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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2013, 10:22:18 AM » |
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2013, 10:33:28 AM » |
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Thanks saini g
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2013, 10:37:14 AM » |
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Sath agar de kalam to mumkin har baat keh du
kyu badal gayi BHAWNA apne har haalat keh du
keh du q zamane ki bhawna ko ab parwaah nhi
dard mei bhi chipi hoti hai khushi har wo aasaar keh du
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2013, 11:12:08 AM » |
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wah wah bahut badhiya
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2013, 11:25:53 AM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2013, 12:01:39 PM » |
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Thnks nand bahu g
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2013, 12:02:24 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2013, 12:10:03 PM » |
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bahut bahut khoob..
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2013, 03:56:21 PM » |
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baht khoob Bhawna ji achi pakad hai aapki shayri pe aate raha kijie aur aapka Tile of Post bht kamaal ka hai  shayd aapki Kalam aapse ye kehna chahe--- ! mujhse na yun fariyaad kar zakhm dil ke tu yaad kar chal padunga mai aap hi gar fir se tu aaghaaz kar ! khus rahie aate rahie |
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2013, 04:02:47 PM » |
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vaah sarfira ji , bahut khoob....
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2013, 04:12:20 PM » |
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LIKHNA KUCH CHAAHU LIKH KUCH OR JAATA HAI
BTA MERI KALM TERA IRADA KYA HAI
KOI NAYI BAaT NAYE JAZBAAT LIKH DE
KAISE HAI HAALAT HAR HAALAT LIKH DE
"bhawna" SAMBHAL GAYI HAI ZINDGI KI THOKRE KHAAKAR
E KALAM KUCH NAYE AB KHUSHIYON K SAAZ LIKH DE
Kya matlaa hai.. Itna asaan itna sada .. Magar... Aisa koe likhna b chahe to likh na paye .. .... Kaise hain halaat... Har halaat likh de.. Bahut achy bahut sahi... Mashq zari rakhen ... Koe baat to hai aapme |
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2013, 03:01:28 PM » |
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Thnks a lot all of you
bohut samay k baad kuch likha tha aap sabko pasand aaya acha lga.......
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on eTI community..
