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Sheba

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   kaash koi to mujhe diwaanaa samjhe!
   kyon har nazar husn ka khazanaa samjhe!

   tarse koi nahin zakhmi lafz.on pe mere!
   sune jo bhi ek haseen afsanaa samjhe!

   gire bekhudi mein khud hi wo janaab!
   aur duniya meri nigaah ko nishanaa samjhe!

   didaar-e-chaand ko dil mera bhi machle hai!
   chaandni magar, yaar se milne ka bahanaa samjhe!

   ehsaas.on ko mere nazar andaaz karte rahe!
   jaane kab meri ghazal ko zamanaa samjhe!

   rah jaate khaamosh lubb aksar kahte-kahte!
   ye tanhaai magar mera taranaa samjhe!

   mil jaaye hayaat mujhe phir dhire-dhire!
   gar sheba ka wo 'mitt' janaa samjhe!


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ParwaaZ

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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 08:20:17 PM »

Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH bade dinoN baad aapko bazm ko phir se roshan karte dekh
hume sab se zyaadaa khushi ho rahi hai... kyuN ki itni raat gaye hum
hi hai yahaaN sab se pahle replye dene waale...

Behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. ahsaas O khayaal meiN kafi gehrai
hai.. sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye is khoob kalaam par..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: Sheba on December 12, 2012, 08:02:20 PM

kaash koi to mujhe diwaanaa samjhe!
kyon har nazar husn ka khazanaa samjhe!

Achcha matla kaha hai jee ... waqai khoob..

tarse koi nahin zakhmi lafz.on pe mere!
sune jo bhi ek haseen afsanaa samjhe!

yeH bhi khoob raha ... ulaa misra behad khoob raha..

gire bekhudi mein khud hi wo janaab!
aur duniya meri nigaah ko nishanaa samjhe!

hahahahahaha kia kahne jee waah bahut khoob.. bada achcha sher
kaha hai.. aap par khulta bhi hai ... par mohtarmaa taali aik haat se nahi bajti...

didaar-e-chaand ko dil mera bhi machle hai!
chaandni magar, yaar se milne ka bahanaa samjhe!

kia baat hai jee bahut khoob daad...

ehsaas.on ko mere nazar andaaz karte rahe!
jaane kab meri ghazal ko zamanaa samjhe!

WaaH waaH kia kahne waaH bahut khoob .. bada achcha sher
kaha hai jee daad daad daad..

rah jaate khaamosh lubb aksar kahte-kahte!
ye tanhaai magar mera taranaa samjhe!

Hmmm tanhaai hi sab dukhi aatmaaoN ke taraane samjhti hai...
par kia aap bhi dukhi aatma ho...

mil jaaye hayaat mujhe phir dhire-dhire!
gar sheba ka wo 'mitt' janaa samjhe!

Hmmm maqta bhi achcha raha.. par teH mitt means double
meaning word hai yahaaN aapne kis ke liye use kiya hai tafseel zaruri hai...


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 01:38:59 AM »

bahut khubsurat ashaar se saji ghazal hai .
khaas taur se mujhe 3rd , 4h aur 6th bahut achhe
lage . yunhi khubsurat kalaam ke sath bazm mein
aati rahye . duaaein.


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Aarish

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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 02:59:08 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on December 12, 2012, 08:02:20 PM

   kaash koi to mujhe diwaanaa samjhe!
ye lo is meN samajhne wali kya baat hai pata hai mujhe.
   kyon har nazar husn ka khazanaa samjhe
   Uff itni badi ghalat fehmi . jagiye Mam subhah ho gai.[/font][/size]
   BangHead

   tarse koi nahin zakhmi lafz.on pe mere!

   sune jo bhi ek haseen afsanaa samjhe!

   Kuch nahi samajhna mujhe, tongue3

   gire bekhudi mein khud hi wo janaab!
   aur duniya meri nigaah ko nishanaa samjhe!

   Oh ho ankhyon se goli Oh My GODDD...

   didaar-e-chaand ko dil mera bhi machle hai!

   chaandni magar, yaar se milne ka bahanaa samjhe!
   Kis chaand ki baat ho rahi ye aasman wale , ya nukkad wale chand khan ki Huh boliye boliye..

   ehsaas.on ko mere nazar andaaz karte rahe!
   jaane kab meri ghazal ko zamanaa samjhe!

   Koi NahiN samjhega meri hi himmat hai jo saaloN se bina kuch kahe chup chaap sun raha huN aapki ghazleN..
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   rah jaate khaamosh lubb aksar kahte-kahte!
   ye tanhaai magar mera taranaa samjhe!

   Jao ab apni tanhaiyoN ko hi sunana apni ghazleN. maiN to chala.bye bye
NaNaNa

   mil jaaye hayaat mujhe phir dhire-dhire!
   gar sheba ka wo 'mitt' janaa samjhe!

[/b] Tabhi to kehta hooN

   Mera na hone se kya farq use padta hai,

   Pata chale jo kisi kam nazar ka ho jaye.

[/color][/font][/size][/b]Bohut khoob maam lajwab ghazal hai , dheeroon daaad qubool kareN aur uper ki gai gustakhi ke liye muafi[/color][/font].... Applause


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mkv

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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 03:13:08 AM »

kaash koi to mujhe diwaanaa samjhe!
kyon har nazar husn ka khazanaa samjhe! kya dard hai ..wah wah wah

tarse koi nahin zakhmi lafz.on pe mere!
sune jo bhi ek haseen afsanaa samjhe! Bahut khoob..bahut gahraai hai issme

gire bekhudi mein khud hi wo janaab!
aur duniya meri nigaah ko nishanaa samjhe! kya baat hai..wah re bedard zamaana

didaar-e-chaand ko dil mera bhi machle hai! pahle misre pe DAAD dena chahunga...bada hi dilfareb misra hai chaandni magar, yaar se milne ka bahanaa samjhe!

ehsaas.on ko mere nazar andaaz karte rahe!
jaane kab meri ghazal ko zamanaa samjhe! Applause

samjhega zamaana..aapki ghazloN sach meN laajavaab hoti hai..

rah jaate khaamosh lubb aksar kahte-kahte!
ye tanhaai magar mera taranaa samjhe! Applause

mil jaaye hayaat mujhe phir dhire-dhire!
gar sheba ka wo 'mitt' janaa samjhe! wah wah wah kya baat hai..jis andaaz me aapne 'mitt' ka use kiya hai..usne is maqte me jaan daal dee.
Kya kahuN sheba jee
sach me..alfaaz nahee is ghazal ki taareef ke liye..
bahut umda likha hai aapne.
ek behatreen shayra hone ka ehsaas bhi dila diya bazm ko.
dil DAAD mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayeN


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Sanjeev kash

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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 03:42:09 AM »

Sheba Ji Bahut Khoob Gazal Kahi Hai Daad Qabul Kijyega. Har sher Lajawab hai
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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2012, 04:22:09 AM »

बहूत उम्दा, ढेरों दाद Applause


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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2012, 04:59:26 AM »

badee dilfareb peshkash sheba dheron daad aaj ka rau tumhaaraa


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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2012, 05:35:54 AM »

hmmmmm sochaa thaa pehle aapke andaaz me hi comment karun par saare comments dekhe to pataa chalaa ki har kisi ne waise hi kiyaa huwaa hai.. to maine chhod diyaa...!!!

aapke har rachna ki tarha is rachna me bhi kuch alag hi baat hai. jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hogi. sahi kahun to shabd nahi hain mere paas taarif ke liye... it's really awesome...........masssttt.... zabardasssttt... jhakkassss..... raapchik... baaki kuch aise hi shabd hain mere paas.. par kuch bhi likhun kam hi hogaa....!!! sach .. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sheba ji...!!! Iske jawaab me kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine...!!!

ho fidaa jo haseen chehron pe aise bahut dekhe hain
pal bhar saath nibhaane waale humne bahut dekhe hain

kaun karta hai yahaan sachcha ishq aaj ki duniya me
mohabbat ko koi khel samjhe aise bahut dekhe hain

kaun dekhegaa aaj tumhaare dil me jhaank ke kya hai
jo dekhe bas chehraa upar se aise bahut dekhe hain

kahaan waqt hai kisi ke paas ki baithe do pal saath me
matlab pooraa karke nikalne waale humne bahut dekhe hain

ye zamaanaa aisa hai ki yahaan qadar nahi mohabbat ki
verna humne bhi mitne waale mohabbat pe bahut dekhe hain

*****HRIDAY*****


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theyash

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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2012, 06:36:15 AM »

bahut khoob shebaji...


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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2012, 06:45:05 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on December 12, 2012, 08:02:20 PM

Ab ya oonth pahad ke neeche,,sheba ji pehle to maine soch ke hriday ji ki tarha soch ker chup hojaon,lekin main kisi ka karz nahi rakhta,karz chukane ke waqt agaya hai,,ye trend aapne shuru kiya tha sab ki shayeri ki watt lagana,,ab khatam to karna hoga na ji ,,to kehna chahunga ki saber kijiye sab achcha hoga

   kaash koi to mujhe diwaanaa samjhe!
   kyon har nazar husn ka khazanaa samjhe!
koi kya har koi aapko deewana samjhe hai,
bas aapke saamne nahi kehte,warna husn ka khazana kaise milega

   tarse koi nahin zakhmi lafz.on pe mere!
   sune jo bhi ek haseen afsanaa samjhe!
hum log kya doctor hai jo aap ke zakhmon pe tarse ya tadpe =))hum log to shayer hai afsaane banadete hai.

   gire bekhudi mein khud hi wo janaab!
   aur duniya meri nigaah ko nishanaa samjhe!
array re re aap ka nishana itna pakka kahan jo kis ko gira sake. wo janab ko bekhudi ke julaab lege honge

   didaar-e-chaand ko dil mera bhi machle hai!
   chaandni magar, yaar se milne ka bahanaa samjhe!

chand pasha ka deedar nahi hosakta wo nahi aye aaj,aap machhli ki tarha machhalte raho. ,chandni khud chandi baar mein apne yaar se milne gayi hai.

   ehsaas.on ko mere nazar andaaz karte rahe!
   jaane kab meri ghazal ko zamanaa samjhe!

pehle aap apne saas ke ehsaas ko samjho,
aapki ghazal khud ap nahi samjhe to hum kya samjhenge.

   rah jaate khaamosh lubb aksar kahte-kahte!
   ye tanhaai magar mera taranaa samjhe!

array tanhaai ki shehnaai kab tak bajao ge
lab khamosh hogaye maagr aap hai ke bole jaree ho ,,morning show host karte ho kya..

   mil jaaye hayaat mujhe phir dhire-dhire!
   gar sheba ka wo 'mitt' janaa samjhe!
hayat aur kitni chahiye aapko aapke zamane ke jinn bhi margaye ab to,,
achhay log iti asaani se nahi jaate ,,,

meri baaton ka zaroor bura manna,warna mujhe bura lage ga... Laughing hard

on a serious note aap ka andaaz sab se juda hai..keep writing
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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2012, 02:19:22 PM »

bahut khoob sheba jee ek rau meri taraf se qubool kare


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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #12 on: December 13, 2012, 02:35:02 PM »

very nice sheba Applause


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haan

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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #13 on: December 13, 2012, 02:59:30 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on December 12, 2012, 08:02:20 PM

kaash koi to mujhe diwaanaa samjhe!
kyon har nazar husn ka khazanaa samjhe!

tarse koi nahin zakhmi lafz.on pe mere!
sune jo bhi ek haseen afsanaa samjhe!

gire bekhudi mein khud hi wo janaab!
aur duniya meri nigaah ko nishanaa samjhe!

didaar-e-chaand ko dil mera bhi machle hai!
chaandni magar, yaar se milne ka bahanaa samjhe!

ehsaas.on ko mere nazar andaaz karte rahe!
jaane kab meri ghazal ko zamanaa samjhe!

rah jaate khaamosh lubb aksar kahte-kahte!
ye tanhaai magar mera taranaa samjhe!

mil jaaye hayaat mujhe phir dhire-dhire!
gar sheba ka wo 'mitt' janaa samjhe!

bahut khoob sheba ji aap ke kalaam me nafasat aur bebaaki hai....bahut achcha kaha hai aapne .....rehan mubarak "tanhaa"


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Re: ek meetha dard...sheba

«Reply #14 on: December 13, 2012, 03:03:27 PM »

boht boht boht umda ghazal wah sheba ji


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