-----/// Ek teraa deewaanaa hai ///----- Hriday

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ek  teraa  deewaanaa   hai, tere dar  par  aaye  baithaa  hai
ek  tere  deedaar  ke   khaatir  jo  aas  lagaaye  baithaa  hai

kabhi  fursat  miley  to  aake dekh jaanaa is  deewaane  ko
jo  ab   bhi  teri  tasveer  ko  seene  se  lagaaye  baitha  hai

tere aane  se  roshani  hogi  uski  andheri  is  duniyaa  mein
is  aas  mein  woh  paagal  har  diyaa  bujhaaye baithaa hai

neend mein doobi aankhein uski  kabse  hain  soyi   hi  nahi
tere  aane  ki  aas  mein , woh  nazrein jamaaye  baithaa hai

sangi   saathi  bahut  hain  uske , rishton   ki  hai  kami nahi
tujhe  apnaane  ke  liye  har  rishtaa  bhulaaye  baithaa  hai

na sonaa  na chaandi maangaa , rupaya paisa maangaa nahi
bas  teri  mohabbat   paane  ko , jholi  failaaye  baithaa  hai


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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2013, 07:31:33 PM »
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wow very nice
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very verynice hriday jee.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2013, 08:01:35 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2013, 09:07:31 PM »
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 Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking

neend mein doobi aankhein uski  kabse  hain  soyi   hi  nahi
tere  aane  ki  aas  mein , woh  nazrein jamaaye  baithaa hai

 NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa

lo aagai ab bolo ... kya baitha hai baitha hai laga rakhi hai chalo ab kuch aur kaam karo.......
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2013, 11:14:38 PM »
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Hmmmmm. achchi peshkash hriday ji. bahut achche ehsaas se saji hai aapki yeh rachna. dheroooooooooon daaad..
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 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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Hriday jee bahut hi badhiya peshkash hai..happy9
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Bahut khoob Kapil jee.
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ek  teraa  deewaanaa   hai, tere dar  par  aaye  baithaa  hai
ek  tere  deedaar  ke   khaatir  jo  aas  lagaaye  baithaa  hai

kabhi  fursat  miley  to  aake dekh jaanaa is  deewaane  ko
jo  ab   bhi  teri  tasveer  ko  seene  se  lagaaye  baitha  hai

tere aane  se  roshani  hogi  uski  andheri  is  duniyaa  mein
is  aas  mein  woh  paagal  har  diyaa  bujhaaye baithaa hai

neend mein doobi aankhein uski  kabse  hain  soyi   hi  nahi
tere  aane  ki  aas  mein , woh  nazrein jamaaye  baithaa hai

sangi   saathi  bahut  hain  uske , rishton   ki  hai  kami nahi
tujhe  apnaane  ke  liye  har  rishtaa  bhulaaye  baithaa  hai

na sonaa  na chaandi maangaa , rupaya paisa maangaa nahi
bas  teri  mohabbat   paane  ko , jholi  failaaye  baithaa  hai


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tumhaari haalat pe taras to aa raha hai per kya kaoon nahin aa sakti tum isi tarah likhte raho koi to aa jaaye ga tumhaara dard sun kar......!
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2013, 01:27:14 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2013, 01:21:32 PM »
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