----- /// Ek Tere Aa Jaane Se /// ----- klaskar

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«Reply #15 on: August 04, 2010, 12:41:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji... kya baat hai aajkal aap bahut kam dikhte hain Yo pe... Koi naraazgi hai kya humse...!!! Usual Smile

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«Reply #16 on: August 04, 2010, 12:44:21 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... aap hi logo se inspired hoke kuch kuch likh leta hoon... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

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sukhey hothon pe fir muskaan hai aaj ek tere aa jaane se,
aankhon me bhi kai khwaab hain aaj ek tere aa jaane se,
ek doobti hui kashti thi zindagi meri tere na hone se,
us kashti ko bhi aaj saahil mil gaya ek tere aa jaane se...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 01, 2010, 12:07:10 PM
bahut khoob kapil ji bahut hi umda peshaksh hai...loved it alot...keep writing..take cre...


Mujhe mil gyi hai merri shakhsiyat terre ajane se,
sirrf mhbt hai har su na hai koi kefiyat terre ajane se,
saal mahino jise dhundhti rahi mein dar-b-dar,
aaj mujhe mil gyi hai vo qurbat terre ajane se.........
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«Reply #17 on: August 07, 2010, 03:24:38 AM »
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 Hai-hai! naraaj or main! itni jhutthi-jhuthhi khabrein kahan se mil rahi hai aapko. Bilkul bekaar news channel hai ji aapka. Wo to baat ye hai k pichhle kuch waqt se thoda busy chal rahi hoon to Yo par waqt nahi de paati ya aati bhi hoon to jaldi me 1-2 poem padh k hi comment likh paati hoon. Par koi baat nahi aap yun hi achha-2 likhein hum baad me course cover kar lenge. Khush rahein.
Quote from: klaskar on August 04, 2010, 12:41:56 AM
bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji... kya baat hai aajkal aap bahut kam dikhte hain Yo pe... Koi naraazgi hai kya humse...!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: August 07, 2010, 06:31:54 PM »
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yahi aapki chulbuli aur natkhat natkhat baatein mujhe aapko dhundne ke liye majboor karti hain... upar se hamara ye news channel koshish karta hai ki jo uske dil me hai wo janta ko na bataaye par fir bhi bata hi deta hai... chaliye koi baat nahi... par aap time nikaal ke yahaan kabhi kabhi darshan de diya karein... shukriya deviji.....!!!

Quote from: tamanna.pt on August 07, 2010, 03:24:38 AM
Hai-hai! naraaj or main! itni jhutthi-jhuthhi khabrein kahan se mil rahi hai aapko. Bilkul bekaar news channel hai ji aapka. Wo to baat ye hai k pichhle kuch waqt se thoda busy chal rahi hoon to Yo par waqt nahi de paati ya aati bhi hoon to jaldi me 1-2 poem padh k hi comment likh paati hoon. Par koi baat nahi aap yun hi achha-2 likhein hum baad me course cover kar lenge. Khush rahein.
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«Reply #19 on: August 07, 2010, 06:49:58 PM »
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Kamaal ka likhte hai aap
Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #20 on: August 07, 2010, 06:51:24 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji... bas aap sab ka likha padh padh ke hi kuch kuch likh lete hain... bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aapko hamari kavita itni pasand aayi... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

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Kamaal ka likhte hai aap
Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #21 on: August 19, 2010, 12:13:06 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 04, 2010, 12:44:21 AM
Bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... aap hi logo se inspired hoke kuch kuch likh leta hoon... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

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sukhey hothon pe fir muskaan hai aaj ek tere aa jaane se,
aankhon me bhi kai khwaab hain aaj ek tere aa jaane se,
ek doobti hui kashti thi zindagi meri tere na hone se,
us kashti ko bhi aaj saahil mil gaya ek tere aa jaane se...


shukriya ji..


Subah lagti hai bechain jab tu nhi hota,
raate ko takti hai nain jab tu nhi hota,
merre har pal ko zarurat rehti hai terri..
andhero si hoti hai rain jab tu nhi hota.........
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«Reply #22 on: August 19, 2010, 12:40:24 PM »
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tere na hone se meri zindagi veerani lagti hai,
tere aa jaane se har cheez suhaani lagti hai,
tujhse hi judi hai mere zindagi ki har kadi,
tu na ho to poori duniya begaani lagti hai...
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«Reply #23 on: August 19, 2010, 06:33:26 PM »
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bahut khoob kapil ji...


Tassavur k har alam mein bus tu basa hai,
merre ankho k ujalo mein bus tu basa hai,
mhbt ki inteha tak tu hi tu hai sanam..
merri chaht k khayalo mein bus tu basa hai.........
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«Reply #24 on: August 19, 2010, 06:56:12 PM »
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Klaskar jee bahut achche aur mohak khayaal hai aapke..
Aur aapne likha bhi achcha hai mann moh liya aapki is kavita ne..
Jee Dil se daad...
Aur such hi kaha hai kisi ne uper ke Ishq ho gaya hai janab ko.. tongue3
Tab hi aise pulaav pakaya hai aapne... :D

Ek tip dete hai aapko...
Abhi kuch likheN to kisi song ki dhun per likhiyenga..
Aapke khayaaloN ko rawaani milengi... aur padhne meiN bhi
ek dum umdaa lageNge...

Khush rahiye...
Aise hi likhiye...
Keep smiling...
May God Bless You...Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: August 20, 2010, 02:17:30 AM »
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shukriya Geet ji... aur aapne bhi bahut pyaara likha hai... Clapping Smiley

tujhse judi hai mere saanso ki dor sajni,
khinchti hai jo mujhe bas teri or sajni,
tere ek khayaal se machal jaata hoon main,
tujh sang mohabbat ka hai ye asar sajni...

Quote from: brokenbyluv on August 19, 2010, 06:33:26 PM
bahut khoob kapil ji...


Tassavur k har alam mein bus tu basa hai,
merre ankho k ujalo mein bus tu basa hai,
mhbt ki inteha tak tu hi tu hai sanam..
merri chaht k khayalo mein bus tu basa hai.........
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«Reply #26 on: August 20, 2010, 02:19:33 AM »
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shukriya Parwaaz ji padh ke pasand karne ke liye aur khoobsurat sa sujhaaw dene ke liye...!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 19, 2010, 06:56:12 PM

Klaskar jee bahut achche aur mohak khayaal hai aapke..
Aur aapne likha bhi achcha hai mann moh liya aapki is kavita ne..
Jee Dil se daad...
Aur such hi kaha hai kisi ne uper ke Ishq ho gaya hai janab ko.. tongue3
Tab hi aise pulaav pakaya hai aapne... :D

Ek tip dete hai aapko...
Abhi kuch likheN to kisi song ki dhun per likhiyenga..
Aapke khayaaloN ko rawaani milengi... aur padhne meiN bhi
ek dum umdaa lageNge...

Khush rahiye...
Aise hi likhiye...
Keep smiling...
May God Bless You...Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: August 20, 2010, 07:08:19 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 20, 2010, 02:17:30 AM
shukriya Geet ji... aur aapne bhi bahut pyaara likha hai... Clapping Smiley

tujhse judi hai mere saanso ki dor sajni,
khinchti hai jo mujhe bas teri or sajni,
tere ek khayaal se machal jaata hoon main,
tujh sang mohabbat ka hai ye asar sajni...

shukriya ji aur ek aur behetreen reply dia hai apne...


Ye kis ada se tu chhu gaya merre iss dil ko,
na chain hai na hi hai aram merre iss dil ko,
tujhe pana chahti hu har surat main ab tou..
siwa terre aur koi na bhaye naam merre iss dil ko.........
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«Reply #28 on: August 20, 2010, 07:44:00 PM »
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shukriya ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

tumse milke mera bhi dil bekaraar hai,
har lamha bas tumhaara hi intezaar hai,
har chehre me dikhta hai chehra tumhaara,
kya is jahaan me isi ka naam pyaar hai...
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«Reply #29 on: August 21, 2010, 06:31:40 PM »
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Arre waah ji waah..


Jab koi chehra dil ko naa bhaye,
har lamha kisi ek hi ki yad sataye,
isi ehsas ko kehte hai pyar ae dost..
jab saare bandhan tod dil bus usi ka ho jaye.........
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