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«Reply #15 on: September 04, 2010, 06:22:20 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on September 04, 2010, 06:05:48 PM

wah wah wah wah
kaya baat hai, jitani tareef ki jaaye kam... ek ek line dard mai doobi ek ek shabd poori tarah se arth ko samjhata hua... bahoot khoob.. good work, wonderful creation!!!

I Am Sooooooooooooooooooooooo Happy To see U..

Kaash Mere paas Woh Lafz hote jin lafzon mein main aapko Yakeen dilsa sakta ke aapko ayhan dekhkar main kitna khush hua hoon..

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much Dear For Appreciating!!!

plz yuhi yoindia mein aaya kare..


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Re: Faasle "Khwaish"

«Reply #16 on: September 05, 2010, 09:27:35 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 02, 2010, 06:12:21 PM

Quote from: khwaish on September 02, 2010, 04:16:59 PM

Kuch Yaadein Aisi hai jinhe Main Dil mein Mehfoos Rakhta Hoon
Hardum har Pal Teri yaad Dilaate Hai Faasle...

Des-Pardes mein Naa jaane Kitne Apne Bichde Hai!!!
Do Roti Ki Bhook Mein Naa Jaane Kya-Kya Karwaate Hai Faasl

Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Above line are too Good.... Bahut achche aur sahiN khayaal ko achcha bayaaN kiya hai aapne... Koshish achchi rahi daad janab....

And Kask jee aapke bhi last do sher achche hai.....
Jisme se pahele wala bahut jyada achcha hai so deep..

Keep writting....
Keep posting......
Keep smiling......

Teh Dil Se Shukriya parwaaz Ji..

Aapne Apna waqt Diya bahut bahut Shukriya


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Re: Faasle "Khwaish"

«Reply #17 on: September 15, 2010, 11:58:23 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 02, 2010, 07:35:26 PM

Khwaish Dost, yeh kaisa topic cherr diya apne.,Faasle..
Faaslon ki ehmiat aur dard sirf woh jante hai jo kareeb bhi reh chuke aur dhooriyan bhi payi hai..
Apne bahaut acha likha hai..Dil se daad kyun ki Rahim ne dil se parra iss nazm ko..kuch yaadein yaad agayi, ankhein bheeg gayi kyun ki rulate bahaut hai Faasle..!

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Bhai Rahim, Aapke Comments Ki Ek Aadat si ho gayi hai, jahan aapke comments nazar naa aye ho, dil maayus sa ho jaata hai..

bahut bahut shukriya yuhi saath dete rehne ka..


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«Reply #18 on: September 15, 2010, 02:50:09 PM »

Bohat Bohat Bohat khoob Khwaish ji...
kamaal likha hai aapne.......
kuch aisa jiski tareef main lafzon mein nahin kar sakti.....
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Re: Faasle "Khwaish"

«Reply #19 on: September 16, 2010, 04:28:30 PM »

Quote from: neelgold on September 02, 2010, 09:28:49 PM

Bhut hi khoobsoorat likha hai .........

Wah Wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bahut bahut Shukriya Neelji..


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Re: Faasle "Khwaish"

«Reply #20 on: September 19, 2010, 01:46:47 PM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on September 15, 2010, 02:50:09 PM

Bohat Bohat Bohat khoob Khwaish ji...
kamaal likha hai aapne.......
kuch aisa jiski tareef main lafzon mein nahin kar sakti.....
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Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much kashish ji..

bas yuhi saath dete rahiyega


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«Reply #21 on: September 19, 2010, 02:05:35 PM »

Waah Waah Waah waah Kya kahun.. Bahoot Waah Waah Nikal tareef mein..

Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Umda peshkash .. Applause


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Re: Faasle "Khwaish"

«Reply #22 on: September 26, 2010, 08:33:14 AM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on September 15, 2010, 02:50:09 PM

Bohat Bohat Bohat khoob Khwaish ji...
kamaal likha hai aapne.......
kuch aisa jiski tareef main lafzon mein nahin kar sakti.....
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Kashish Ji, Aapne Apna Keemti waqt Diya,Yehi bahut hai..

Hausle-afzaai ke liye teh dil se shukriya aapka


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Re: Faasle "Khwaish"

«Reply #23 on: March 04, 2011, 12:07:35 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on September 19, 2010, 02:05:35 PM

Waah Waah Waah waah Kya kahun.. Bahoot Waah Waah Nikal tareef mein..

Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Umda peshkash .. Applause

Thankyou Sooooooooo Much Sophi..Thanks a Ton For Appreciating!!


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Re: Faasle "Khwaish"

«Reply #24 on: December 10, 2015, 05:56:38 AM »

bahut khoob such mein dil ko chhoo gayi!!


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