-----/// Ek kahaani sunaataa hoon /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 28, 2012, 08:52:33 AM
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achcha thaa main duur tumhaari yaadon ko bhulaake
tumne aake fir puraane yaadon ko taazaa kar diyaa
bhool chukaa thaa main sab kuch tumhe bhulaake
tumne aake fir se un zakhmon ko taazaa kar diyaa...

Ek kahaani sunaataa hoon aaj aap sabhi doston ko... kal raat ki kahaani.....


raat phone ki ghanti baji
phone uthaayaa to ek awaaz sunai di
ek aawaaz jo kuch jaani pehchaani thi
ek aawaaz jo kuch puraani si thi
maine poochhaa "haanji aap kaun"
aawaaz aayee 'main wahi hoon
jo kabhi tumhaari deewaani thi'

kuch der main chup rahaa
kuch main khamosh rahaa
fir kuch der ruk ke maine
himmat kar ke poochhaa usse
'kaho kaisi ho, kahaan ho'

fir kyaa thaa, bas baatein hi baatein
wo apni sunaati rahee
main apni sunaataa rahaa
kyaa beetaa, kaisaa beetaa
waqt dooriyon ka kaisaa beetaa

lagaa hi nahi ek pal bhi ki wo duur thi
yun lagaa jaise kal ki hi baat ho
mere haathon me uskaa haath liye
uski aankhon me gum saa hoon
bas dekh rahaa hoon uske chehre ko
aur mujhe kuch hosh nahee
wo dheere se muskuraati hui
apne aanchal me apna chehra chipaati hui
dheere se boli 'chhodo na mera haath,
mujhe sharm aati hai,
chhodo na koi dekh legaa'
aur main use samjhaataa huwaa
'darti ho kya,
pyaar karti ho na mujhse'
bharosa hai na mujhpe'

bas fir unhi yaadon me kuch is tarha kho gayaa
usse baatein karte karte kaise
waqt beetaa pataa hi nahi chalaa
bas baatein karte rahe
khoob saari baatein

fir ehsaas huwa use bhi aur mujhe bhi
waqt waisa nahi hai jaisa thaa
hum saath the jab, tab jaisaa thaa
waqt badal chuka hai
sab kuch badal chukaa hai
wo haseen mulaaquatein
wo pyaari pyaari baatein
phone pe baat karte huye bitaai raatein
ab kuch bhi to waisa nahi hai jaisa tha
log badal gaye, rishte badal gaye
aaj na main uska hoon, na wo meri hai
naa ye bedard waqt bhi hamaaraa hai

inhi khayaalon me khoye rahe hum bahut der tak
aur fir khayaal aayaa raat bahut ho chuki hai
hamaare bich baat bahut ho chuki hai
baatein to itni thi ki kai raatein kam pad jaayen
wo kehti rahe, main sunta rahu
main kehta rahu, wo sunti rahe
par waqt ko dekhte huye humne phone rakh diyaa


jaane fir uska kya haal huwaa
mujhe raat bhar neend nahi aayi
poori poori raat wo yaad aayi
aur ab bhi usi ke khayaalon me hoon
khoyaa huwa hoon...

aakhir kyun....
kyun usne itne din baad yaad kiya..
akhir kyun?Huh??


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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2012, 09:09:06 AM »
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wah Hriday ji
Kyonki wo apney aaj se thak chuki thhi
wahi gisi piti jindagi jeete jeete ubb chki thhi

Wahi pati ka roj datna daptna
Wahi bachho ki nit nayee pharmishe karna

Salo woh mook banke apna farj nibhati rahi
Lekin jindagi ki udasi phir bhi kam na hoti rahi

Kahin se usse aapka number mil hi gaya
Dar dar ke pehle kai kai bar socha

Phir sahas karke number aapka mila hi diya
Aapse apne hale dil bayan kar hi diya

Aap apkee neend kharab huyee soch rahe hain
Usko kitna sakun mila yeh kyon nahi sachte hain

Hum toh chate hain bar bar aapki neend kharab ho
Kisi apne ko kam se kam kuchh khushi milti to ho

Bhagyvan apne ko samjhiye Hriday ji
Kisi apne ke kam aa toh rahe hriday ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2012, 09:19:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa nandbahu ji... aur jawaab me aapne ek dum sach bayaan kiya hai... agar aapki jagah wo hoti to shayad aisa hi kuch likhti.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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ye khayaal mere bhi dil me aayaa hazaar baar
aaakhir kabhi maine bhi usi se kiyaa thaa pyaar

wo chali gayi duur humse is ka ghum nahee
raaton ko wo khwaab banke aati rahi kai kai baar

thaa nahi bas me unke khud ko roknaa us pal
jaanaa thaa chali gayi chhod ke meraa ye sansaar

mumkin nahi ye mere liye ab saath unka nibhaa paanaa
par ye bhi sach hai ki aaj bhi hai unse pyaar beshumaar...

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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2012, 10:01:05 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob kapil ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2012, 10:42:13 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 28, 2012, 08:52:33 AM
achcha thaa main duur tumhaari yaadon ko bhulaake
tumne aake fir puraane yaadon ko taazaa kar diyaa
bhool chukaa thaa main sab kuch tumhe bhulaake
tumne aake fir se un zakhmon ko taazaa kar diyaa...

Ek kahaani sunaataa hoon aaj aap sabhi doston ko... kal raat ki kahaani.....


raat phone ki ghanti baji
phone uthaayaa to ek awaaz sunai di
ek aawaaz jo kuch jaani pehchaani thi
ek aawaaz jo kuch puraani si thi
maine poochhaa "haanji aap kaun"
aawaaz aayee 'main wahi hoon
jo kabhi tumhaari deewaani thi'

kuch der main chup rahaa
kuch main khamosh rahaa
fir kuch der ruk ke maine
himmat kar ke poochhaa usse
'kaho kaisi ho, kahaan ho'

fir kyaa thaa, bas baatein hi baatein
wo apni sunaati rahee
main apni sunaataa rahaa
kyaa beetaa, kaisaa beetaa
waqt dooriyon ka kaisaa beetaa

lagaa hi nahi ek pal bhi ki wo duur thi
yun lagaa jaise kal ki hi baat ho
mere haathon me uskaa haath liye
uski aankhon me gum saa hoon
bas dekh rahaa hoon uske chehre ko
aur mujhe kuch hosh nahee
wo dheere se muskuraati hui
apne aanchal me apna chehra chipaati hui
dheere se boli 'chhodo na mera haath,
mujhe sharm aati hai,
chhodo na koi dekh legaa'
aur main use samjhaataa huwaa
'darti ho kya,
pyaar karti ho na mujhse'
bharosa hai na mujhpe'

bas fir unhi yaadon me kuch is tarha kho gayaa
usse baatein karte karte kaise
waqt beetaa pataa hi nahi chalaa
bas baatein karte rahe
khoob saari baatein

fir ehsaas huwa use bhi aur mujhe bhi
waqt waisa nahi hai jaisa thaa
hum saath the jab, tab jaisaa thaa
waqt badal chuka hai
sab kuch badal chukaa hai
wo haseen mulaaquatein
wo pyaari pyaari baatein
phone pe baat karte huye bitaai raatein
ab kuch bhi to waisa nahi hai jaisa tha
log badal gaye, rishte badal gaye
aaj na main uska hoon, na wo meri hai
naa ye bedard waqt bhi hamaaraa hai

inhi khayaalon me khoye rahe hum bahut der tak
aur fir khayaal aayaa raat bahut ho chuki hai
hamaare bich baat bahut ho chuki hai
baatein to itni thi ki kai raatein kam pad jaayen
wo kehti rahe, main sunta rahu
main kehta rahu, wo sunti rahe
par waqt ko dekhte huye humne phone rakh diyaa


jaane fir uska kya haal huwaa
mujhe raat bhar neend nahi aayi
poori poori raat wo yaad aayi
aur ab bhi usi ke khayaalon me hoon
khoyaa huwa hoon...

aakhir kyun....
kyun usne itne din baad yaad kiya..
akhir kyun?Huh??


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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2012, 10:49:44 AM »
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bahut khoob hriday ji bahut khoob Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2012, 11:27:30 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil jee,
Maza aa gaya padhkar.
Aapki taareef karna mere liye tedhi kheer..kahan se laaun naye words..repeat karne ki meri aadat nahee. Chaliye koshish karta hun.
Story ko poetry form me bahut badhiya likha hai aapne. Sundar bayaanee.
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2012, 03:10:59 AM »
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Hmmmm hota hai kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai....... Beautiful story
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2012, 06:16:02 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on August 28, 2012, 10:01:05 AM
waah waah bahut khoob kapil ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2012, 06:18:08 AM »
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BAhut Bahut Khub Kapil Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 06:23:22 AM »
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wah wah kahani badiya hai jee... aisa hi sunate rahiye  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2012, 12:47:59 PM »
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thank you soooooooooo much K_A ji... waise aisi baat thi to bataana chahiye thaa naa usko... wo aapke through message kyun bhej rahi hai?Huh?? tongue3

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 28, 2012, 10:42:13 AM
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pankaj ji....!!!

Quote from: pankajwfs on August 28, 2012, 10:49:44 AM
bahut khoob hriday ji bahut khoob Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2012, 06:21:57 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji.... aapke comments se meri rachnaaon ki sundartaaa aur badh jaati hai....!!!

Quote from: mkv on August 28, 2012, 11:27:30 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil jee,
Maza aa gaya padhkar.
Aapki taareef karna mere liye tedhi kheer..kahan se laaun naye words..repeat karne ki meri aadat nahee. Chaliye koshish karta hun.
Story ko poetry form me bahut badhiya likha hai aapne. Sundar bayaanee.
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2012, 03:11:10 PM »
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thank you sooooooooooo much Ripan ji....!!!

Quote from: ripan dev on August 29, 2012, 03:10:59 AM
Hmmmm hota hai kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hai....... Beautiful story
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