ek jawab chahiye...!!!

by Manav Mehra on August 19, 2007, 04:56:46 PM
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"Manav" adhure hain mere khawab,
har khawab ka ek shahokar chahiye

de sake jo ashru-numa motiyon ki keemat
aaisa koi ek deewana saaudaGaar chahiye

umarbhar kiya hai maine sauda tujhse
ajj mujhe mere dukhon ka talabGaar chahiye

har tukra samet kar jo mujhe phir se bana de
"manasi" aaisa mujhe tujhse,ek jawab chahiye
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2007, 08:17:59 AM »
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Usual Smile

manav G

mansi G ko ap yoindia bula le , hum mana lenge unhe apke liye
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2007, 03:48:25 AM »
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so sweet of u sahiba ji....


milne se abb jo hain katra rahe kabse
yahan par bhulane se bhi kaise aayeinge

phir bhi,ki thi darkhast aa kar jawab de jaye
bole,kaise teri mehfil mein hum aa payeinge?

abh toh "sahiba ji" woh teh kar chuke hain
aseem fasla humse rakh kar,humein tadapayienge

likheinge sabke liye,sab ke sath kahin na kahin
bas "manav" ko hi,apni kami se har pal rulayeinge
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2007, 08:31:27 AM »
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so sorry manav G

leking...

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likheinge sabke liye,sab ke sath kahin na kahin
bas "manav" ko hi,apni kami se har pal rulayeinge

Kya wo Yoindia pe likhti hain ?
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2007, 10:17:49 AM »
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so sorry manav G

leking...

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likheinge sabke liye,sab ke sath kahin na kahin
bas "manav" ko hi,apni kami se har pal rulayeinge

Kya wo Yoindia pe likhti hain ?


nahi sahiba.. yeh toh aaise hi Line bana di maine, kuch aor ban nahi raha tha :D
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2007, 03:28:45 PM »
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Manav ji, Auki poems main bahoot dard hai.. bahoot simple shabdo mai bahoot gahta dard likh jaate hai app….  

Adhure khawab bhi ek din poore ho jayege
Kab tak halat apke, apko tadpayege

Umarbhar ka jab kiya hai soda, kaya abhi se ghbra jayege
her khawab ko poora karne, wo ek din jaroor ayege!!!

Rakhein Khuda per bharosa, khushi ke din bhi ayege
Keemat pyar ki wo khud chukane ek din apke pass ayege
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2007, 08:53:59 PM »
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Bohot khoob Manav =D>

Good one Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2007, 10:42:26 AM »
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Thanks Talat...

Pooja ji. very nice to have some good words from you. aapki poem pard kar jo mann mein aa raha likh raha hu...


Jab bhi karte hain bharosa,Humesha muh ki khaate hain
"pooja ji" hum toh ab apne saaye se bhi ghbaraate hai

do pal fursat jinke pass nahi mera dil-e-haal janNe ke liye
aaise insaan,bohaat hua,keh kar sab kuch bhool jaate hain

log milte hain iss duniya mein,kayi kisaam ke mujhe
jinko rakhta hu palkon par,wohi akhein noch jate hain

kare kaise in halaton mein phir kisi par yakeen, batayein
jo apne hi sakoon mein,khoon ke ansu humein rulate hain
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2007, 04:34:48 PM »
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Manav ji app bahoot hi acha likhte hai... shabdo ko aise pirote hai ki her ek line dil ko chu jaati hai....
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2007, 04:42:32 PM »
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do pal fursat jinke pass nahi mera dil-e-haal janNe ke liye
aaise insaan,bohaat hua,keh kar sab kuch bhool jaate hain

kare kaise in halaton mein phir kisi par yakeen, batayein
jo apne hi sakoon mein,khoon ke ansu humein rulate hain[/b]


Very touching Manav, especially these two lines.....

Kabhi logon se kabhi khud apne dil se haarte hain hum
Ashkon ko aksar muskurahaton main chupate hain hum
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2007, 08:59:26 PM »
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Nice Lines Talat!!
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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2007, 03:59:39 PM »
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do pal fursat jinke pass nahi mera dil-e-haal janNe ke liye
aaise insaan,bohaat hua,keh kar sab kuch bhool jaate hain

kare kaise in halaton mein phir kisi par yakeen, batayein
jo apne hi sakoon mein,khoon ke ansu humein rulate hain[/b]


Very touching Manav, especially these two lines.....

Kabhi logon se kabhi khud apne dil se haarte hain hum
Ashkon ko aksar muskurahaton main chupate hain hum


thanks kehna achha nahi lagega mujhe.. ek sakoon hai ki  aap dono ne meri feelings ko samjhne ki koshish ki Pooja n Talat

kaise naam ankhon mein khilti hain muskarahtein
"Manav" koi jeena humein bhi dard mein seekha de
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