Ek Ped (Tree)

by Meena on May 22, 2005, 02:22:59 PM
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Zindagi ke ped ka shingar yaadon ke patte hai,
Koi yaha pe harre to koi yaha pe sukhe hai,

Waqt ke mausam ka samna to karta hai ek ek patta,
Kaun tootega, kaun rahega, yeh to janta hai Uppaarwala,

Majbori ki fizayen kuch patton ke saath le jati hai,
Aur ek majboot ped ko ek khali jagha de jati hai,

Pakadna chahata hai ped apne patton ko, jo udh rahe hai hawaon me,
Par tood nahin pata kudrat ke niyomo ko, jo pade hai zanzeer ki tara uske paon me,

Apne gum bhoola kar sab ko chaon deta hai jo,
Dekho iss tara khamoshi se mausam ke war ko seheta hai woh,

Aa gaya naya mausam, mil gaya naya patton ka khazana,
Phir dohorayega waqt, wohi bichadne ka purana fasana!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2005, 02:28:54 PM »
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very simple ...but tooooooo gud....

aap acha likhti hain yeh sab jaante hain
superb...shayar ho yeh hum bhi maante hain

kitne khushnaseeb hain hum sab ..
jo aapki shayari padhne ko milti hai
mana ke jyada kuch nahi aapke baare mein hum jaante hain
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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2005, 02:40:29 PM »
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arre thanx nikki sis!!!!! aur tumne to bohot zada tareef kar di kuddiye...mai koi super duper shayar nahin hoon bas kabhi kabar kuch jazbaat pesh karti hoon...thats it!
aap sab ko meri poems pasand ati hai aur aap sab mujhe itna pyar dete hai.... :D  to kiska dil nahin karega likhne ko!  :D

thanx again!!  :D
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2005, 04:08:07 PM »
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u r most welcome sis....  :kiss: ................................................. .....................
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2005, 04:30:47 PM »
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Wah Meena ji and Nikki ji .. bahot khoob likha hai aapney ..
baat ho rhi hai khuda ki kudrat ki to mein chend alfaz le ke aya hoon ... umeed hai ke ap ko pasand aayegey !!

subah ki bela mein khusphusati hui
suraj ki kiranon mein os se nahati hui

mehekte phulon se bhara woh gulshan
bhavron titliyon ka aana tha pal pal

hawa ko khushboo se rubaru karati
woh Bal Khati Bel kuch gungunati

ghar ke bahar pe ek gamle mein samayi hui
jab koi gujre to woh apna sar jhukati hui..

HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2005, 04:33:24 PM »
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Wah Meena ji and Nikki ji .. bahot khoob likha hai aapney ..
baat ho rhi hai khuda ki kudrat ki to mein chend alfaz le ke aya hoon ... umeed hai ke ap ko pasand aayegey !!

subah ki bela mein khusphusati hui
suraj ki kiranon mein os se nahati hui

mehekte phulon se bhara woh gulshan
bhavron titliyon ka aana tha pal pal

hawa ko khushboo se rubaru karati
woh Bal Khati Bel kuch gungunati

ghar ke bahar pe ek gamle mein samayi hui
jab koi gujre to woh apna sar jhukati hui..

HumTum


arre wah bohot  khoobsurat likha humtum ji!!  :D
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2005, 05:13:06 PM »
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Zindagi ke ped ka shingar yaadon ke patte hai,
Koi yaha pe harre to koi yaha pe sukhe hai,

Waqt ke mausam ka samna to karta hai ek ek patta,
Kaun tootega, kaun rahega, yeh to janta hai Uppaarwala,

Majbori ki fizayen kuch patton ke saath le jati hai,
Aur ek majboot ped ko ek khali jagha de jati hai,

Pakadna chahata hai ped apne patton ko, jo udh rahe hai hawaon me,
Par tood nahin pata kudrat ke niyomo ko, jo pade hai zanzeer ki tara uske paon me,

Apne gum bhoola kar sab ko chaon deta hai jo,
Dekho iss tara khamoshi se mausam ke war ko seheta hai woh,

Aa gaya naya mausam, mil gaya naya patton ka khazana,
Phir dohorayega waqt, wohi bichadne ka purana fasana!!!


hmmmm    bahot  khoob  meena......wonderful  yaara........too good.....nikki......hum  tum...........excellent  reply.....
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2005, 05:22:22 PM »
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Zindagi ke ped ka shingar yaadon ke patte hai,
Koi yaha pe harre to koi yaha pe sukhe hai,

Waqt ke mausam ka samna to karta hai ek ek patta,
Kaun tootega, kaun rahega, yeh to janta hai Uppaarwala,

Majbori ki fizayen kuch patton ke saath le jati hai,
Aur ek majboot ped ko ek khali jagha de jati hai,

Pakadna chahata hai ped apne patton ko, jo udh rahe hai hawaon me,
Par tood nahin pata kudrat ke niyomo ko, jo pade hai zanzeer ki tara uske paon me,

Apne gum bhoola kar sab ko chaon deta hai jo,
Dekho iss tara khamoshi se mausam ke war ko seheta hai woh,

Aa gaya naya mausam, mil gaya naya patton ka khazana,
Phir dohorayega waqt, wohi bichadne ka purana fasana!!!


hmmmm    bahot  khoob  meena......wonderful  yaara........too good.....nikki......hum  tum...........excellent  reply.....


than u waheed!
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2005, 05:16:06 PM »
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wah meena sis,kya baat hai,very nice.

too good nikki sis Winking and excellent reply humtum.
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2005, 05:18:52 PM »
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shukriya.....ji........shukriya................

 :D
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2005, 10:29:05 PM »
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Aankh se aansu na bahe aisi kaha kismat hamari,
rehkar bhi mahsuus na ho aisi hai mohabbat hamari.
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2005, 12:22:47 AM »
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Zindagi ke ped ka shingar yaadon ke patte hai,
Koi yaha pe harre to koi yaha pe sukhe hai,

Waqt ke mausam ka samna to karta hai ek ek patta,
Kaun tootega, kaun rahega, yeh to janta hai Uppaarwala,

Majbori ki fizayen kuch patton ke saath le jati hai,
Aur ek majboot ped ko ek khali jagha de jati hai,

Pakadna chahata hai ped apne patton ko, jo udh rahe hai hawaon me,
Par tood nahin pata kudrat ke niyomo ko, jo pade hai zanzeer ki tara uske paon me,

Apne gum bhoola kar sab ko chaon deta hai jo,
Dekho iss tara khamoshi se mausam ke war ko seheta hai woh,

Aa gaya naya mausam, mil gaya naya patton ka khazana,
Phir dohorayega waqt, wohi bichadne ka purana fasana!!!

Wah Meena... Bohat hi khoob.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 24, 2005, 12:43:30 AM »
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Aik baat kahoon Agar suntey ho ?
Tum Mujh ko achey lagtey ho

Kuch chanchal se , kuch chup chup se
kuch pagal pagal lagtey ho

hain chahney waaley aur buhut
par tum mein hai aik baat buhut.............
Tum apney apney lagtey ho

Aik baat kahoon Agar suntey ho ?
Tum Mujh ko achey lagtey ho

Yeh baat baat pe kho jaana
kuch kehtey kehtey ruk jaana

yeh kiss uljhan mein rehtey ho....?
Kiya baat hai hum se keh daalo

Aik baat kahoon Agar suntey ho ?
Tum Mujh ko achey lagtey ho
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2005, 03:12:29 PM »
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thank u aryaan ji.....and gud one naveed...............

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2005, 03:21:10 PM »
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Shukriya Nikki , Waheed n Nidhi ji ............................. :wink:
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