"" ek sachhh ""

by nirala on March 03, 2011, 06:14:54 PM
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bahut se deshpremi dekhe hai mene YO pr.jinhe apne desh ki burai karna bahut pasand hai--aise logo ke post parhkar mujhe hamesha bahut gussa aata hai.
unn dekhbhakton ke lie kuch likhne ka mann hua aise hi toota foota sa 2 line--
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ragon me behta ye Khoon, khoon nahi paani hai
nahi isme pahle si rawaani hai

dusron ki kya baat karen nir
hame to apni MAA ki hi ashmat lootaani hai
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mera manna hai--desh ki burai par wahi sawaal uthaye jisne kabhi koi chota sa bhi bhrast kaam na kiya ho
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thanx
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2011, 06:47:38 PM »
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Niralji... I totally agree with you .... hum hi khudd apney desh ki burayi kartey hai ... auroh sey kya gila karey ....
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2011, 07:55:27 PM »
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Hmm I kind of agree Nirala dost..

Meri view yeh hai kay ager desh main burai hai, jo kay
har desh main hoti hai, toh uss par likhne main burai kaisi..
akhir jo sach hai wohi likh rahe ho..

Haan apki akhri line bilkul sahi hai..Sirf baatein mat karo,
kam karke batao..!

Khush rahiye..!
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