Ek ret ka mahal banaya tha.....Premdeep

by premdeep on November 25, 2013, 03:51:55 PM
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Ek ret ka mahal banaya tha kudrat me tha so toot gaya
Sagar ki leheron sa tha wo aage tha peeche chut gaya

Jaane pehchane chehron par anjaani si kyun shirkat hai
Begaanon ki is mehfil mein apno se nata chut gaya

Sangdil si is duniya mein ek saathi tha ek humdam tha
kismat ki saazish ke chalte ab wo bhi humse ruth gaya

khwaboon ne jaal bichaye the ehsaason ne lalchaya tha
Kuch pal chahat ke dekar wo baaki sab khushiyan loot gaya

Dil ab apna mitti ka hai jab chaha jisne tod diya
Pyala ek tha hum saaki ka kismat sa wo bhi phut gaya

Chahat ki mehfil me tum bhi ek jaam laga lena yaaron
Mehfil ka khaak bigadta hai jo ek pyala tumse tut gaya
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2013, 07:23:54 PM »
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waah waah bohut hi khoob
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2013, 08:07:11 PM »
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Bahut khoooooooob premdeep ji... achchi koshish rahi... dheron daaaaaaaaad...
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