Ek Talash........ (Sona)

by neelgold on September 22, 2010, 11:51:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 23, 2010, 07:55:53 PM »
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Maar hi dala Abhi ...
Kya baat hai .......

Reply dene ki choti si khosish

Ashqo ki baat hi kuch aur hai
haar haal main chale ate hai
Apne bi saath chod jaye jaha
yeh vaha bi saath nibha jate hai

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 23, 2010, 10:25:15 AM
kya bat he neelgold jii...keher dha diya jiii apne..ek chhoti si koshish hamari bhi..


katra katra hote dil ko jajbaat kahan milege
ankhon me hoga pani jaroor magar ashq kahan milege~
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«Reply #16 on: September 23, 2010, 07:58:19 PM »
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Thanks a lot Koyal

yaar itna tym nikla voh hi bhut hai & thnx a lot for ur very very gud compliments...

Yaar prob to vohi hai ........ Q nahi milta ?

kya karain ?

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 23, 2010, 11:36:39 AM
Mind blowing...Sona-di...bahut khoobsurat bhaav aur shabdo ka gathan....daad kabool farmaiye jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kuch rang bharna chahti hu par wo rango k indra-dhanush nahi milte
Durr kar sake jo hammari tanhaayee voh humnawaaz hume Q nahi milte

Wah Neel-di kya aashar hai aapke....
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«Reply #17 on: September 23, 2010, 07:58:45 PM »
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Thanks riyaz

Quote from: riyaz106 on September 23, 2010, 12:30:54 PM
Wah bahot khooh Neel ji. Bahut sundar poem likhi hai aapne.
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«Reply #18 on: September 23, 2010, 08:13:06 PM »
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Kapil Kapil kapil .....

Vah kya baat hai ji .... Yaar tumara Kamal to kehr da gaya ...

Aur kya likha hai .... muze tumari aise reply ke reply nahi aate .tum to aaj kal  kuch aur rang main range ho ...

fir bi kuch try karti hoon dekhte hai kya banta hai ..par apne andaaz main

Har baar ankh  main aye pani ko hum ashq nahi kehte
Hoton pe aye har muskaan ko hum hansi nahi kehte
Milane ko to hazron log milte hai is jindagi main
Magar har mile shaqs ko hum dost nahi kehte

..............SONA...............



Quote from: klaskar on September 23, 2010, 01:44:35 PM
Main kuch nahi kahunga siwaaye is ek shabd ke... "KAMAAL"...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


ek din aake tumse kuch is tarha hum mil jaayenge,
ki baagon me phool gulaab k fir se khil jaayenge,

mehfil k har rang aake tumse is tarha mil jaayenge,
ki dil ke tumhaare armaa fir se machal jaayenge,

itne rang bhar denge hum aake tumhaari zindagi me,
ki tumhaare jeewan ke sab rang satrangi ban jaayenge,

na jaayenge tab ek pal ke liye bhi hum tumse duur,
tab hamaari saanse tumhaare saanso se mil jaayenge,

gaayenge hum har geet tab bas saath ek dusre ke,
aur hamaare har ek shabd tab ghazal ban jaayenge....
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«Reply #19 on: September 23, 2010, 08:34:23 PM »
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thank you so so so so so much.... aapne itna saara taarif kar diya ki kya kahun... haan aapko mere jaisa likhna nahi aata par aap jo likhte hain kuch khaas hi hai aur jaisa bhi hai bas kamaal hai....ek dum mast mast...

kuch kuch aadatein hamaari bhi aap jaisi hi hain,
par aap to sabse alag hain par hum jaisi hi hain,
yun to hum har kisi se yun khulke dosti nahi karte,
aap se ki hai humne kyun ki aap apno jaisi hi hain...
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«Reply #20 on: September 23, 2010, 08:42:23 PM »
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VAh ji vah kya baat hai ...

Cnt control my hansi ......lol...

yeh baat hai to

Meri har khosish kyon tum nakam kar jate ho
Main kehna chahti hoon kuch
Aur tum kuch aur hi byaan kar jate ho
Quote from: klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:34:23 PM
thank you so so so so so much.... aapne itna saara taarif kar diya ki kya kahun... haan aapko mere jaisa likhna nahi aata par aap jo likhte hain kuch khaas hi hai aur jaisa bhi hai bas kamaal hai....ek dum mast mast...

kuch kuch aadatein hamaari bhi aap jaisi hi hain,
par aap to sabse alag hain par hum jaisi hi hain,
yun to hum har kisi se yun khulke dosti nahi karte,
aap se ki hai humne kyun ki aap apno jaisi hi hain...
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«Reply #21 on: September 23, 2010, 08:51:30 PM »
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heheheheeh... kya karein hamaari aadat hi kuch aisi hai...

humein achcha lagta hai aapko confuse karna,
kuch chaaho aap aur hum chaahe kuch aur karwaana,
sochoge agar aap be matlab frastu hone ki baat,
humko ata hai aapke tension ko duur karna,....
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«Reply #22 on: September 23, 2010, 08:56:07 PM »
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Aree aise koi baat nahi .... hum itni jaldi tension main nahi aate

Yeh bharian kuch aur hai
Voh sitre kuch aur hai
Talash hai hume jiski
Voh nazare kuch aur hai


Quote from: klaskar on September 23, 2010, 08:51:30 PM
heheheheeh... kya karein hamaari aadat hi kuch aisi hai...

humein achcha lagta hai aapko confuse karna,
kuch chaaho aap aur hum chaahe kuch aur karwaana,
sochoge agar aap be matlab frastu hone ki baat,
humko ata hai aapke tension ko duur karna,....
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«Reply #23 on: September 24, 2010, 06:25:39 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on September 23, 2010, 07:55:53 PM
Maar hi dala Abhi ...
Kya baat hai .......

Reply dene ki choti si khosish

Ashqo ki baat hi kuch aur hai
haar haal main chale ate hai
Apne bi saath chod jaye jaha
yeh vaha bi saath nibha jate hai

kya bat he ji eisi koshish he to anjaam kaisa hoga~
ljiye kuchh ham bhi koshish karen~

aansu ka kya he
kahin bhi a jata hai
bas naam badal jata he
dukh ho to dard warna
khushi ki duhai de jata he~
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«Reply #24 on: September 24, 2010, 07:43:26 AM »
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bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Neel ji

Bahoot Khoob Kapil ji... !!!
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«Reply #25 on: September 24, 2010, 02:50:59 PM »
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Wah ji wah .... Bhut khoob .......

Hum bi kuch kahe kya....

Yeh ashq katra katra youn hi behte rehe raat bhar
Ek tere anne ki umeed se Hum jagte rehe raat bhar.......

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 24, 2010, 06:25:39 AM
kya bat he ji eisi koshish he to anjaam kaisa hoga~
ljiye kuchh ham bhi koshish karen~

aansu ka kya he
kahin bhi a jata hai
bas naam badal jata he
dukh ho to dard warna
khushi ki duhai de jata he~
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«Reply #26 on: September 24, 2010, 02:52:13 PM »
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SHukriya sophi ji .....

Quote from: Sophi on September 24, 2010, 07:43:26 AM
bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Neel ji

Bahoot Khoob Kapil ji... !!!
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«Reply #27 on: September 24, 2010, 09:35:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Divya ji...!!!

Quote from: Sophi on September 24, 2010, 07:43:26 AM
bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Neel ji

Bahoot Khoob Kapil ji... !!!
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«Reply #28 on: September 25, 2010, 06:12:44 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on September 24, 2010, 02:50:59 PM

Wah ji wah .... Bhut khoob .......

Hum bi kuch kahe kya....

Yeh ashq katra katra youn hi behte rehe raat bhar
Ek tere anne ki umeed se Hum jagte rehe raat bhar.......


wahh...ab kahuga nahi likhuga pesh hee...

dard garm he ashq ko ankhon me rakhkar kya hoga
behne jane do ise shayad behkar hi thanda hoga~
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«Reply #29 on: September 25, 2010, 07:31:31 PM »
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Gud 1

Ashq agr youn behte rehe to sailab aah jayega
Bachna bi chaega agr tu par fir bi tu ismain doob hi jayenga

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 25, 2010, 06:12:44 AM
wahh...ab kahuga nahi likhuga pesh hee...

dard garm he ashq ko ankhon me rakhkar kya hoga
behne jane do ise shayad behkar hi thanda hoga~
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