Ek Khwaab

by tamanna.pt on May 12, 2010, 01:14:44 PM
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      Kareeb 10-12 din baad kuch post kar rahin hoon doston,iski ek wajah humara kharab net bhi raha jo sirf apna mood hone par hi connect hote hain or kuch main bhi busy rahi. Mere last kalaam ko pasand karne k liy aap sabka kai quntal shukriya. Aaj ki koshish kis forum me post karni hai samajh nahi aaya. ye kuch or likhne ki koshish ki thi kuch or hi ajeeb sa ban gaya to yahi post kar diya.


                   Har ek jhaunke ne di wajah muskuraane ki,
                   Ghuli khabar fiza me jab unke aane ki.

                   Jharokhon se aati dhoop ho ya khushnuma rang deewaron k,
                   Dikhne lagi aaj har khoobi mujhe,apne aashiyaane ki.

                   Uljhi julfein ho chali thi kabhi pehchaan jiski,
                   Padi jarurat fir use aaine ko azzjmaane ki.

                   Socha tha jalayeng humbhi bewajah ruth k magar ,
                   Dekh k unko kahan chalti hai koi koshish sataane ki

                   Nazrein hi na de gar saath zabaan ka,
                   Gunjaish fir koi,kya dhundhe bahaane ki.

                   Lagata hai hogai khabar khushi ki mere raqeeb ko,
                   Jo aane lagi aawaaz darwaaza bajaane ki.

                   Khuli aankh to paya wahi manzar tanhai ka,
                   Wahi khalish thi dil ki,wahi baatein zamaane ki.  


    
                           ----Tamanna---
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 01:23:29 PM »
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waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Kalaam Tamanna Ji..

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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 01:58:49 PM »
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Ab bechaare aapke net ko kyun badnaam kiya jaaye. Humein uske haal ka bhi sochna chahiye kabhi kabhi. Wo bhi kitna load lega....Kyun? sach kaha na humne. kabhi kabhi anjaane me bhi bahut khoobsurat haadse ho jaate hain. Wahi hua is kavita ke sath bhi. Aap kuch aur kar rahe the kuch aur hi ho gaya. Ab taarif aapke ki jaye ya aapke galti ki hum yahi soch rahe hain.  Winking

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Bahut bahut khoobsurat khwaab likha hai aapne. Bahut hi umda. Khwaab bhi apne aap khoobsurat hone lagte hain jab wo aapki aankhon se hokey guzarte hain. Mehboob ke aane ki aahat hoti hi aisi hai. Bahut achcha laga aaapki ye kavita padhke. Bahut khoob Tamanna ji, bahut khoob. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 01:59:19 PM »
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Tamanna ji.... kya likh diya yaar aapne.... icon_salut icon_salut

wah..!! bahut bahut bahut khooooooobbbbb....

ek khwab tha tujhe gale se apne lagau mai,
wo khwab mujhse na jane kyon door ho gaya.,
ek tamanna thi tujhe dil se apnau mai,
wo tamanna bhi mujhe chhodne ko majboor ho gaya..

shukriya..... Usual Smile
khush rahiye.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 02:01:10 PM »
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   Shukriya shihab ji  Usual Smile
Quote from: Shihab on May 12, 2010, 01:20:02 PM
Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai ,Bahut Khub Tamanna Ji...

Yun Hi Apne Pyar Bhare Andaz Se
Mehfil Ko Roshan Karte Rahiye....


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 02:02:23 PM »
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buhat khoob.. !
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 02:14:49 PM »
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  Bahut Shukriya kapil ji kalaam ko itna pasand karne ka. Aur bilkul sach kaha aapne,waise aap to insaan hi kya internet k man k haalat ko bhi samajhne lage hain. Surfing karte-karte Net se bhi rishta kayam kar liya lagta aapne. Usual Smile  Shukriya kalaam padhne k liy.
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Ab bechaare aapke net ko kyun badnaam kiya jaaye. Humein uske haal ka bhi sochna chahiye kabhi kabhi. Wo bhi kitna load lega....Kyun? sach kaha na humne. kabhi kabhi anjaane me bhi bahut khoobsurat haadse ho jaate hain. Wahi hua is kavita ke sath bhi. Aap kuch aur kar rahe the kuch aur hi ho gaya. Ab taarif aapke ki jaye ya aapke galti ki hum yahi soch rahe hain.  Winking

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut bahut khoobsurat khwaab likha hai aapne. Bahut hi umda. Khwaab bhi apne aap khoobsurat hone lagte hain jab wo aapki aankhon se hokey guzarte hain. Mehboob ke aane ki aahat hoti hi aisi hai. Bahut achcha laga aaapki ye kavita padhke. Bahut khoob Tamanna ji, bahut khoob. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2010, 02:16:48 PM »
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  Shukriya VB ji  happy3
Quote from: vb on May 12, 2010, 02:02:23 PM
buhat khoob.. !
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2010, 02:19:47 PM »
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U r welcome Tamanna ji...!!! Usual Smile

Quote from: tamanna.pt on May 12, 2010, 02:14:49 PM
 Bahut Shukriya kapil ji kalaam ko itna pasand karne ka. Aur bilkul sach kaha aapne,waise aap to insaan hi kya internet k man k haalat ko bhi samajhne lage hain. Surfing karte-karte Net se bhi rishta kayam kar liya lagta aapne. Usual Smile  Shukriya kalaam padhne k liy.
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2010, 02:20:22 PM »
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  Dher sara Shukriya Tauheed ji.  Usual Smile Usual Smile
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 12, 2010, 01:59:19 PM
Tamanna ji.... kya likh diya yaar aapne.... icon_salut icon_salut

wah..!! bahut bahut bahut khooooooobbbbb....

ek khwab tha tujhe gale se apne lagau mai,
wo khwab mujhse na jane kyon door ho gaya.,
ek tamanna thi tujhe dil se apnau mai,
wo tamanna bhi mujhe chhodne ko majboor ho gaya..

shukriya..... Usual Smile
khush rahiye.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2010, 02:21:32 PM »
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 Bahut shukriya Khwaish ji. wave
Quote from: khwaish on May 12, 2010, 01:23:29 PM
waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Kalaam Tamanna Ji..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2010, 08:31:52 PM »
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Wow Tamanna ji ,maza aa gayi aapke khoobsurat kavita padke.bahut bahut khoob.mindblowing creation.lovely work.keep it up.excellent Both Thumbs Up Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2010, 10:54:37 PM »
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vry gud Tamanna jii

Gud creation
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2010, 04:07:25 PM »
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  Bahut-bahut Shukriya madhu ji. Usual Smile
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2010, 08:31:52 PM
Wow Tamanna ji ,maza aa gayi aapke khoobsurat kavita padke.bahut bahut khoob.mindblowing creation.lovely work.keep it up.excellent Both Thumbs Up Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2010, 04:09:49 PM »
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  Shukriya Neel ji. happy3
Quote from: neelgold on May 12, 2010, 10:54:37 PM
vry gud Tamanna jii

Gud creation
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