-----/// Ek sawaal meri maa se ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 11, 2013, 02:06:57 AM
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apno ko aur apnaa  banaanaa tujhse seekhaa
gairon  ko  bhi  apnaanaa bas tujhse seekhaa
tujhse jaanaa  maine muskaan ki  sahi keemat
rote huye ko hasaanaa  maine tujhse seekhaa

teri  hi  ungliyaan  pakad ke  chalnaa  seekhaa
haan sab se pehle maine maa kehnaa seekhaa
tujhse  hi  seekhaa  har  dastoor  duniyaa kaa
maine tujhse  hi  to dard ko  sehnaa  seekhaa


haan maa, bas yahi wajah hai ki main har dard ko seh lungi, uuff tak naa karungi, tu ne sikhaaya thaa bachpan se ab tak ki sasural hi ladki kaa asli ghar hota hai, mujhe yaad hai maa...

magar tu hi bataa....


kyun mujhe hi tujhse duur jaanaa padaa
kyun mujhe hi kisi aur ke ghar aanaa padaa
kyaa kuch galti hui thi maa mujhse kabhi
kyun mujhe hi sab kuch bhulaanaa padaa

woh pyaar teraa, woh dulaar papaa kaa
woh bhaiyaa se baat baat pe jhagadnaa
har baat pe us kaa roothnaa, meraa manaanaa
naa maane woh mujhse to meraa aansoo bahaanaa

woh chhoti chhoti yaadein mere bachpan ki
woh chhoti chhoti baatein tum sab ki
kuch nahi bhooli main, mujhe sab yaad hai
woh din jab tu mere saath thi, mujhe yaad hai

aaj main duur, bahut duur hoon tujhse
kuch naye logon ke saath, naye ghar mein
jaanti hoon tu yahi kahegi ki mujhe yahi rehnaa hai
jaanti hoon main maa, main teri koi baat bhooli nahi

teraa ghar chhod main aa chuki hoon sadaa ke liye
magar ek sawaal tujh se rahegaa meraa hameshaa
main bhi to teri utni hi pyaari hoon naa jitnaa bhaiyaa hai
to kyun fark hai itnaa hum dono mein ki
woh shaadi kar ke bhaabi ko ghar le aayaa
meri shaadi hui to mujhe hi tujhse duur jaanaa padaa

kyaa paapaa jhoot kehte the ki main unko zyaadaa pyaari hoon
agar woh sach kehte the to aaj main unse itni dur kyun hoon
jin ke saath khoobsoorat bees baras beete meri zindagi ke
kyaa galti hui mujh se jo main unhi se aaj itni dur hoon

bataa naa maa, mere is sawaal kaa jawaab de naa
bas ek yahi sawaal hai meraa tujh se maa
mere is sawaal kaa jawaab de naa...



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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2013, 04:15:55 AM »
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BAHUT DARD BAHRI DAASTAN HAI LEKIN SACH HAI, AAPNE BILKUL SAHI KAHA HRIDAY JI..........
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2013, 07:55:31 AM »
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Kya Baat Kaha Aapne Super....... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2013, 11:59:42 AM »
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Wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2013, 02:26:24 PM »
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bahot bahot bahot khoooooob..........pyari rachna hai...hriday jii..
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2013, 02:41:41 PM »
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so heart touching kapil god bless u
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2013, 03:28:18 PM »
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Hryday Jee Aadaab... !


Kia baat hai janab bahut gehre aur khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne...

Kafi khoob kalaam rahi... ahsaasoN meiN gehraai bhi khoob hai janab..
Is kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2013, 04:04:37 PM »
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Very very nice...
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2013, 04:11:13 PM »
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wah wah,  Applause Applause emotionally charged tearyeyed
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2013, 01:41:23 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai hriday jee..ek beti ke dard ko bahut umda tarike se ujagar karti apki ye peshkash bahut umda hai..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2013, 01:45:59 AM »
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kya kahun main tujhse meri bitiya..
main bhi to ek beti thi kabhi
yehi sawaal kai saal pehle maine bhi
apni maa baba se kiye the kabhi

kyun jana hai mujhe tumse dur maa
kyun jana hai baba ki nazro se dur
kyun rehna hai kisi agir ke ghar me
jab hai mera apna itna pyaar bhara ghar

kuch na bol pai thi pyaari maa meri
baba ki khamoshi bhi jawab kya deti
yehi to pratha chali aai hai sadiyon se
jana hota hi hai beti ko paraye ghar
maa baap ka ghar aur pyaar chhodkar

meri laado  na mujhse kar ye sawaal
na milega tujhe mujhse koi jawaab
jis jawaab ko aaj tak koi bhi na de paaya
uss sawaal ko tu apne hi andar daba


shaayad yahi jawab .. hoga har maa baap ka dil ji...... aapne fir wo sene yaad dila diya mujhe... meri bidaai ka.... thnx alot ji....  love4 love4 love4 love4 love4
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2013, 01:50:38 AM »
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Bahut Khub Hariday Ji Aur Kasak Ji.. Aap Dono Ki Likhi Poem Lajwab Hain.. Mere Dil Se Dhero Badhaiya.. Aisi Hi Marmsparshi Kavitaye Aage Bhi Padhne Ko Milengi Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2013, 01:51:58 AM »
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thnx rishi
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«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2013, 01:51:51 PM »
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superb
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2013, 12:54:19 PM »
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koshish ki hai maine kuch hadd tak us dard ko samajhne ki, poori tarhaa to main samajh bhi nahi saktaa, unkaa dard to woh hi samajh sakte hain, main aapkaa tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa kartaa hoon jo aapne mere is koshish ko waqt diyaa padhaa aur pasand kiyaa....!!!


BAHUT DARD BAHRI DAASTAN HAI LEKIN SACH HAI, AAPNE BILKUL SAHI KAHA HRIDAY JI..........
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