painda hai kade kuch kade kuch lagya hi rehnda hai..bahut wadiya tusi sarkari kam nu leke apni kavita likhi hai...jane kad ae sarkar hor sarkari karamchari sudharange..bahut wadiya ji..take care...

Geetji,Sabto pehle Tuada Teh dil to shukriya ke tussi eh kavita padhi hai,Aur ji bilkul sach keha hai tusi, bahut mushkil ho jaanda hai apna kaam karwaana, chalo, jo vi hai, eh system te ehi hai..Unn rabb hi maalik hai..
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 12:44:27 PM »
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Hahahahahahahaha bahaut hasaya diya apki iss kavita ne dost..
Jab title parra toh aisa laga kuch serious topic hai..
Mager bahaut hi zada light sa aur sacha topic hai..
'Jung kay medan se nikla hoon'.hehehe..
Bahaut acha izhaar kiya hai apne haal..
Applause Applause
Dher sari daad..
Khush rahiye..
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 01:12:58 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 28, 2010, 12:29:10 PM
khwaish ji........

bht practicle baal kahi he apne.....haqiqat me is se bhi jayda bura haal he ....ye to bht kam he......sahi he rula dete he ye log agar apka kaam pad jaye to......aur sabse badi baat itna karte he wo to galat he hi usper is tarah se react karte he jese hume oblize kiya he .ehasaan kiya ho hum pe.........bht bth aacha sach lkiha he apne...

matrix ji..Sabse Pehle,aapka tehhhhhhhh dil se shukriya,jo apna apna waqt diya.....Main Aapko Kuch kehna Chahunga..

Maine aapki recently likhi hui ek kavita Padhi Thi, "bharat Desh" Par..mujhe personally aapki woh kavita bahut pasand Aayi..phir maine ussi thread mein Kisi shaks ka ek comment padha tha, ke aisa likhna asaan hai par Practically Hum hi Hai jo iss system ko kharaab karte hai, kyonki hum bhi iss Corruption ka ek hissa hai, mujhe uss shaks ki yeh baat sahi lagi ke haan,hum bhi kahin na kahin Shortcuts dhoondhte hai....Par Hum Kare bhi to kya?? Agar Jis speed par kaam hota ahi,uss hisaab se mera yeh kaam hoye tak 4-5 din lag jaate..

Politically Correct keh Dena Asaan Hai Par Iss Baat Ko Nibhaana Mushkil..
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 01:28:27 PM »
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wah wah Khwahish ji ---
ekdum reality show ka nazaara karwa dia aapne.
dil zigra khushi se jhuma dia fir se wahh.
maine ek baar KillBill ji ke kisi post ke ek line ko notice kiya tha--
"" jo jitna chhota hai
        woh utna hi khota hai ""
aapne jo likha sahi likha.
lekin imaandaari to ab bhi hai janaab--tabhi to desh thoda sa bacha hua hai.
bharosa krna hi padega aakhir--
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sau me assi beimaan
fir bhi hai mera desh mahaan
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thanx
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 02:14:15 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 28, 2010, 01:12:58 PM
matrix ji..Sabse Pehle,aapka tehhhhhhhh dil se shukriya,jo apna apna waqt diya.....Main Aapko Kuch kehna Chahunga..

Maine aapki recently likhi hui ek kavita Padhi Thi, "bharat Desh" Par..mujhe personally aapki woh kavita bahut pasand Aayi..phir maine ussi thread mein Kisi shaks ka ek comment padha tha, ke aisa likhna asaan hai par Practically Hum hi Hai jo iss system ko kharaab karte hai, kyonki hum bhi iss Corruption ka ek hissa hai, mujhe uss shaks ki yeh baat sahi lagi ke haan,hum bhi kahin na kahin Shortcuts dhoondhte hai....Par Hum Kare bhi to kya?? Agar Jis speed par kaam hota ahi,uss hisaab se mera yeh kaam hoye tak 4-5 din lag jaate..

Politically Correct keh Dena Asaan Hai Par Iss Baat Ko Nibhaana Mushkil..

sahi he khwaish ji ........hume khud ko to sabse pahle badalna hoga.....isiliye mene usme likha tha ki hume apne apne level per try jarur karna chahiye....
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2010, 05:26:01 PM »
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khwaish bro bilkul durust farmaya aapne.....mere apne bhi kuch anubhav aise rahe hain.....bahrhaal mai ye bhi manta hun ki imaandaari abhi tak jinda hai.....aur isase jude anubhav bhi hain mere paas......aur ye baat bhi sach hai..ki shuruaat khud se hi karni padegi hume......bahoot achche vishay ko chuna aapne kavita ke liye badhai
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2010, 06:18:33 PM »
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Waah Khwaaish Bhai, Aapne To Government Office Ka Bohat Achche Andaaz Mein Bhedd Khola Hai,.

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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 06:54:23 PM »
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good one ji Khwaish ji...

Intezar !
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2010, 07:07:02 AM »
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WAH WAH KHWAISHJI......... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
BAHUT SAHI AUR SATEEK BAAT JAANI AAPNE.
LEKIN ISS BAAT KI WAJAH BHI JAANI AAPNE.
KABHI YUN BHI KARNA UNKI KURSI PE BAITH KE
DOOSRI DISHA KA NAZAARA BHI HAI KARNA AAPNE.
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2010, 02:26:27 PM »
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Khwaish jee! ye kalaam  sarkari mahkame  me moujooda haalaat par teekhaa vyang hai...lekin in haalaat ko mahsoos kar kavitaa kee shaql me pesh karnaa nihaayat hee zaheen shkhsiyat kaa kaam hai aur aap ne woh kaam anjaam diyaa...dheroN daad ke haqdaar haiN aap ...meri or se bhee bahut bahut badhai.......
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«Reply #13 on: December 31, 2010, 09:10:09 AM »
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Aapne bilkul sahi kaha khawaish ji
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 28, 2010, 12:44:27 PM
Hahahahahahahaha bahaut hasaya diya apki iss kavita ne dost..
Jab title parra toh aisa laga kuch serious topic hai..
Mager bahaut hi zada light sa aur sacha topic hai..
'Jung kay medan se nikla hoon'.hehehe..
Bahaut acha izhaar kiya hai apne haal..
Applause Applause
Dher sari daad..
Khush rahiye..

Mere Bhai, Aap Haste Rahe Aur Khush Rahe Humein Aur Kya Chahiye..haan yeh Kavita Likhte waqt mere chere par bhi muskaan Bandhi Rahi..Ke Iss Serious Topic ko Light tareeke Se Pesh karoon..Bahut bahut Shukriya AAPKA
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