Ek Talash........ (Sona):Miscellaneous Shayri

neelgold

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Kuch likhna chathi hoon magar alfaz hi nahi milte
Kuch kehna chathi hoon to kya karoon jazbaat hi nahi milte
Aah ke bethe hai kab se teri mehfil main
Sab ko dekha tume magar
Hume hi tumari nazron ke voh sugaat nahi milte

Doondte rehe har jagah usse par voh kahi nahi mila
Jo hum dekhna chathe hai voh nazare nahi milte
Kuch berang si ho gaye yeh jindgani meri
Kuch rang bharna chathe hai par voh sitare hi nahi milte
Tanha bethe hai akele ho ke is jahan main hum
tanhayi door kar sake jo hamari
Kyon aise voh kinare hi nahi milte

.....Sona.....


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madhuwesh

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2010, 11:59:20 PM »

Wow Neel ji ,bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko bayaan kiya aapne.mindblowing creation.excellent.aapke naam bahut achi lagti hai,Sona.keep it up. icon_salut


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cara

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 02:46:13 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI NEELGOLD JI......

TUM BIN YE ZINDAGI IK ZINDA LAASH HAI
KE AAJA AAJ BHI TERA HI "EK TALASH HAI"..


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neelgold

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 02:51:05 AM »

Madhu ji 1st of all wc bak ... really gud 2 c u ....

Thanks for ur compliments.... Really feeling gud 2 cu bak ...

Quote from: madhuwesh on September 22, 2010, 11:59:20 PM

Wow Neel ji ,bahut khoobsurti se apne ehsaaso ko bayaan kiya aapne.mindblowing creation.excellent.aapke naam bahut achi lagti hai,Sona.keep it up. icon_salut


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neelgold

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2010, 02:52:32 AM »

WAH! Cara ji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Katal karte ho aur ilzaam bi nahi lete .......

mind blowing yaar

THanks

Quote from: cara on September 23, 2010, 02:46:13 AM

WAH KYA BAAT HAI NEELGOLD JI......

TUM BIN YE ZINDAGI IK ZINDA LAASH HAI
KE AAJA AAJ BHI TERA HI "EK TALASH HAI"..


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dead heart

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2010, 09:23:31 AM »

Neel Dost, bahaut bahaut khoob..Bahaut acha likha hai.. Applause


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Fivester

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2010, 09:25:21 AM »

Nice hai


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thinkhattk

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2010, 10:19:26 AM »

its really heart touching neel ji....

Clapping Smiley


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2010, 10:25:15 AM »

kya bat he neelgold jii...keher dha diya jiii apne..ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi..

katra katra hote dil ko jajbaat kahan milege
ankhon me hoga pani jaroor magar ashq kahan milege~


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KOYAL46

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2010, 11:36:39 AM »

Mind blowing...Sona-di...bahut khoobsurat bhaav aur shabdo ka gathan....daad kabool farmaiye jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Applause

Kuch rang bharna chahti hu par wo rango k indra-dhanush nahi milte
Durr kar sake jo hammari tanhaayee voh humnawaaz hume Q nahi milte

Wah Neel-di kya aashar hai aapke....

Quote from: neelgold on September 22, 2010, 11:51:45 PM

.....Sona.....


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riyaz106

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2010, 12:30:54 PM »

Wah bahot khooh Neel ji. Bahut sundar poem likhi hai aapne.


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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2010, 01:44:35 PM »

Main kuch nahi kahunga siwaaye is ek shabd ke... "KAMAAL"...!!!

ek din aake tumse kuch is tarha hum mil jaayenge,
ki baagon me phool gulaab k fir se khil jaayenge,

mehfil k har rang aake tumse is tarha mil jaayenge,
ki dil ke tumhaare armaa fir se machal jaayenge,

itne rang bhar denge hum aake tumhaari zindagi me,
ki tumhaare jeewan ke sab rang satrangi ban jaayenge,

na jaayenge tab ek pal ke liye bhi hum tumse duur,
tab hamaari saanse tumhaare saanso se mil jaayenge,

gaayenge hum har geet tab bas saath ek dusre ke,
aur hamaare har ek shabd tab ghazal ban jaayenge....


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neelgold

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2010, 07:49:13 PM »

Rahim bhai ... thanx a lot !!!!!!!!!!

BHut bhut shukriya ji

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 23, 2010, 09:23:31 AM

Neel Dost, bahaut bahaut khoob..Bahaut acha likha hai.. Applause


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neelgold

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2010, 07:49:49 PM »

Thanx..fivester

Quote from: Fivester on September 23, 2010, 09:25:21 AM

Nice hai


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neelgold

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Re: Ek Talash........ (Sona)

«Reply #14 on: September 23, 2010, 07:50:31 PM »

Thanx TKK

Quote from: thinkhattk on September 23, 2010, 10:19:26 AM

its really heart touching neel ji....

Clapping Smiley


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