ek meetha dard...sheba

by Sheba on December 12, 2012, 08:02:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 13, 2012, 07:13:33 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 12, 2012, 08:20:17 PM
Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH bade dinoN baad aapko bazm ko phir se roshan karte dekh
hume sab se zyaadaa khushi ho rahi hai... kyuN ki itni raat gaye hum
hi hai yahaaN sab se pahle replye dene waale...  icon_geek


Behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. ahsaas O khayaal meiN kafi gehrai
hai.. sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye is khoob kalaam par..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 




bahut shukriya .haan mere poem per agar tumne comments nahin kiya kabhi to main bura nahin maanon gi tumhein kachcha chaba joon gi.
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«Reply #16 on: December 13, 2012, 07:26:07 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on December 13, 2012, 07:13:33 PM
bahut shukriya .haan mere poem per agar tumne comments nahin kiya kabhi to main bura nahin maanon gi


Kitna achcha lagaa iasa sunkar bada sukuN mehsus hua...
dil ne kaha chalo aik jhanjhat se toH jaaN chhuti...  icon_geek                   



tumhein kachcha chaba joon gi.

 Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More

MaiN kia murgi ka bachcha huN jo aap kachcha chabha jayeNgi...  drunken_smilie
Shaitaan ki khala ho kia...  Laughing hard  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #17 on: December 13, 2012, 07:29:03 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 13, 2012, 07:26:07 PM


tunhi bata sakte ho apne riste kaun kisi khala hai kaun khaloo kaun maanu. bahiii main to insaan hoon  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #18 on: December 13, 2012, 07:49:38 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on December 13, 2012, 07:29:03 PM
tunhi bata sakte ho apne riste kaun kisi khala hai kaun khaloo kaun maanu. bahiii main to insaan hoon  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


 lo jee khud ko insaan kahti haiN aap aur rishte tak nahi jaanti ...  icon_geek

Ab toH yaqqen se kah sakta huN ke aap shaitaan ki hi khalaa ho...  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard                  
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«Reply #19 on: December 13, 2012, 07:50:43 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 13, 2012, 07:49:38 PM

 lo jee khud ko insaan kahti haiN aap aur rishte tak nahi jaanti ...  icon_geek

Ab toH yaqqen se kah sakta huN ke aap shaitaan ki hi khalaa ho...  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard                  




chhiiiiiiiii mujhe khalaa to mat kaho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #20 on: December 13, 2012, 07:57:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on December 13, 2012, 07:50:43 PM

chhiiiiiiiii mujhe khalaa to mat kaho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Lo jee yeH naye zamaane ki haiN inhe ShaitaaN ki aunty kahna padeNga...                   

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4
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«Reply #21 on: December 13, 2012, 08:03:09 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 13, 2012, 07:57:50 PM
Lo jee yeH naye zamaane ki haiN inhe ShaitaaN ki aunty kahna padeNga...                   

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4 laughing4


main aunty tumhaare bachchon ki hoon  icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
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«Reply #22 on: December 13, 2012, 08:05:06 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on December 13, 2012, 02:59:08 AM
[/color][/font][/size][/b]Bohut khoob maam lajwab ghazal hai , dheeroon daaad qubool kareN  aur uper ki gai gustakhi ke liye muafi[/color][/font].... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))meri shayri ki popat kar di aarish koi baat nahin

bahut ache comments hain Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

shukria.........!
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«Reply #23 on: December 23, 2012, 12:17:23 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 13, 2012, 01:38:59 AM
bahut  khubsurat  ashaar  se  saji  ghazal  hai .
khaas taur se mujhe 3rd , 4h  aur  6th  bahut  achhe
lage . yunhi  khubsurat  kalaam  ke  sath  bazm  mein
aati  rahye . duaaein.

shukria fazal sahab.......!
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«Reply #24 on: December 25, 2012, 08:24:37 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on December 13, 2012, 02:59:08 AM
[/color][/font][/size][/b]Bohut khoob maam lajwab ghazal hai , dheeroon daaad qubool kareN  aur uper ki gai gustakhi ke liye muafi[/color][/font].... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))bahut khoob aarish..........!
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«Reply #25 on: December 25, 2012, 09:42:27 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 13, 2012, 03:13:08 AM
kaash   koi   to   mujhe    diwaanaa  samjhe!                          
kyon  har  nazar  husn  ka  khazanaa  samjhe! kya dard hai ..wah wah wah
 
tarse koi nahin   zakhmi   lafz.on  pe   mere!                          
sune   jo   bhi   ek  haseen  afsanaa  samjhe! Bahut khoob..bahut gahraai hai issme

gire   bekhudi   mein   khud   hi  wo   janaab!                          
aur  duniya  meri  nigaah  ko  nishanaa samjhe! kya baat hai..wah re bedard zamaana

didaar-e-chaand  ko  dil  mera  bhi  machle hai!    pahle misre pe DAAD dena chahunga...bada hi dilfareb misra hai                       chaandni magar, yaar se milne ka bahanaa samjhe!

ehsaas.on   ko  mere  nazar  andaaz  karte  rahe!                          
jaane   kab   meri   ghazal  ko  zamanaa  samjhe!  Applause Applausesamjhega zamaana..aapki ghazloN sach meN laajavaab hoti hai..

rah  jaate  khaamosh   lubb   aksar   kahte-kahte!                          
ye   tanhaai    magar    mera    taranaa   samjhe!  Applause Applause Applause

mil   jaaye   hayaat   mujhe   phir   dhire-dhire!                          
gar     sheba   ka   wo   'mitt'   janaa    samjhe! wah wah wah kya baat hai..jis andaaz me aapne 'mitt' ka use kiya hai..usne is maqte me jaan daal dee.
Kya kahuN sheba jee
sach me..alfaaz nahee is ghazal ki taareef ke liye..
bahut umda likha hai aapne.
ek behatreen shayra hone ka ehsaas bhi dila diya bazm ko.
dil DAAD mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayeN






bahut bahut bahut shukria mkv ji...............!
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«Reply #26 on: December 25, 2012, 10:19:21 AM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on December 13, 2012, 03:42:09 AM
Sheba Ji Bahut Khoob Gazal Kahi Hai Daad Qabul Kijyega. Har sher Lajawab hai
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut shukria kaash ji........!
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«Reply #27 on: January 13, 2013, 11:47:35 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 13, 2012, 04:22:09 AM
बहूत उम्दा, ढेरों दाद    Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukria.......!
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«Reply #28 on: January 21, 2013, 11:44:40 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 13, 2012, 04:59:26 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley badee dilfareb peshkash sheba dheron daad aaj ka rau tumhaaraa

thank you dr ji.........!
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«Reply #29 on: May 12, 2013, 03:56:52 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 13, 2012, 05:35:54 AM
hmmmmm sochaa thaa pehle aapke andaaz me hi comment karun par saare comments dekhe to pataa chalaa ki har kisi ne waise hi kiyaa huwaa hai.. to maine chhod diyaa...!!!

aapke har rachna ki tarha is rachna me bhi kuch alag hi baat hai. jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hogi. sahi kahun to shabd nahi hain mere paas taarif ke liye... it's really awesome...........masssttt.... zabardasssttt... jhakkassss..... raapchik... baaki kuch aise hi shabd hain mere paas.. par kuch bhi likhun kam hi hogaa....!!! sach .. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sheba ji...!!! Iske jawaab me kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine...!!!


ho  fidaa  jo  haseen   chehron pe aise  bahut dekhe hain
pal bhar saath nibhaane  waale humne bahut dekhe hain

kaun   karta  hai  yahaan  sachcha ishq aaj  ki duniya me
mohabbat ko koi  khel   samjhe  aise  bahut  dekhe hain

kaun dekhegaa aaj tumhaare dil me jhaank ke  kya  hai
jo  dekhe  bas  chehraa upar se aise  bahut  dekhe hain

kahaan waqt hai kisi ke paas ki baithe do pal saath me
matlab pooraa karke nikalne waale humne bahut dekhe hain

ye zamaanaa aisa hai ki yahaan qadar nahi mohabbat ki
verna humne bhi mitne waale mohabbat pe bahut dekhe hain

*****HRIDAY*****

bahut khoob ji bahut bahut shukria.....!
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