ek svapna

by Tuhina on February 02, 2013, 07:49:29 AM
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EK  RAAT  SVAPNA  ME  DEKHA  MAINE  ,   EK   GHAR  .........                
JISKI  DIVAREN  SFATIK  KI  MOTIYON  BHANTI,  
SHVET  KANTI  SE  JAGMAG  THIN ,  
JISKE  AANGAN  ME  POORI  AAKASHGANGA  THI  KHEL  RAHI .............                              

JISKE  DVAAR  KI  DEHLIJ  PE  BICHI  HUI  THI  ,
PEELE  PHOOLON  KI  PANKHUDIYAN  ,  
MAANO  SVARGLOK  KE  SABHI  DEV  VAHAN,  
KAR  GAYE  HON  AARADHANA.....      

MAI  SAMAJH  NA  PAI  KAHAN  HUN  MAI,  
KI  TABHI  GHAR  KA  KIVAD  KHOL  KOI  BAHAR  NIKALA,  
MAINE  DEKHA , EK  MANAV  THA  JISKE  MUKH  PAR,  
ASEEM  PRASANNATA  AUR  ANKHON  ME  AVISMARNIYA  THI  SHANTI .......        

MAINE  POOCHA  JAKAR  USASE ,
YE  KHOOBSOORATI  KI  PARAKASHTHA  CHARON  ORE KYUN  BIKHARI  HUI HAI .......?  
VO  BOLA   ishvar  ka  aashirvad  hai  sab ,  
mere  ghar  aaj  chaand  si  beti  hui  hai ......  
    
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2013, 07:53:45 AM »
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bahut acha swapna dekha aapne Tuhina jee...

Aap is shayari ko Miscellenious section mein likhna tha...
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2013, 04:28:15 PM »
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EK  RAAT  SVAPNA  ME  DEKHA  MAINE  ,   EK   GHAR  ........
JISKI  DIVAREN  SFATIK  KI  MOTIYON  BHANTI,  SHVET  KANTI  SE  JAGMAG  THIN ,  
JISKE  AANGAN  ME  POORI  AAKASHGANGA  THI  KHEL  RAHI ..........
JISKE  DVAAR  KI  DEHLIJ  PE  BICHI  HUI  THI  , PEELE  PHOOLON  KI  PANKHUDIYAN
MAANO  SVARGLOK  KE  SABHI  DEV  VAHAN,   KAR  GAYE  HON  AARADHANA.....
MAI  SAMAJH  NA  PAI  KAHAN  HUN  MAI,  
KI  TABHI  GHAR  KA  KIVAD  KHOL  KOI  BAHAR  NIKALA,  
MAINE  DEKHA , EK  MANAV  THA  JISKE  MUKH  PAR,  
ASEEM  PRASANNATA  AUR  ANKHON  ME  AVISMARNIYA  THI  SHANTI .......        
MAINE  POOCHA  JAKAR  USASE ,
YE  KHOOBSOORATI  KI  PARAKASHTHA  CHARON  ORE KYUN  BIKHARI  HUI HAI .......?    
VO  BOLA   ishvar  ka  aashirvad  hai  sab ,  
mere  ghar  aaj  chaand  si  beti  hui  hai ......      
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2013, 05:07:14 PM »
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ati uttam
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2013, 06:22:10 PM »
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bahut  bahut  shukriya , ambalika jee
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2013, 07:04:38 PM »
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Tuhinaa Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH jee kia kahne.. badi hi prashansniya kavitaa kahi hai
behad upatmat rachnatmak aur uddeshpurn.. Usual Smile

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kijiye... Usual Smile

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Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2013, 02:05:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2013, 04:11:15 AM »
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shukriya  parvaaz  ji ........
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2013, 04:12:52 AM »
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shukriya  parwaaz  ji ,   saini  sahab  ..... Shukriya.....
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2013, 05:55:21 AM »
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Waah Tuhina sahiba
kya hi khoob ar khubsurat kavish ki hai aapne

gazab ke ehsaas hain ar ek sandesh bhi Usual Smile
aapki kavtaon ka wait karne lage hum to
dili daad kubul karen
likhte rahen
aate rahen

Han Parwaaz bro ki baato pr gaur kariega

khus rahie
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2013, 07:07:01 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2013, 07:29:39 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2013, 09:24:11 AM »
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shukriya sarfira ji  , nand  ji  .......
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2013, 05:07:56 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob,tuhina ji.
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DIFFERENT N NICE Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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