----- /// Ek Tere Aa Jaane Se /// ----- klaskar

by klaskar on July 28, 2010, 12:12:12 AM
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hone laga hai khudpe aetbaar sa ek tere aa jaane se,
chhaane laga hai kuch khumaar sa ek tere aa jaane se,

barso se banjar thi ye bhoomi, khila na ek phool kabhi,
aaj yahaan khili hain bahaarein ek tere aa jaane se,

barso se jo sukhe the baadal, aaj wo baadal baras rahe hain,
usi baarish se mere aansoo bhi dhul gaye ek tere aa jane se,

toofaan me tinko ki tarha bikhar gaya tha main bhi kabhi,
unhi tinko ko fir main jod rahaaa hoon ek tere aa jaane se,

har taraf khaamoshi thi yahaan, chidiyon ki bhi kuk nahi thi,
aaj shor ke saath naach rahe hain mor ek tere aa jaane se,

tanhaa tha main bheed me bhi, sangi na koi saathi tha,
mil gaya hai saara jahaan mujhe aaj ek tere aa jaane se,

dhadkano ko ye shikayat thi ki dhadak rahe the meri marzi bina,
dhadkane bhi meri aaj jhoom rahi hain ek tere aa jaane se,

saanson ko bhi shikayat thi ki unme koi mehek nahi thi,
saansen bhi aaj kuch mehek rahe hain ek tere a jaane se,

tere saath se badhke kuch nahi, isse jyada ab kya main kahun,
maine zindagi ki paribhaasha ko jaana ek tere aa jaane se,

kalam fir khud se chalne lagi hai ek tere aa jaane se,
aaj firse main likhne laga hoon ek tere aa jaane se...


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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2010, 01:29:07 AM »
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lagta hai bhai sahab ko ishq hogaya hai.... Congrats! Many many well wishes and duas ur way!
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2010, 01:53:09 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 28, 2010, 12:12:12 AM

hone laga hai khudpe aetbaar sa ek tere aa jaane se,
chhaane laga hai kuch khumaar sa ek tere aa jaane se,

barso se banjar thi ye bhoomi, khila na ek phool kabhi,
aaj yahaan khili hain bahaarein ek tere aa jaane se,

barso se jo sukhe the baadal, aaj wo baadal baras rahe hain,
usi baarish se mere aansoo bhi dhul gaye ek tere aa jane se,

toofaan me tinko ki tarha bikhar gaya tha main bhi kabhi,
unhi tinko ko fir main jod rahaaa hoon ek tere aa jaane se,

har taraf khaamoshi thi yahaan, chidiyon ki bhi kuk nahi thi,
aaj shor ke saath naach rahe hain mor ek tere aa jaane se,

tanhaa tha main bheed me bhi, sangi na koi saathi tha,
mil gaya hai saara jahaan mujhe aaj ek tere aa jaane se,

dhadkano ko ye shikayat thi ki dhadak rahe the meri marzi bina,
dhadkane bhi meri aaj jhoom rahi hain ek tere aa jaane se,

saanson ko bhi shikayat thi ki unme koi mehek nahi thi,
saansen bhi aaj kuch mehek rahe hain ek tere a jaane se,

tere saath se badhke kuch nahi, isse jyada ab kya main kahun,
maine zindagi ki paribhaasha ko jaana ek tere aa jaane se,

kalam fir khud se chalne lagi hai ek tere aa jaane se,
aaj firse main likhne laga hoon ek tere aa jaane se...


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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2010, 04:07:46 AM »
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hayeeeee.......aisa kaun mil gaya aapko Klaskar ji....jo man jhum utha hai aapka aur naach rahe hain mayurrr.... love4 love4
chalo jo bhi mili humko to fayda ho gaya..uske aa jane se....hume to aapki mast mast rachnayen padhne mil gai hain.... hello2 hello2
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2010, 04:26:44 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2010, 08:15:17 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kapilji..

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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2010, 01:15:43 PM »
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shukriya Sidra ji... par aisa kuch nahi hai.. ye to bas meri imagination hai... bas khayaal dil me aate rahe aur main likhta gaya...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2010, 01:16:19 PM »
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Shukriya Veena ji... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2010, 01:18:55 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aur abhi aisa koi bhi nahi mila hai... ye to bas khayali pulao hai jo maine aap logon ke liye pakaya hai... aur aisa mehsoos ho raha hai mujhe ki aapko ye pulao bahut swaadisht laga....aur aapki duwaon ke liye main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

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hayeeeee.......aisa kaun mil gaya aapko Klaskar ji....jo man jhum utha hai aapka aur naach rahe hain mayurrr.... love4 love4
chalo jo bhi mili humko to fayda ho gaya..uske aa jane se....hume to aapki mast mast rachnayen padhne mil gai hain.... hello2 hello2
thnxxxxxx use aur aapko jo aapne ye itni pyari poem hum sabke sath share ki....ye mithi mithi jhumti feelings yunhi bani rahe aapke dil me yehi dua karenge ji.....god bless u and that aane wali . icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2010, 01:19:27 PM »
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Thank u so much Devangi ji...!!!

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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2010, 01:19:56 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kapilji..

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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2010, 09:14:24 PM »
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Not fair ...... muze batya b nahi.......

happy 4 u vnevr i feel happiness in ur poems .......

but hi khoobbbbbbb
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«Reply #12 on: July 30, 2010, 08:38:12 PM »
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Aisa kuch nahi hai Neel ji bataane layak... this is only an imagination... nothing else... and thank you so much for reading my poem and appreciating it... !!!

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Not fair ...... muze batya b nahi.......

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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2010, 02:32:41 AM »
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    Bahut khoobsoorat khayalaat pesh kiy hai Kapil ji. hello2 hello2
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bahut khoob kapil ji bahut hi umda peshaksh hai...loved it alot...keep writing..take cre...

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