ek raja tha ek rani thi.. aur unki ek kahaani thi.. charan..

by lovely_charan on February 17, 2013, 03:13:01 PM
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yeh ek chhoti si koshish hai ek kahaani kehne ki.. mere dimag mein raja rani ki kahaniyan ghumti rehti hain aksar.. socha ki unme se ek apke sath bhi baant saku  kahin kuch kami reh gayi ho toh mujhe bataane ka kasht karein.. dhanyawaad..  


ek raja tha ek rani thi.. aur unki ek kahaani thi..
ek mehal tha.. aur uski majboot deewarein thi..

har din sair par jate toh sapno mein kho jate the..
sainikon ki toli thi ek badi.. jo bahut toofani thi..

ek kami thi, dono santaan prem se wanchit the..
rajya tha samraddha.. unki duniya veerani thi..

kayi jap-tap-pooja-path kiye.. tab wardan mila..
kali khilegi baag mein.. yeh uski nishaani thi..

phool khila jo neela  toh, unko putri ka pyar mila..
neelkamal tha naam.. jiski duniya abhi anjaani thi..

neelkamal jab badi huyi.. swayamvar tyaar hua..
kayi rajkumar aaye the.. jinki buddhi aajmani thi..

ek teer tha kamaan mein..aur ek di gayi kalam..
ek rahasya tha chhupa.. jiski gutthi suljhani thi

kehti thi,raat na hone paye..dil na khone paye..
neelkamal ki paheli.. jaane kya ajab kahaani thi..

bas ek pehar ka waqt hai..aur dil uska sakht hai..
ek kavita likh sake jo.. usi ke sang biyaahi jani thi..

dhanush-kamaan sambhale jo rajkumar aye the..
un rajveeron se kahan koi kavita likhi jaani thi..

ek rajkunwar..kulshreshtha..kalam uthayi thi jisne..  
aur neelkamal ko prem-patrika likh di apni jubaani thi..

bas wahin khatm ho gayi pareeksha.. woh dono ek huye.
neelkamal ko war mila woh jiski har taan mastaani thi..
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2013, 03:20:59 PM »
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bahut acha kahani hai charan jee.. i loved it. Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2013, 03:25:07 PM »
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thank you sooooooooo much suman ji Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2013, 04:09:26 PM »
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very nice very impresive
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2013, 04:33:26 PM »
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bahut shukriya aapka sahil ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2013, 04:55:00 PM »
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mai aapki lekhni se bht impress ho chuka hun Charan ji
bht achi kavitayen lkhti h aap
ye kahani bhi bht sundar hai
bht saari subhkamnaye aapko
likhte rahie
aate rahie
khus rahie
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2013, 06:33:33 PM »
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Gorgeous,,,,
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2013, 06:39:37 PM »
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thank you so much sarfira ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2013, 06:40:11 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on February 17, 2013, 06:33:33 PM
Gorgeous,,,,[/color]
thanks a lot ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2013, 12:45:02 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2013, 03:38:39 AM »
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bahut khoobsoorat
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2013, 04:12:32 AM »
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nicely said
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2013, 04:42:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Loved ur story charan ji very much. bahut bahut khoob. aapko dher saari daad.
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2013, 06:48:46 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Lovely ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2013, 04:16:16 PM »
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thank you soo much nand ji, saini sir, prasad ji, aqsh ji and hriday ji Usual Smile

aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya Usual Smile
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