Ek nauka ke dam par.....mann

by mann.mann on December 03, 2014, 08:44:12 AM
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Ek nauka ke dam par saagar  paar nahin hota.
Dekhte  rahne  se sapana  sakar  nahin  hota.

Bhid jama karlo jitni bhi char-diwari ke bhitar,
Rishta  dil  se na  ho to  pariwar  nahin  hota.

Mann hi jode mann hi tode mann hi dekhe sapne,
Mann  na  hota  to ye sara  sansar  nahin  hota.

Kitni  hi  koshish  kar lo  unko  khush  karne,
Fir bhi unko hamse kyon aakhir pyar nahin hota.

Jo mera hai meri khatir kasht agar kuch jhelega,
Apnon  ka apnon  par kuch  upkar  nahin  hota.

Bikta hai  sona  chandi,  ghar  zamin bhi bikte,
Pyar  ka  lekin yaron  koi  vyapar  nahin  hota.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2014, 01:35:16 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2014, 04:21:23 PM »
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Great composoption bro..  wah! 
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2014, 05:21:04 PM »
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waaah waaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Mann jee.
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2014, 10:12:48 PM »
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Mann jee Aadaab ... !

Bahut khoob behad gehre ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne...
Sabhi sher behad khoob rahe ...

Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
aur Quoted sher ke toh kia hi kahne jee ... behad laa jawaab ...

Likhte rahiye Bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye....

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...





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Bhid jama karlo jitni bhi char-diwari ke bhitar,
Rishta  dil  se na  ho to  pariwar  nahin  hota.

Mann hi jode mann hi tode mann hi dekhe sapne,
Mann  na  hota  to ye sara  sansar  nahin  hota.


Mann
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2014, 11:41:37 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut umdah Mann Sahib.
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«Reply #6 on: December 04, 2014, 03:57:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saini sahab......
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2014, 05:31:57 AM »
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umda waahhhhh daaaaaaaaaaadddddd
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2014, 05:57:45 AM »
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अति सुंदर मान साहिब,बहुत अच्छी रचना लिखी है आपने |प्र्सुत्त है :-सांप को जितना दूध भी पिलाओ,कभी जहर नही छोड़ता
साधू साधू ही रहेगा,कभी वह अपना स्वभाव नही छोड़ता
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«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2014, 07:30:20 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kumarji....
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2014, 12:31:19 PM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on December 03, 2014, 08:44:12 AM

Ek nauka ke dam par saagar  paar nahin hota.
Dekhte  rahne  se sapana  sakar  nahin  hota.

Bhid jama karlo jitni bhi char-diwari ke bhitar,
Rishta  dil  se na  ho to  pariwar  nahin  hota.

Mann hi jode mann hi tode mann hi dekhe sapne,
Mann  na  hota  to ye sara  sansar  nahin  hota.

Kitni  hi  koshish  kar lo  unko  khush  karne,
Fir bhi unko hamse kyon aakhir pyar nahin hota.

Jo mera hai meri khatir kasht agar kuch jhelega,
Apnon  ka apnon  par kuch  upkar  nahin  hota.

Bikta hai  sona  chandi,  ghar  zamin bhi bikte,
Pyar  ka  lekin yaron  koi  vyapar  nahin  hota.

Mann


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wah wah bahut khub....mann jit liya... ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #12 on: December 04, 2014, 05:51:06 PM »
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Bhid jama karlo jitni bhi char-diwari ke bhitar,
Rishta dil se na  ho to pariwar nahin hota.

Bahut Khub Mann Jee Applause



Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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bahut bahut shukriya iftkhar sahab.....
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bahut bahut shukriya parwaazji....

sath rahiyega...
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